Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 4 pt 55 pg117 - Page 53

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Superb!
I hope you have got something for Maan's dad as well.
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lovely and superb update..
i really feel bad for geet as she is struggling and wat has happened now..
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thnqq for d LIKES N COMMENTS

im stii disappointed..😕




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Part 55



he felt his heart choking in fear..is she alright ?..wat could hav happened dere..dat shattered her dis much..he need to know..he had to know..she need him at dis moment he knew it..n he vil dere for her..atleast dis time n now forever..

not a thinking a word more.he ran behind her..

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geet walked lifelessly in her room n fell on her knees..

lifeless tears rolled down from her eyes, as she let out a painfull..choking scream...


FLASHBAKCS

geet smiled bittery as she stared at d person who was all tied under a bright spotlight...

it was a bitter cry dan d smile..it seemed confusing..

d man cried, "plzz chhod do mujhe..mene kuchh nahi kiya..."

overall 15 people were surrounding dem...

deir leader came forward n slapped d man again...

geet didn't even blink her eyes while d man screamed in immense pain..

"mat maro mujhe...mene kuchh nahi kiya...meri biwi aur bachhi kahan hai ?.."

geet looked at him wid dark eyes

" dey r DEAD "

d man looked at her frightened to death...tears of fears continuously falling down his eyes..

"plzz unhe kuchh mat karna..wo dono kuchh nahi janti..is baare me..ya sab mene.."

his words caught in his mouth as geet's eyes turned darker..

geet gave her verdict..

"pura sach batao aur get along.."

d man started to cry in fear, "meri biwi aur bachhi ko kuchh mat karna.."

geet closed her eyes, " START "

d man shivered in fear n sumhow started..

"mera naam suresh hai..14 saal pehle ki baat hai..me mumbai me rehta tha..mera paas rozgari ke liye koi dhanda nahi tha..mene bahot mushkil se ek truck chalane ka kaam shuru kar diya...ek din mere saab ki dukan par ek aurat apne mard ke sath aayi thi...mujhe nahi pata wo log me kya baate huyi...par jab wo dono mere paas aaye...aur mujhe kahan ke wo mujhe ek kaam ke liye 10 lakh rupe denge..par mujhe wo kaam karte hi mumbai chhodkar jana hoga...me pehle bahot khush ho gaya..par jab unhone mujhe kaam bataya...to me dar gaya...mene mana kar diya...unhone dhamaki di ke agar mene kaam nahi kiya to wo mere saab se meri complain karke mujhe naukri se nikal denge...me bahot dar gaya tha...mere paas aur koi rasta nahi bacha tha.."

suresh stopped n started at geet wid fear...

she seemed cold n lifeless...

aftr a min..she looked at him again n he knew..he cnt stop in mid..

making worried face, suresh again started..

"mujhe bataya gaya ke mujhe ek high way ke paas tez truck chalani hai...aur samne se jo car aayegi MH XX eg XX XXX ...is car ko thokar marni hai...ye accident hi dikhna chahiye...aur caar ka sirf aage ka hissa damage hona chahiye...mene wohi kiya ho unhone kaha...mujhe laga tha sirf accident thoga...aur me chala jaunga...par jab accident huva...toh car me jo aurat thi wo wohi mar chuki thi...aur jo mard tha wo apni akhari sanse gin raha tha..."

his words trailed off in fear as he saw a dark tear rolling down from d eyes of d gal...

geet didn't even close her eyes..she wiped her tear..and suresh knew..he needed to continue..

"pichhe jo bachhi thi usse jyada chod nahi lagi thi...aur behosh ho gayi thi...isse pehle ke me un dono ko aspatal le jata...wahan par police aayi aur mujhe le gaye...fir wahan par kya huva...mujhe kuchh nahi pata...police station me mujhe pata chala ke wo mard bhi mar chuka hai...fir kuchh din baas case accident maan kar band ho gaya aur mujhe bail mil gayi...kyunki ye pata chala ke us car ke breaks fail the...aur meri usme koi galti nahi thi.."

"jab me bahar aaya...wo pati patni ne mujhe 10,00000 rupe de diye aur mujhe mumbai chhodne ke liye keh diya...me bahot dar gaya tha...isliye mene turant mumbai chhod rajstan me chala gaya..."

geet closed her eyes n inhaled sharply..trying hard to breath...d fact dat now she knew..how dey killed her parents..made her weak all of a sudden..she had thought she is strong gal n can listen dis..but now she realised just how wrong she was all d while..she is not strong..ohh god..damn..she is not stone hearted person..how can sum1 kill her parents like dis..how can sum1 destroy her fairy tale like dis..how can sum1 snatch her childhood..her parents like dis..just for money..money money n money..hell wid dis money..for god's sake.money in not everything...her parents meant her world to her...she was 5...just 5...why...just what wrong she hav ever done to get all dis..why her parents faced dis betrayel..

submitting all d pain n tears n her heart..she opened her cold eyes again n looked at d guards..

"keep him standing on d ice till d morning.."

d guards looked at her horrified while suresh's head started spinning in fear..

he asked frightened, "aap kaun ho.."

geet who was walking towrds d door..stopped n turned..

"us car me jo bachhi thi na.."

suresh waited for her next set of words..

geet let out..

"wo me hun.."

" GEET HANDA " n wid dat she walked out leaving d shocked suresh behind..

FLASHBACKS ENDS

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maan stopped on d door in shock when he saw her lifeless body on ground..he felt his sanity leaving him..he felt his breath chocking in his throat..he felt his heart bledding once again..he felt d painfull tears forming in his eyes..he felt d world once again diwing in him..he felt dead once again as he saw her lifeless on d floar...

like a possessed man, like a mad man, he ran in n thupped himself on his knees right behind her..

his heart cried out a painfull scream whe he felt her motionless..not evening recognizing his presence..

not knowing how to sooth her pain..not knowing hos to sooth his pain...

he pounced on her back, as he engulfed her into a painfull tight hug..snaking himself possessively around her..

it was den she broke into screams n crys..

she screamed like a mad woman..she screamed screazily..she cried creazily while maan cried along wid her..didn't let go of her at all...

she let her weight rest on him as she cried lifelessly...

he unconsciously sat back..taking her along wid him..till she sat in his lap, crying her heart out..

her each tear ripped his heart apart...

her each painfull scream ripped his soul apart...

he couldn't do anything to sooth..he hated d fact...

he engulfed her closer into his embrace as his tears kept rolling down...

he couldn't see her like dis..no not at all...there he was dyeing to see a glimpse of happiness on her face..and here his..mishty..his geetu..was crying so bittery...wat has she ever done to deserve dis..why cnt any1 let her happy..she deserved love n happiness..n all she gets in hurt n pain..why every1 on d earth is hell bent on hurting his geet..he hismelf too..he bloody himself too cnt take care of her..he is incapable to take care of her..damn wid him..d most undeserving person..who madly in love wid her..but still lacks to take care of her...

plzz jaan..plzz mishty..geet plzz...dis heart vil die if u vil cry more.plz stop baby..for my sake..plzz stop..give ur all d pains to me..fill ur life wid all my happiness...i can die 100th deaths watching u smile..but dis 1 damn life watching u cry is worse dan death...its bleeding inside me to watch u in pain..its ripping my already broken heart to see u so hurt deep in...plzz give me ur sorrow..plzz take my love n happiness..plzz kill me but be happy...

ohh god..what on d earth dey hav ever done..to get all dis hurt..

why cnt deir love can be a firytale..but deir fairytale already seems broken n shattared..

geet plzz give me 1 chance baby..i vil collected all dose shattared peices of ur heart n my heart n vil try n place dem again in deir places..i vil put d bandage on dem..though broken..but our live vil be fairytale..though wid bandages n medicines...but v vil mange to keep our emotions safe in dem..

plzz dnt cry..

plzz geetu...

his each request..each plead..each cry remained in his heart as it didn't reach her paining n bleeding heart..she cried dere lifeless while he cried for her...

" why dis happened to me only maan.." geet cried as she let out..

maan engulfed her tight into him, "no nothing..my geet is angel.."

geet snaked her hands around his waist as she hide her teary n painfull face into his neck, n cried bitterly, "no no..im not..im bad..dats why god punished me..dats why god let dose people take my mumma papaji away from me..im bad..very bad.."

placing kisses on her forehead again n again..to try n sooth her pain, he cried for her, "no geetu..u r not bad..ur maan vil punish dose people for hurting u..i promise u dat.."

she denied stubbornly as she cried into his embrace..her nails scratched his back as stried hard to control herself from dieing in dis pain, "why maan..why...kyu huva aisa..mumma..papaji.plzz unhe vapas lado...plzz maan.."

she cried like a baby while maan's heart felt dead wid her each other..

from where he vil bring dem..how couldn he tell her dat he cnt do dat for her..how could he hurt her again..

her brushed his fingers soothinly through her hairs as he made her look into his eyes, "me hun na tere liye..sirf tera maan..cum here.." he engulfed her so damn close into his arms n took her wrenching lips in his to sooth her pain away...

dey kissed each other as dey cired..

geet was so broken dat she couldn't even kiss him..she cried into his mouth like pleading him to hold her more close..to keep her safe into his arms..ohh how much she needed his love..she couldn't express him..she felt so lonely all of sudden dat she gave him full right to kiss her..he was her maan..her love...her everything..

he kissed her wid all his love..he licked n sucked onto her shivering lips again na again for mins or hrs till she felt her warm into his embrace...snaking her hands around his neck..she took herself more closer till she was clinging almost on his chest and he gave in her wish...

her tears rolled to her lips n went into his mouth..his lips tasted her tears n kissed her even more..wanting so badly to stop dose tears..

his lips urged her to open her mouth..so dat he could take her from dis painfull world to d world of deir love..to d world where his geet is d happiest..to d world of deir fairytale..

she opened her mouth and let him do dat...her heart seemed to beat again in his warmth and she knew..he was her undoing..even d lack of her parents..she cnt hav her parenets dat was d truth she long realised..but she needed him..even atleast be it a frnd..but she needed him to breath..she was understanding dis mp fact of her life..

deir lips tasted each others..deir tongues glued into each other...

picking her up in his arms, maan walked to d bed wid deir lips still glued into each other...

maan rested geet slowly on d bed but she didn't let go of him instead snaked her hands more tightly around his neck so dat he vil not be able to part away from..so dat he vil not able to go away from..she couldn't bear it..

d emotional turmoil inside her made her heart weak as she felt his urgent need to be dere wid her and give her his warmth and strenght...

maan felt her tight hold and he knew..she wanted him more dan anything...denying her was d last thing he could do...submitting to her, he rested himself on her, as he took her tightly in his embrace...she just gave in willingly like his shadow..people say..shadoe leaves us in darkness, least dey know, in darkness our shadow cums and hides inside us wid d fear of loosing us...just like dis shadow, geet hide herself inside him...like she was scared od d world..it was only his arms ..his embrace..his hold..dat she felt protective.he cocooned her close into his embrace while his lips never left hers...

a kiss turned into another and another and another and finally submtting delselves to a long kiss which seemed to last forver..

she slept into his embrace..feeling peace, warmth and love

while he remained awake almost entire night worried sick for his geet..checking in every 5 min if she was fine..dat she is not crying anymore...if she was feeling ok..if she was contended now...his baby heart just couldn't hav enough of his mishty..d thought dat she might get hurt again left him wide awake d entire night as he felt immune to d word sleep..

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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So heart feel to read...Geets pain...reached my heart tooo
But loveit when Maan to her geetu...take her pain ...so lovely...

very very touching part...

give ur all d pains to me..fill ur life wid all my happiness.
..i can die 100th deaths watching u smile.
.but dis 1 damn life watc
hing u cry is worse dan death...its bleeding inside me to watch u in pain..its ripping my already broken heart to see u so hurt deep in...plzz give me ur sorrow..plzz take my love n happiness..plzz kill me but
be happy...????...
he knew..she wanted him more dan anything...denying her was d
last thing he could do...submitting to her, he r
ested himself on
her, as he took her tightly in his embrace.
..she just gave in
willingly like his shadow..people say..shadoe leaves us in darkness,
least dey know, in darkness our shadow cums and hides inside us
wid d fear of loosing us...just like dis shadow, geet hide herself
inside him...like she was scared od d world..it was only his arms
..his embrace..his hold..dat she felt protective.he cocooned her
close into his embrace while his lips never left hers...


a kiss turned into another and another and another and finally

submtting delselves to a long kiss which seemed to last forver...

So so much loveling n touching line...realy love it...n cry must...mish.dorriya read karugi or cry nahi karugi aisa to nahi ho sakta...loveing it...
Edited by Mayamaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
really geet needs maan thsi tie more than anything
thank god that maan realised his love before this phase
now maan plz tell her that u love her
so that she could have ur love
plz maan don delay anymore
and punishe the people who has made ur geetu like this😭😭
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear... so geet came to no all dis... people are sooo mean n gready... atleast maan is with her dis tym...

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