ArHi FF - Every heart desires - Thread 1 - Page 42

Originally posted by: s2612

this is perfect parallel story to the real one...you have made a good job in portraying the complex ASR and lovely khushi...keep it flowing ...update soon!!!

Originally posted by: SNR7

You are right - it was a painful update but I gues u r rite; it had to be done. But I loved da 'yellowness' 😆! I hope Anjali takes the truth of da snake she's married well...

My name is there,,.. Yay.. N yes u should continue the story. I Realli loved it..

Originally posted by: arshi314

My name is there,,.. Yay.. N yes u should continue the story. I Realli loved it..

All the best for your report!!!!! <3 A little late, I know... :P

Originally posted by: HopelessCase

All the best for your report!!!!! <3 A little late, I know... :P

Originally posted by: angelofillusion

Awww thank youuu <3 I'm almost done - just 10 more pages to go! & then prepare my ppt on it + memorize everything to present to everyone! Jeez!

But thank you Anu for rememberinggg <3

Originally posted by: HopelessCase

Yayyy!! You must have submitted by now already! Oh gosh, I know what you're talking abt. Presentation preparations are so tiresome!! All the besttt Rachuu!!

Hey Rachita :) Brilliant updates!!! Sorry for the late comment .. couldn't get time to write coz of exams :/

Khushi, please don't leave without giving me one chance... Everyone gets one chance; why not me? Khushi, I'm fading... please come back. Please bring me back. I can't go on without you... Khushi, give me one chance to tell you how I feel, what I feel... Khushi, let me make you feel loved, let me hold you in my arms, let me correct every mistake... Khushi, I've lived a lie my whole life and for the first time, I want to find the truth. Please let me find it... please come back to me. There is no Arnav without Khushi. There is so much to say Khushi... so much to explain. I don't have the right words; I never did. But if this means anything to your heart, my heart yearns for you... Khushi let our heartbeats become one... let us become one... please come back... please don't leave me... Khushi, you know how they say soul mates exist? That's us Khushi, that's us... please help me accept that. There's nothing I want to do more than hold onto you... forever.

^^ I LOVE LOVE LOVE these words!! They come directly from Arnav's heart .. no pretence, no ego .. just reflecting the pain, helplessness, guilt, anguish that he feels inside himself. You know, sometimes you read something and it just touches your heart? This is one of them! Its absolutely beautifully written!

I LOVE the Khushi in your FF … she's childish and immature, but also the one who'll rationally think when she needs to. More than what Arnav did, its his lack of trust that hurt her I think … that's what I feel will happen in show too .. because Khushi is someone who can forgive easily .. like she did in your FF too .. and she is also someone who greatly values trust .. but when that trust itself is broken she finds it hard to regain that trust .. but here she does give him a second chance, because in her heart she knows that no matter what, she still loves him .. and she doesn't want to let go.

I like how she tells him to tell Anjali everything … no matter what her condition, she deserves to know. Infact, it may just be worse if she knows only after the baby is born .. but I also like Arnav's concern for his Di…because she is after all, all that he has had the last many years before Khushi.. and he doesn't want to break her heart, even if it means making her live with fake love.

I LOVE Arnav and Khushi's thoughts at the end of the chapter when they look at the other one sleeping!!

Hahah overdose of yellow 🤣 Arnav is TOOO cute!!

I like that Arnav asks for Karan's help again .. it shows that he's not letting his huge ego come in the way! And I LOVE how she tells him all those things .. no doubt they were harsh words, but he needs to know everything that he did .. not just to her and indirectly Anjali .. but it was almost like she spoke for all the ppl who wouldn't raise a voice against ASR all these years ..

Can't wait to read the next update .. heres hoping that Anjali can take the whole thing strongly .. and well obviously hope that she doesn't blame Khushi for everything. Lovingg this FF Rachita!!! Continue really soon and good luck for the major report you have :)

sry 4 the late comment for tis part n also 4 not commenting on the previous 1s as i was out of station so sry 1ce again😔 any way coming to my views i loved ery bit of it hav no words at all to xpress wt a treat it was to read all these parts n a few thighs tht i wld especially lyk to mention are :
1.every ones reaction in sv on knowing tht khushi owns 51%shares 😉
2. the way u portrayed her innocence in ch 6 n her dailouges to arnav for sleeping on the bed
3.khushi's covo wid arnav wen he regains conciouness
4.anjali's dialouge wer she comments on arnavs talent reserves while playing antakshari
5. the songs in the antakshari wer awesome they suited the senario soo well
6.karan n anjali convo
7.arnav not hitting karan back n he realising tht he is seeing his reflrtion in karan
8.the way khushi tells arnav 2 get out of the car ws a nyc unexpected thing too c
9.the way khushi speaks about her prince charming
10.the way arnav requests khushi to earse emptiness frm her eyes n her reply on tht just makes the heart bleed
11.the way khushi spoke abt arnav's mom
12. arnav surprise to khushi
13.the answer tht arnav gives to khushi abt spreading khushi in a dull room 😊
👏 n ya lat bt not the leat ty 4 tthe pm pl do so again ...waiting ...