AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Awesome update.
I loved it a lot.
I loved the way AR met for a proposal and them became friends.
Discussing heart breaks over a bowl of maggie was really nice.
I felt really bad for Armaan to see him in such a bad state.
The volleyball matches were wonderful and AR's trip to Goa was amazing.
Ridz was so cute in lying to Armaan for taking him to the prom.
I hated Radhika so much for her sudden entry.But I'm glad that Armaan rejected her and confessed his love.
This OS was beautiful.
You are a wonderful writer dear.

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love_arri

@love_arri

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Wow wow wow...
I am speechless yaar... I can't believe someone can write story like... It was a simple love story but sooo expressive... I am not finding words to describe it...
It was splendid yaar... U r a very very very brillient writer...
This was by far one of the best OS I have ever read...
Thank u so much for writting such a sweet story...
And that maggie wala scene was awesome...
I have no words yaar sachhi you r very beutifull writer...
Keep it up...

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jiyaa_m

@jiyaa_m

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

biggest os u ever write i think

awsome os awww maggie n break up topic such a cuteee i loved the way ridz supported armaan n goa trip awsome hayyy armaan n sea i wanna see n confession was cute too

keep it up

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Thanks for the pm and loved the update :-)

No I'm not that stupid to write a few words for the comment, I didn't want to get shouted at for disobeying such a brilliant writers wish :p but getting back to the os I loved the song choice and also the friendship between AR before they actually became a couple. I also liked the way Riddhima was with him when his crush didn't follow the same feelings and also the way Armaan didn't accept Radhika but confessed to Riddhima. I so wish I could see Armaan (KSG) at the beach in Goa 😳

Nikki <3