u cant hate me & i know it!!!'BAATCUTTER'uptdpg128 - Page 47

Originally posted by: MeshLovesKunwar

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we want update..

we want update..

we want update..

we want update..

we want update..

aur haan...take 2-3 updates b4 the actually shaadi...aur shaadi p 3-4 aur updates...aur phir honeymoon ke 3-4 aur updates!!
ok?

u write so well that i've become very greedy now...hehehehe

Originally posted by: MeshLovesKunwar

80???
spamming allowed hai naa to chalo spam karte hai...

we want update..

we want update..

we want update..

we want update..

we want update..

aur haan...take 2-3 updates b4 the actually shaadi...aur shaadi p 3-4 aur updates...aur phir honeymoon ke 3-4 aur updates!!
ok?

u write so well that i've become very greedy now...hehehehe

Originally posted by: deetha

spam karn k liye ek aur bada wala comment on the update
hi guys!!!!!!! back with an update...aaj kal kitni achi ban gayi na mai...kal arsha ff ...aur aaj ye...chalo im trying my best to cheer up u all ...so here goes ur update...

PART-12

all were in the living room along with swaron...they were talking when they heard someone shouting...

sandy: ye chilla koun raha hai...

as the voice came closer...

sw: ye toh rey ki aawaaz hai...par wo chilla kyun raha hai...

rey entered the house all turned to look at him...

rey: in his own world...yes!!! yes!!!!!! wohoo!!!!!! ...he came in jumping ,punching his ri8 fist down into the air...thanku thank u thank u...gave flying kisses to universe ji...😆 and he went on jumping and shouting...hehehe rey paagal hogaya pyaar maiswayam went near him to ask wat happened...rey hugged him tight...yes,...yes...i proposed her and she is very happy..!!!!!! god i luv her a lot.!!!!!!!swayam...i love her a lot...twirling swayam...but suddenly he noticed his whole family...he left swayam and stood embrassed...suddenly all started clapping...her grinned wide like a small chid...awww luv rey like dis

rey: dad mai fresh hoke aata hun...

preeti: beta idhar aao baad mei fresh hojao...ab humare saath baito kuch baatkarni hai...

r: mom kya baat hai???

preeti: arrey baito tho sahi...

rey sat beside his mom...

rey: mom aisi kya baath hai ki aap mujhe fresh hone bhi nai derahi hai...

smriti: arrey thodi der sabar rakho rey...

rey: maa plzz aap sab aise chup rehke mujhe bore kar rahe ho...mai jaa raha hun...

strts standing.

preeti: agar kriya ki beautiful face dekhna nai hai toh jao...

rey sat down immediately...aww kriya ka naam sunte hi baith gaya

r: ( in dreamy mode) par wo toh hamesha khoobsoorat dikhti hai...

all: (raising their eyebrows) aaha!!!!!

rey back to senses...r: a.aa.wo mera matlab hai...mai toh use har din dekhta hun...aur vaise bhi abhi usike paas se aaraha hun...toh kya dekhna hai...pandhra min ya 1/2 hr mei wo badal toh nai jayegi na...

preeti: arrey...abhi jo hai wo alag hai aur thodi der ki baad kriya alag hogi...

r: matlab???

priya : matlab ye hai ki jab ek ladki dulhan banegi na tab uski khoobsoorti aur bhi bad jayegi...uske hone wale pati ke taraf uski pyaar uski khoobsoorti bhada deti hai...jitna jyaada wo apni hone wale pati se pyaar karegi uski khoobsoorti utna badegi...aur uss khoosoorti keliye 1/2 ghanta nai bas ek pal khafi hai...samjhe...

r: acha...

rey casually nodded his head and started looking at the door with a smile .waiting 4r her and all were looking at him with a smile...suddenly reys smile vanished all smiled wide...

rey was looking at the door with a smile and remembering what priya said ...suddenly his smile vanished...wait!!!!!! ladki...dulhan...pyaar..honewala pati...khoobsoorti...ladki ki khoobsoorti ek pal mei bad jayega jab use pata chalega ki wo dulhan bani hai????? matlab...his eyes widened...all were looking at him not to miss his even 1 expression...matlab hamari shaadi ki date fix hogayi...matlab kriya dulhan bangayi.aur mai dulha...matlab jald hi hamari shaadi hojayegi...aur kriya hamesha keliye meri banegi...forever mine...aur hamesha mere saath hi rahegi...sach...wow!!!!!!!!chalo rey ka tubelight jali toh

he turned to preeti ask ...and noticed that every one was laughing ...on seeing him all burst out into laugh...rey looked down embrassed on his stupidity...cant he understand at that second that their marriage was fixed...after smtym he strtd to ask...

r: mom...matlab ki...

but he stopped when he heard a voice...the one he love to hear...yes its her voice ...his loves...he now wanted to see her as soon as he can...the voice became louder...all went silent ...looking at the door...

vijay: lo aarahi hai teri jaisi doosri pagli...( at rey)

all smiled and looked at the door...

kriya tied the bath towel around her waist...she was dry now...she took rounds in the garden enjoying herself finally entered house...she was singing and dancing...she was shaking her hands like cheer girls and entered dancing...

K: BRAAZIL!!!!!!!! LALALALALALA...LALALALALA...lo kriya bhi paagal hogayi rey k pyaar mai

she entered into the centre and froze when her eyes met his...she stood there and slowly bought her hands down looking deep in his eyes...she found his eyes shining than ever..hayyee their look look hawa hawa.suddely both were bought back to earth by sharon...

sh: uhhu...uhhu...

both broke the eyelock ...it was then when kriya noticed that the whole family was present...sharon went to kriya...kriya stood there looking down embrassed...

sh: kya hua kriya itni khush/...???

kriya : blushing...wo wo ...

she slowly lifted her hand and showed sharon the ring...

sharon smiled wide...both hugged...

smriti: beta idhar aao...

both kriya and sharon went and sat beside smriti...kriya in b/w smriti and sharon...

priya: chalo ye baat mai batana chahti hun...

k: koun si baat??

priya: toh baat ye hai ki...looked at rey and kriya...teek ek hafte ke baad tum hamesha keliye badalne wali ho...

K: kya???

priya: haan...kriya raiprakaash se hamesha keliye kriya reyaansh singhania ban jaogi...

K: kya????( open mouth and fully shocked)

smriti: haan jhalli...ek hafte ke baad teri shaadi honewali hai...

kriya blushed to the core ...she continuosly was looking down and rey continuosly looking at her...he was jst lost in her beauty...maa sahi thi...baatcutter kitni cute lag rahi hai...god i wanna hug her badly...

preeti: slowly whispered...kaisi hai...khoobsoorti bhadi???

rey: (in full romeo mood) bohut...then he came bck to senses...wo wo...

preeti bit back a smile...chalo theek hai chodo...

rey looked away not to be caught again even not willing to...

sharon started her teasing session...

sh: kriya tumhari shaadi toh ho rahi hai...par kiske saath???

rey gave an disgusting look...kriya got that sharon was on teasing game...

rey: ye kaisi bak...he started asking 4rm getting up 4rm couch...

he was pulled by preeti...

preeti: arey budhu chup chap bait...

rey: par maa...

preeti: sshh!!!!!! ab chup aur bas kriya ki reaction dekhna...

r: reaction?? maa sharon kaisi bakwas qsn pooch rahi hai...wo kiske saath shaadi kar rahi hai???

( rey and preeti's speech is in audiable to the rest...)

preeti: budhu ...ek dulhan keliye sabse mushkil baath uske hone wale pati ka naam lena...ab chup reh aur mujhe dekhne de,...i really love those expressions u know...

preeti turned towards kriya...rey was surprised at his mom's behaviour...mom bachon jaise behave kyun kar rahi hai...he looked at everyone...all were looking at kriya eagerly waiting 4r her answer...swayam bhi.??? god sab paagal hogaye...bas reyaansh singhania batayegi toh sabki baj jayega...itna excited hai na...excitement flop hojayega...he looked at kriya...who was blushing and looking down..hayye kriya blushing.

sh: batana kriya...koun hai.??(raising her eyebrow)

k: ( she thought she cant escape so she slowly said.) ...hmm...umm...wo...REY...

sh: rey???? ye koun hai ??? mai toh nai jaanti...poora naam batana shayad mujhe pata ho...

rey rolled his eyes...nautanki!!!!!!!1

kriya blushed more...

K: re...rey...REYAANSH...

sh: ye toh mujhe poora naam nai lag raha hai ...uska poora naam batana...

kriya blushed to core...rey saw her and was amazed...kya mera naam lena iskeliye sach me itna mushkil hai...god she is soo beautiful...ri8 now i want her in my arms...

k: ( decided to go at once) suddenly and fastly said...REYAANSH SINGHANIA ...and blushed more...rey was not able to take his eyes 4rm her...

sh: kya mujhe samaj mei nai aaya phir se batana...

kriya looked seriously at sharon punched her on shoulder and ran upstairs blushing...all laughed...

gosh!!!!!! she looks more gorgeous while blushing...!!!!!!!!!

priya: sharon...swayam aaj se balki abhi se rey ko kriya se door rakhna tum logon ki jimmedari...

swaron looked at rey with evilsmile when rey kept on a pleading expression...bechara rey

rey stood up to go to his room ...soon swaron stood to follow him...

r: arrey fresh hone jaa raha hun...

sh: toh hum bhi aate hai...

reyam: KYA????

sh: oops!!!!!!! sorry mera matlab room tak tumhe chodne aayenge...

r: mei chota bacha nahi hun...

sw: par naya dulha hai...so we have to take care of u...

r: arghh!!!!!! kk fine karo jo karna hai...he went up followed by swaron...

he went into room...

r: ab kya washroom ke andhar bhi aaoge???

swaron: sorry sorry jao...

rey went into washroom freshened up...he came out and saw that swaron was not there...he badly wanted to meet her...he tiptoed out...he was moving towards kriya's room ...

dont act smart baby...he turned back and pouted on getting caught,...swaron followed him everywhere...rey now and then trying to meet kriya but all in vain...atlast he got irritated...

r: kk fine!!!!!!!!!! i loose and u win!!!!!! happy...bye!!!!!!!

he banged his door back of him and locked it.and fell on his bed...swaron smiled and stood there to irritated him more if he comes out...aakhir maza toh isi mei hai...

on the other kriya freshened up ...she frgt to bring an extra pair of dress so she took reys track and tee.hayyeee kriya in rey's track n tee..freshened up and fell upon the bed blushing...this was the best day in her life ...she hugged her pillow tight thinking abt him...and same was in case of rey...swaron stood out 4r 10 mins...swayam saw inside through key hole and saw rey on bed and they left...

after 15 mins...rey came out of his dreamland as every second passed the want of meeting her increased finally opened the door went out hid himself and looked down...

sw: toh dad sabse pehli kaam wedding cards...

sh: haan...mei aaj hi...balki abhi jaake select karleti hun...

sw: chalo mei bhi tumhare saath chalta hun...

sh: theek hai toh chale??

rey turned...yes,yes,...ri8 tym to meet her...

he slowly opened the door and went in and locked it...he saw kriya standing at the window seeing outside ...he was abt to go to her when she turned...he hid himself as she may shout at his sudden presense/...but got lost as he saw her seeing blush...she slowly walked upto the mirror and sat on the table...she looked into the mirror and smiled at her image...rey was lost he went and stood at the corner to her left such that he can see her face...(hope u got it) he stood there looking at her...she was soo engrossed in her own thoughts dat she didnt notice him...she looked down blushing...she slowly slid her hands across her waist and moved her right hand towards her left shoulder and clutched her left side collar when her left hand rested on her waist

...she looked at the collar...

r: in his mind...mai yaha khada hun iske saamne par ise toh apni tee ko dekhne mei padi hai...

kriya slightly blushed and rubbed her cheek on that collar and rested her cheek on her left shoulder holding the tee in b/w...it was then when rey got that actually she was thinking abt him and feeling his touch through his tee...this gesture of hers made him to fall again and again fr her...she slowly moved to the door at the balcony...pulled a stool and stood on it and removed on of the long red curtains/...

he got cnfused and waited 4r wat was she upto next...she came back to the mirror sat on the table...placed the cloth on her lap...made her hair perfect by pinning them behind her ears...put on her ear rings...and slowly she took and placed the cloth as ghooghat on her head looking down blushingawww luved kriya's actions she's sooo sweeet...rey got mesmerised...bina make up ke hi itni beautiful lag rahi hai toh poori dulhan ke tarah sajne ke baad kaise dikhegi...she slowly lifted her lashes and blushed on seeing her reflection...

beautiful!!!!!!!!! she looked at him surprised...he strtd cmng 4rward she left the cloth and ran towards another side...he followed she hit the wall he came and stood in front of her...

r: ek baat bataun kriya.???

she nodded her head looking down...she expected a cmpliment 4rm him...

r: mai apni cheezon se bohut possesive hun...

she looked confusingly at him

he moved 4r ward...

r: mei apni cheezen kisiko nai deta aur agar kisine liya toh wapas lelunga...he placed his hand on her waist caught the bottom of her tee and strtd pulling it up...she looked at the tee and at him withwide eyes...he almost lifted above her navel...she sudeenly caught the tee and struggled pilling it down he slowly loosened the grip...she adjusted her top...looked at him ho was smiling...she narrowed her eyes...he laughed...she got that he done it 4r teasing her...she strtd punching him on chest...( he is off shirt ...only jacket...) he stood there 4r smtym...suddenly caught her wrisrt and pinned them up to the wall and pressed himself against her flattening all her curves and his head and nose touching hers...she went numb...

r: whispering...kriya...she looked at him...

mujhe aaj tak aise kabhi feel nahi hua jo aaj subah uss room mei hua...but i loved it to core...thanks 4r giving me that pleasure...mein tumhe uski thanks kehne aaya tha,...

now here starts the most romantic part of the update

she looked at him with questioning eyes...she was abt to say smthng when he pressed his dry lips against her wet glossed lips...he sucked her lips...and kissed and nudge opened her mouth and kissed...pulled her hands down to her back without letting his grip go on her wrists still kissing her...he moved back along with her,...she tried to move her head back...but he caught her lower lip b/w his teeth gently yet with full grip...she stopped in her track...after few seconds let out a sigh and closed her eyes...he understood that she gave up and she would no more go back...so he loosened his teeth grip and again strtd kissing...he made her fall on bed .rolled and ended in the middle of bed on top of her still kissing...she was not able to take it more tried to push his tongue through hers and thus their tongues clashed and he never broke the kiss...he slowly left her wrist and took off his jacket and strtd pulling her tee up...never breaking the kiss...he almost lifted upto the upper line of her waist when he heard a knock which made kriya to catch the tee and pull it down...but he continued kissing...it was sharon...

sh: kriya...!!!!!!!!

he didnt respond but continued his work...kriya tried to move her face but he caught her face and kissed her ...another knock...kriya pushed him ...he broke the kiss looked at the door still on her in the same position...arghh!!!! he dug his head in the crook of her neck and strtd kissing...

K: whispered...rey chodo...

r: argh!!! no...still kissing...

K: sharon bularahi hai...

r: i dnt care...

sh: kriya ??? tum ho???

K: smhow managed to reply ...haan . change kar rahi hun...

rey looked at her,...smirked/...

r: bahana acha tha ...again went back to his work...

sh: sach??? rey tho nai hai na andar???

k: rey dekho sharon ko shak hogaya...

looked at her...fine pata chal gayi na toh no more tension...chal ab dnt disturb me...he dug his head in other side and strtd kissing...

K: sweetu...mai nahane jaa rahi hun...so kholne mei tym lagega...

sh: kk...i will wait...

K: rey chalo utho...

r: arghh!!!!! no...

her brushed his cheek on her lips turning his face 4rm left to ri8...and caught her lips angain with his...after smtym she pushed...

K: rey ab bas utho...bohut hogayi...

he stood up irritatedly...

k: aap ne bohut karli ab jayiye...

r: cmng towards her...kya kiya maine??

k: ab wo mujhe batana padega??

r: nai mai khud batata hun na...moved in to kiss...

awww dude rey's damn romantic hayyyee

k: nai mai khud batati hun...she pulled him into a kiss...he was shocked but soon joined...she pushed after a while...ab aap jao...pushed him to door and was abt to open when sharon knocked...she pulled himto window...

k: ab aap kya karoge sharon aagayi...(hyper)

r: no probls pipe se chaajaounga...

k: theek hai jao...

he pulled her and sucked her lips and kissed her...she again broke...

k: rey ab jao...

he went down but stopped in middle...

r: kriya ek aur baar,...

she pushed him down and colsed the window...he pouted and hit his hand on wall...

r: ouch!!!!!!!! he strtd climbing down when he found his jacket was inside... he went up and knocked...

kriya opened irritatedly...he ran took hi jackect wore it and before getting on the pipe he quickly sucked her lips once again and quickly went down...

guys thats it,,,,,,,,,,,,bohut type karliya...gdni8...hope u like...

❤️deetha❤️

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

Awesome update just loved it!!!!

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

dis 4 cntinuation

holly shit!!!!! i m dead
i cnt stop blushing dis tym 😳 😳 😳
deetha kya likha h meri jaan...its tooo freaking hawttt...pasine choot gye mere to...hehehehe

haye!!!! phele to kriya ka itna inocencely sharmana n all...n wid tee awww...she is soo cute

n after dat rey OMG he is such a naughty...hehehe 😉...bt i lyk him yaar...da way dey are romancing OMG i cn't stop blushing 😳

meri jaan abhi tu aisa likh ri h to first nyt ka kya haal kregi...mere to soch kr hi halat kharab ho ri h...i m gng to read whole part again...well don yar 👍🏼

luv uuu tons 4 dis n big HUG tooo...n lots of kissess tooo...luv uu ❤️