AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 43

Posted: 11 years ago

#761

Read all your OS in a go!

Such mesmerizing concepts! 👏 Truly beautiful and flawless! 😳

Do write more and pls PM me! 😊

Love, ❤️

Mrina

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#762

awsm part.
Superb os.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#763

Such a beautiful os, ana.. Juz luv d way u present ur stories.. Too gud.. <3

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#764

Superb OS . Please do write more

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#765

how do u get such awesome ideas from anaaa

tusssi har vari chaaa jandeee hooo

tusssi v mast te os v bara mast s

maine boht maza aya parhne meee

armaaan ridhimmmaaa weree too cute. armaaan jee aap kb tk back k rehteee. hamari heroine hai hi inni sohniii

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Sameera

@sameera_12

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Ana!! this was too too too Good!!!
I just loved it to core!!
The concept, the idea, its execution! everything was perfect!! I can imagine the character walking infront of my eyes...
It was superb!! The whole arrange marriage thing and then the development of those lovely feelings...
The confession!!! Bohat awesome tha!!

Love you for this!! Keep writing more and more good stuff...😊

Will read Pyaar Kiya To Nibhaana now and then will comment there aswell!!!😊

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sjain

@sjain

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#767

So here I am finally commenting

HAHA punishing you is ultimate fun

So now that you have blackmailed me that you will reward me with new OS so I being poor reader is here to put my thoughts

Let me rewind and go back to the day I read it HEHE ..I was in some other land ..for few hours after reading this shot ..it was magical dude ^_^ absolutely gorgeous ..stupendous work ..the emotions you inserted in to your writing were touching I was in tears :') as soon as I read the line " Kaash kabhi un ke pyaar ki barish ho mujhe par" some thing like this ..It made me so emotional LOL <3 <3..Song added life to your writing ..Its made it even more beautiful ..It was one simple clean full of love story of Armaan Ridhhima ..thats what clicked for me <3..just romance deep emotions and passionate love I am flattered by your works I want everybody to read this it worth it ...keep it up <333333

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: Asiyamajeed
Sweet...cute...beautifull..nd amazng shot it was...😊

lovd it..❤️
Shilpa's believe on dat one day armaan wil open up his feelngs...armaan care...cncern...arsh simple nd sweet love story nd cnffessn was jst awsme...😊
Nd both rain sequences...😳

Beautifully pennd dwn dear...😊
thanx fr updating..

thank you so much dear...
am so happy u liked this os and loved this track...😃😳

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: SHWETAKASHLOVER
it was a beautiful os
the way they understood each other
just loved it

thank you so much shweta...
so happy u liked it😃

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: LoveArsh
Amazing os ana, loved it u have beautifully written their emotions, armaan apne past ke wajahse aage nhi badh rha tha par shona ne use hamesha samjha,really loved it alott ... :)

thank you dear
yup, understanding is a main pillar of a relationship...nothing could work better than that..
n shona was always the sensible one😳