AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148

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Sameera

@sameera_12

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#501

You know what??? i started reading this over a bowl of maggie and by the time i finished eating it, i read the hear break discussion scene over maggie😆😆

I simply loved their first meeting, Both Shilpa and Armaan's character and the start of this OS...
I found this story line very cute and just adored Shilpa to core!!!!

Her two heart breaks and his one!!! Then their discussion over a bowl maggie🤣, Picnic, sports, help in studies, everything was described so beautifully!!!

Then the way he stopped Radhika and confessed her about his feeling!!! awww that was too cute!!!!😳
The kissing scene was hawt yaar!!!

All in all a very good and adorable one shot from your side once again!!!
Keep writing more!!! I just love your writing style😊

Love,
Sameera
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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

loved the os yara. It ws different from ur before os's
so loved it moreee.

Radika ko v end me akal ayi. Shukr kro late ayi warna arsh ka kya hotaaa...
Heart break over maggi wala scene mast tha...
Bt sitting wd friends nd eating maggi nd talking is simply awsome yaaarrr...

Sorry yar final exam hai tou iss se bara comment nahi likh skti

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

and ana jee. Some ppl r nt good in expressing so they write short comment. Kyu bachon ko dara rhi ho

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jannat4ever

@jannat4ever

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

wowww...loved this OS yar..funny, romantic, simple everything i guess...
another amazing os by you...
loved Riddhima's character..her dialogues were superb
the sweet friendship between AR then love bonding, chemistry was actually out of this world...
yaro ka yaar ...hehheehe...good job...
and their confession was toh mind blowing...do write more..
thanx for d pm
tk cr..

Love you
Jannat

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Priya kashian

@LoveArsh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Amazing oneshot such a cute love story aww armaan love someone else but glad he got to know radhika was not his love only shona was his love n u didnt pm me ana do pm me next tym...tc :)

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

wow... thats such a beautiful story..
so simple ..so pure..
really loved it..
pls do write more..

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

I was going to start reading and damn...it's lengthy :)

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

This has to be your beat work till now :)
It was so cute and and like mills and boons and most importantly believable... :)
I love the care free Shilpa and the beat acene has to be the Maggie scene...because I love Maggie :p

Thanks for the pm

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

its awesome

loved it

i really liked the maggie scene

everything is so awesome

loved it

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#510

I just read OS 11
First of all shilpa— a village girl...it was totally unexpected
And I liked the two girls so sweet to her bhabhi and Armaan was so understanding :)
A beautiful OS

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