Dying Embers..A SaJan SS...!!!Up.pg30(16/7) - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it =)) I love the way Gunjan gave answers to Shilpa =P Sur and SaJan bonding was adorable! =)) I'm sad that this FF is ending =(( will miss it 😔
continue soon with long update! =P
Edited by -BurningDesire- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar! fantastic update! par itne jaldi kyun band kar rahi hain! plz dnt do dat! plzzz and if u have made up ur mind den promise dat u'll come up wid new ss soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
love your part 15 and 16
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HSFA

Yehy. Me First wo bhi do dafa 🥳😆 Dekha how much I love u and ur updates.😉😳

First of all Hi Sweetheart 🤗
Such a long update. Very good u are improving 😆 Awww loved this SS so much and finally u are wrapping it up.
Coming to the update. As usual januable like our Sajan. Loved it to bits, First of all the very first scene. So touchy and emotional😭 For once I thought k arman has also made a comeback but no. Awww Arman is so supportive. Loved his dialouge especially the words " Tumhein Samrat acha lagata hai na aur mujhey tum samrat k saath bohat achi lagti ho". So sweet😳
The way Gunjan felt the rain drops in her hand and her smile on remembring the moments spent with Samrat. Ah so cute.
The Sajan scene OMG so adorable.⭐️😳 Their definition about life and how their life changed. So much realtiy and when Gunjan said:" Zindagi itni mushkil kyun hoti hai'. Awww loved her even more and Samrat's reply as well.Thei januable hug and watching the sky together
Sur awww. She is so cute just like her mother. Loved her antics. Surely she is the apple of her parent's eyes<3 😳
The following Sajan scene 🤪🤪It was so unpredictable but still so romantic. Samrat's whispering in her ears that'Chashmish my wife' and Gunjan's reaction. KAATIL!
When Samrat stopped she's my I was like no man.The way she stares at him ☺️
The song. It's one of my fav songs and it suited Sajan perfectly😳. Loved all their gestures during the song especially the Dupatta one.It reminded me of Sajan's confession.
But that Shilpa😡 hate her so much and I knew that she will turn out to be negative. Spolied the paln for Sajan Poor Sajan. But loved Samrat's reply to her. Acha kia.😆
The way Manvi teased Gunjan loved it so so much.😆 Mr and Mrs Shergill going for a date.☺️ Magical it would be<3<3
Gunjan is so innocent playing with her duppata in nervousness.😳
But u ended on a very bad note😡😆 I know abhi agey nahi parha but still...
Sajan ka dose jitna bhi ho its never enough and u know that.
When Samrat said bacho ki tarah barish enjoy karti ho it reminded me of Kisher<3😆 The way he said barish k liye itna excited bachpan mein hote thay,😳
All in all a very januable update<3
I hope u will enjoy my very long comment.😆 Kya karun wanted to explain everything about the update😳
Love ❤️
Urz Angel<3

OMG u know angel how much i love u lol
ahhh itna lamba reply awwiee i m so glad n happy on reading this long detailed comment..it made my day .. i actually read it twice ..hehe unbelievable itna acha laga lol...hugs..
arman wala scene is purey SS mein sab sey best hai merey lea coz of tumbin movie ka hai n that is my forever fav movie <3 merey favs kbhi change ni hotey na hehe..
Sajan hmesha hi intey januable hain k har scene un par perfect lagta hai...
Sur princess of my SS <3 <3
lol i was not writing that scene actually but it just came so perfectly that i was unable to deny it i rewrite da update to make everything else in sequence..n da song i dedicated to my bestie day before i wrote da update lol...its meant for sajan (for me for her😆)<3
hate shilpa :$ thank God i wraped it as soon as it was posible for me it was unbearable for me to write🥱
inocence made for gunjan <3
i ended bad note coz i update it next day jani😳 waiting for ur replied on next parts <3
dnt make me remember of kisher mjhey humsafar bhe likhna hai nooo :P

I enjyed i m dancing in joy lol thank you sho much dear <3
For this wonderful surpirse <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited on pg 40 😊
Edited by HSFA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSluvsSI

OMG u know angel how much i love u lol
ahhh itna lamba reply awwiee i m so glad n happy on reading this long detailed comment..it made my day .. i actually read it twice ..hehe unbelievable itna acha laga lol...hugs..
arman wala scene is purey SS mein sab sey best hai merey lea coz of tumbin movie ka hai n that is my forever fav movie <3 merey favs kbhi change ni hotey na hehe..
Sajan hmesha hi intey januable hain k har scene un par perfect lagta hai...
Sur princess of my SS <3 <3
lol i was not writing that scene actually but it just came so perfectly that i was unable to deny it i rewrite da update to make everything else in sequence..n da song i dedicated to my bestie day before i wrote da update lol...its meant for sajan (for me for her😆)<3
hate shilpa :$ thank God i wraped it as soon as it was posible for me it was unbearable for me to write🥱
inocence made for gunjan <3
i ended bad note coz i update it next day jani😳 waiting for ur replied on next parts <3
dnt make me remember of kisher mjhey humsafar bhe likhna hai nooo :P

I enjyed i m dancing in joy lol thank you sho much dear <3
For this wonderful surpirse <3

Awww Sweetheart <3 I know u love me a lot and same hereEmbarrassed This was not a surprise jani😆 but I am so glad that it made ur day and u consider it a surprise. Love u<3
Awwie I am very very happy k meri Sweetheart ko acha laga. Embarrassed I also read ur reply twice.😆
Awww Tum bin was a nice movie. I am sure special tha<3
True Sajan is the other name for januable.Embarrassed😉 Un par har scene hi perfect lagta hai aur hota bhi hai.Star
Yup that scene was the cutest indeed.<3 I am glad that u wrote it. Awww u had to write it againOuch but still it worked really well.
That's so sweeet of u to dedicate it to ur bestie<3 :) But am jealous of her Ouch😆😉 Hamesha beech main a jati hai lol. No no I know k she is a very nice girl and very imp for u :)
The song suited the scene.
Yup I know that ShilpaAngry is so so annoying na.
Yup I know. I have read them. Was eager to know the story😆
Hhahaha Humsafar hayyee. Hmmm likhna to hai aur mujhey bhi likhna hai.😆
Awwwie u liked it so much<3 Hugs and kisses for my Sweetheart <3🤗🤗❤️
Agar yeh parh kar yeh haal hai to baki comments bhi a rahe hain jani<3😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
14,15,16 all parts are awesomeee
plz update SiLent LoVe
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update, SaJan bonding written beautifully. And their little princess Sur, such a cutie pie. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
reply for the second last part

ahem ahem

sabse pehle to i loved their i love you i love you wala game.. 🤣

and i love you kya ho gaya socha chance maar liya jaaye...

fir fir kya tha DO NOT DISTURB 🤣

superb fantastic romentic part yaar

lol no blush coz i have read more ahem ahem parts...
bt i smiled though whole part hahaha

precap *angry*

hope u will fulfill my with SOON ;)

Do cont soon

thnks for the pm
Radhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
reply for the last part

ahem ahem...
kya bolu samaj me nahi aa raha hai

ye matt samajna ki tune meri bolti bandh kardi hai 🤣

ye samajme nahi aa raha hai ki comment karna kaha se start karu...

aur abhi pta chala ki meine already 5 lines is comment me likh chuki hu 🤣

So funny naa :P

well well finally is update me meri wish fulfill ho gayi saali mere pati ke piche padi thi SLAP to padna hi chahiye tha...

mujhe to lapaga SLAP nahi SLAPS padenge sirf Chashmish hi kyu Samrat ki ek lagayega as
uski beti pe shout kiya tha bt its ok he is sweet lover boy naa.. hahaha

over all awesome finally sajan sur ki life se shilpa naam ka kida nikal gaya ab shanti se jee payenge bichare...

over all superb update

bas bas ab aur comment nahi karna mujhe.. agar itna hi likhne ka shoukh hota to mein apna FF na update karti LOL

Do cont

Thnks for the pm
love
Radhi

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