Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 4 pt 55 pg117 - Page 46

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
whom is she searching
is it the person who killed her parents
finally all know the truth
waiting for the next very eagerly
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Waiting bey jaldi dey na



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every1 knoes about maans feelings...waiting fr da next...
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Part 54



sameer sighed, "maan relax..she loves u..she loves u like anything..n now its ur responsibility to bring d happiness in her life.."

maan hugged him tight in brotherly manner n cried, "i love my geet...i love her..i vil give her all d happines..my geet.."

*****************

as dey broke out of d hug...

dadi announced in tears of happness, "i vil talk to geet about dis...i vil not let her play wid her emotions again.."

maan sighed, "nahi dadi maa.." catching every1 questionsing eyes..

"u all need to help me..geet aise nahi manegi..she vil alwz believe dat she is d reason for my n suzeil's break up..i dnt want dat feeling to get filled inside her..i want her to understand my true love for her..i want her to confess her love to me without any feeling of guilt..."

maan finished dejected in guilt..

dai maa hugged maan slowly, "im wid u beta..i want my bachhi to be happy.."

others too smiled and nodded in agrrment..

sam questioned, "so wats d plan.."

maan smirked, "jo jaisa chal raha hai ..waisa hi chalne do..ab jo bhi hoga..engagement ke waqt hi hoga...miss geet handa vil get d happiest shock of her life..."

d enthusiasm filled d atmosphere as dey had a high-5...

*************

maan n sameer stood by d window in maan's bedroom...

sameer sighed, "u r d luckiest person in d world to hav her love.."

maan smiled, "i do.."

sameer smiled back, "tune mujhe yahan kyu bulaya.."

maan put his hand on sameer's shoulder, "sameer..i need to talk sumthng about suzeil.."

sameer looked at him confused, " suzeil..kya huva usse.."

maan looked at sameer staright in his eyes, "sameer..suzeil is a sweetheart gal.."

and sameer understood wat maan meant by dat..

sighed, maan looked out of window, "i know maan..she was ur galfrnd..but she was n is my best frnd alwz..tujhe yaad hai lectures me hum dono milke tujhe kitna satate the.."

both giggled softly remembering d past..

maan smiled, "usse ek sathi ki jarurat hai..aur tujhe bhi.."

sameer smiled softly, "tu us danger zone se pyar karne ke liye bol raha hai.."

maan giggled, "agar suzeil ne sun liya na ke tune usse danger zone bola firse..teri jaan le legi.."

sameer insatntly looked around n sighed in relief..

maan smiled sincerely, "think about it.."

sameer shook his head n walked out of room..

he stopped at d door n turned..

"i will.."

wid dat he walked out leaving a happy n contended maan behind...

****************

SREWWZZZ...

d car stopped in sudden break and d handsome dev walked out in swift...

WAT D HELL

he felt d earth sliping out of his feet as he stared at d incredible palace type banglow in front of his eyes...



omg..ye hai uss geet ka ghar..par dad ne toh bola tha ke koi middle class gal hai..n hav no parents..den what d hell is dis...

when he had landed in delhi..he went to mansion but came to know dat all hav went to mumbai at geet's house..frustarted he had called his father n questioned wat to do next..his dad simply ordered him to go to mumbai n checke on dat middle class gal n her third class home..

not having other option, he took d address from nakul n came here..

n nw dis...

is dis her house..i mean banglow..i mean palace...

who is she exatcly..

rolling his eyes, he went in..d gurads had asked for his idendity..but den his informed being khurana and d guards let him in..as he pressed d bell for d 3rd time..

d door was banged open followed by a irritated voice..

"ye ghar ki bell hai..mandir ki ghati nahi..jo bajate hai chale ja rahe hai.."

sam put her hands on her waist as she looked at d stranger..

dev was 1st angry by d behaviour but her choice of words amused him..

he didn't spare her another look n started to walk in..

huh !! annoyed, sam raised her hands in front of him...

"oyye hello..me yahan dikh nahi rahi kya..ullu kahin ke..no1 ignores me u got dat.."

ohh really !! dev gave her looks of mock, "im no1.."

sam looked him annoyed n but den thought dat he could be sum client of geet..

calming herself, she eyes him, "ji aap akun.."

her calming herself so instantly confused dev, he sighed, "dev, dev singh khurana.."

WATT

dat was all sam could utter as she kept looking at him wid o-shaped mouth..

dev rolled his eyes, "now watt.."

sam supressed her shock behind, "dev..u mean..maan..dadi maa..i mean dev.."

wid dat, sam threw her arms around him..much too his shock and took him for a real tight, unwanted n annoying hug...

dev was shocked n annoyed for a second but den smirked n snaked his hands lustfully around her waist n squized her closer..

shocked wid his act, sam instantly pulled herself away but dev didn't let her...

"how dare u..leave me.."

dev looked at her..amused, "was i d one who asked for a hug.."

sam rolled her eyes n forcefully pulled herself away..

"oyye hello..i hugged u bcoz..i thought u recognised me.."

dev looked at her for a second, den cupped her cheeks into his palms n stared at her in concentration..finalling making a strange face. thinking if he hav ever kissed her b4..ir hav spend night wid her..he dn't remember so much faces..

he let out, "nah..i dnt remember..really..were u good in bed ??.."

dat was it..

a tight slap came across his cheek..

shocked, he looked upto d fuming gal..

"wat d.."

sam cut him, "u listen to me now..london jane ke baad..tumhara dimag puri tarag kharab ho gaya hai shayad..how dare u talk to me like dat..im sam..remember..delhi..handa house..sam.."

he was still in shock not understanding why she slapped him..but her words made his kind of realise dat he was in contact to kind of name in his childhood..

he smiled shamelessly, "sam is it..childhood me we were frnds kind of right..but why did u slap me.."

sam rolled her eyes n called dadi maa..

sam's shouts made every1 confuse and all were back in d hall..

maan n dadi maa were shocked to see dev..moving forward..dey had sum hugging sessions n all..

maan asked confused, "wat a pleasant surprise dev.."

dev smiled, "yup bro..surprise is it..so dadi maa..doesn't ur young pota looks damn hansum now.."

dadi maa smiled n patted his cheeks while other smiled..sam rolled her eyes..

suzeil smiled, "heyy dev.."

dev gave a cheeky smile, "hey beautifull.."

it was kind of normal suzeil to hear his cheeky lines as he hav been alwz like dis..but maan's no enthusiasm surprised ev a litle..but he let go of d matter for few time..

"btw ye ghar kiska..."

dev's words caught in his mouth as he actually gave a look to d house n want baffled beyond imgaineation..dis was indeed palace...who has managed to get a belong to dis house in mumbai..

sam smiled, "yes meri behen geet ka ghar hai.."

watt..dev was shocked again..he need to hav a talk wid dad..wat his dad has potrayed about dis gal..it all all beyond opposite..

dey had small group chat n finally engrossed in deir works..

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maan was worried beyond insanity..it was almost 7 in d evening n dere was no sign of geet..she had walked out of house at 2:30 n now it was 7..she ahd talked to dat caller dat she vil go to meet dem at 4..wish he could hav followed her..but he couldn't rick dong dat .n knowing geet..if she wouldn hav got to know dat..she wouldn hav made a fuss over it..he had asked a detective agency to follow geet's car but den dey had no clue where her car vanished in d mid..she seemed to vanhish ind a air like thin wind..

maan was going insane thinking where could be she..it was clear dat she was herself no in danger cas dat called seemed sum1 working under her..so obviously dat man vil not hurt geet..but whom dey were talkiing about..kisse dhund liya hai.. ?? whom was dey talking about ?? why would geet want sum1 unknown mad to get in her custody ?..were dey talking about dat ved ?? ..who is ved..he stll hav on idea..sam..yes sam must ne knowing..ohh god..damn he..couldn't he think of dis earlier..but geet..when she vil return..

but i thik..i should talk to sam b4 geet cums...if geet realised dat sam told me dis..sam vil get a scold ...d fact hurt him dat his geet didn't want him to know about her life..it snapped sumthing in his heart..d fact dat she was chutng on him..she was withdrawing hrself from him..or has already withdrawn..

not wanting to waste even a min...

he walked out of room...he was about to enter sam's room..

when he saw almost broken a lifeless geet walking in..her dejected n lifeless form scared him to death..wat could hav happened dere..dat she seemed so much lifeless...

he ket staring at her as she walked upstairs to her bedroom immune to entire world...

her broken form killed him within..d realisation dat he shouldn't hav left her alone ever..no even in d past nor 2day..she liked it or not.he should hav went wid her...he amde a mistake again..

d felt his heart choking in fear..is she alright..wat could hav happened dere..dat shattered her dis much..he need to know..he had to know..she need him at dis moment he knew it..n he vil dere for her..atleast dis time n now forever..

not thinking a word more.,he ran behind her..

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first me first 🥳

dev 😡

geet break down 😭

maan geet ke piche nahi ja sakta tha😡

nice update 😊
Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one
sam wid dev
maan wid geet
suziel wid sameer
hameer wid uttata


dev ka reaction saji tha palace dekh kr
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice
Sam n dev
Suzeil n sameer
Lovely
Amazing going mishty
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt
bt u left us wonderin wht happened 2 geet!
lotsa pairs in d makin.. dev n sam? sameer n suzeil!!
hopin 2 c maan support his geet!!
continue soon..
Edited by nats024 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme mindblowing
Dev ko mila kantappp
Hahahahahahaha
Bt wat hapn to geet

Dats gr8 sam n suzeil pair
Hmm nt bad

Lovd it to d core
Let se wat maan dos nxt

Thnx fr d updte
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome bt y did u ended on serious pt?
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago

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