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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

Beautifully written. Liked the short little spaz attack Arnav had, cause his sister is so important to him but then he realises that so is Khushi now :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Amazing..update soon .. x x

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Awww, The Last Scene Was Beautiful :) They Slept Peacefully In Each Other Arms 😍

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: nayika
Beautifully written. Liked the short little spaz attack Arnav had, cause his sister is so important to him but then he realises that so is Khushi now :)

Thank you soo much! I'm glad you noticed that. I wanted to show the hesitation. He really cannot bring tears in his Di's eyes but his Di isn't the only responsibility now and he understands that :)

I'm happy you liked it :)

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ayushma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

...tears... it was so beautiful.. the reality finally caught up with arnav, and he's forced to look them in the eye... i loved the ending... beautifully written

Edited by aycma98 - 13 years ago

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LoLo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Very good, as usual, what else can I say? I feel like I'm being redundant. But I am not trying to be. You're just too good!!

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: bobeeta
Amazing..update soon .. x x

Thanks a lot! I have a bunch of work to finish so I'll update as soon as time allows :)

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: saiqa4eva
plain awesome

Awww thank you for the "awesome" compliment :)

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
Awww, The Last Scene Was Beautiful :) They Slept Peacefully In Each Other Arms 😍

I'm glad you liked the upspoken comfort between the two because of the love!

Thank you for liking this chapter :)

Oh and THANK you for your jadoo ki jhappi that give every single time without fail. I feel as though my Di has given me a hug for my work. & trust me when I say that, it means a lot to me <3

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illusiveworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: aycma98
...tears... it was so beautiful.. the reality finally caught up with arnav, and he's forced to look them in the eye... i loved the ending... beautifully written

Aww, I'm so happy you found it good :)

Yes, reality did indeed catch up with him. Up to now, he only looked at one side of things. But today, he had to chose between his Di and his Khushi. Nobody told him to choose but he had to and he is on the right path :)

I'm glad the ending was nice and you liked it!

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