SS: Have I really moved on? Part 4 + flashback

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

OMGGG. I totally LOVE this SS, Mandira. And yes, PLEASE write the flashback confession stuff!!! I was like...whaaa, we don't get to read that??!! Phew, thank god for the last para!! 310 likes? You ll get them easily, but hope you've already started writing the next part, cause I sooo cannot, cannot wait any longerrr!

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newmoon2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

awesome update
thanks for the pm

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HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Ull have to write the Flash back part dear no way ull get away like that

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

this part ended too abruptly ... the story needs the confession and the "love" scene to end properly.

Waiting eagerly!

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

khushi! you should divorce arnav then arnav and you can have a fresh start to come together but this time a proper marriage.

xxx

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neena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

hey write confession part ...dont end like this
nice update...

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tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Nice update! Shyam died & ArHi together...⭐️

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sss8080

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Thanks mandira for very nice SS.

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Good one mandira.. whats the rush girl? loved it though! ofc u can continue..give anji too a good ending. :)

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roohi_love

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Mandira, it was an awesome update!!! I liked how you did the short epilogue, especially the part about Shyam. 🥳😉😉 Thank you so much for writing this, and thank you for the pm too. 😃😃😃😃😃

** Just read the flashback, whoa!! Thank you thank you thank you!!! So good. 😉😉😉😉 **

Edited by roohi_love - 13 years ago