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nagajyothi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome update...
loved this cute naughty geet...😛
waiting for maaneet's meeting ...

thanks for pm...

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disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

superb update...
loved it😆😆😆

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Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow awesome update neha
geet was superb in her antics yaar wat an acting i must say i enjoyed it this class with miss tandon lolz she losted cause of geet answering
continue soon

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ritusoni2233

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

geet cha gui yar

bechari miss tondon lolll

waiting 4 next

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Infinity.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awesome dear
loved it..
eagerly waiting for maaneet meeting
continue soon

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ETRIKA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

wow wow wow wow

what a update.geet is so funny yaar.she is in bio stream n went to history class coz mis tandon uski frnd ko pareshan karti hai.

geet is indeed a princess.

the whole conversation b/w mis tandon n geet hilarious n out of the world.

waiting for maaneet meeting

for the nxt pm.

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

part-3

geet-achha sun, today I am going for shopping at mall road, are you both come with me?
ridz-i can't..today some relatives will come...so have to help mama...
bani-i'll come..will meet you at 5...i'll call you..okay..now bye..mera class hai...
ridz and geet-bye...

at the evening at 4:30 pm geet reached at mall road...but suddenly some one spread the news that there is bomb somewhere in some shop in the market.geet called to bani..
geet-hello bani, don't come here..
bani-why? what happened?
geet-i think there is some problem..will tell after reached the home...
bani-okay..take care and ghar pahunchte hi mujhe call karna..samjhi..
geet-ok..theek hai bye..then...
..all public panicked and started running here & there..pushing to each other...running for their lives...geet also started running as she heard the news that there is bomb..actually from past 1 week, some terrorists were roaming in the station...police is alert but don't know who spread this news...geet also running but some people push her for making their way for saving their life...she fell down on the road...fear in her eyes...people are running and jumping on her but before someone put their feet on her a strong body came flat on her in a protective manner...his strong arms are on her both sides... geet kept her eyes close in fear that people will walk on her...public still running but they put their feet on the back of his strong body...geet opened her eyes for feeling safety around her...opened her eyes feeling that why no one put their feet on her till yet but she meet her eyes with his deep intense eyes..which are looking here and there, looking at the public...someone put his feet on his back and her bit his lip in pain...his muscles hardened...firm jaw line hardened in pain..but not a word came out from his mouth...she kept looking at him with in surprise...how can anyone save her life putting his life in danger...then his eyes met with hers..which were looking at him still...her almond big eyes which are becoming more big when he winched in pain...but soon she closed her eyes & tears came out seeing him in pain...after some time cops came there are calm the whole market that there is no bomb..some one gave the false news... and police came and helped him to stand on his feet...then he give his hand to lift her...he clutched his hand stood up on her feet...tears were all over on her face..some how he can't see these tears...police led both of them in hospital...some scars on geet's hand and on her legs...doctor bandaged her then went to him for gave him treatment...he put off his shirt then vest..doctor stitched him on his back...geet stood beside him...how can she left him in this state...when doc enter the needle in his skin...she screamed aaahhh... he smiled at her...
geet-are you not feeling pain?
he-it is not necessary that we feel the pain when we scream...i am also feeling pain but can't scream like you...
geet-why?
he-because i am like this...
geet-oh
he-why were you there?
geet-i went for shopping...
he thought girls ko shopping ke alawa kuch aata hi nahi hai..
geet-aisa nahi hai...
he looked at her like he caught...but he caught..he lifted his brows for an answer..
geet-i always came first in school..
he-really..
he-lagta to nahi hai..
geet-what do you mean lagta to nahi hai...?
he-nothing..
geet-nahi nahi..batao mujhe..mujhe janna hai.. she pounced on him like he did some naughty in class and blame her for that naughty & she is fighting with him as he is her enemy...
he-tum kitna gussa karti ho...
doc-ho gaya..
he-kya?
doc-bandage ho gaya...
he-itni jaldi...i didn't realize that.. geet lifted her invisible collar that she distract him...
he smiled that she tried to distract him from the pain..but she succeed...
geet-hii,, i am geetanjali handa...par mujhe geetanjali achha nahi lagta to aap bhi sirf geet hi kehkar bulana...theek hai..
he-okkay geet...he shake his hand with her, he felt some kind of current ran through in his spines...he felt shivers in his body...but he shook his head and replied..
he-hii..i am maan..maan singh khurana...
geet-mai aapko MK bulau...
maan-why?
geet-mujhse itna bada naam nahi liya jaayega..maan singh khurana...so MK in short..
maan-you can call me maan... geet nodded cutely..okay...
maan paid the bill.. and geet was about to pay her bill but maan stopped her...
maan-it's ok..i'll pay..
geet-don't pity on me..mai bill pay kar sakti hu..mere paas money hai..
maan smirks..really...!!
she nodded cutely and showed him..maan left his options and she paid her bill...
geet-maine aapko pehle kabhi nahi dekha yaha?
maan-as if you know whole shimla...
geet-nahi..matlab...
maan-i am from london...
geet-NRI...
maan-haan to..isme aisi kya baat ho gayi...
geet-i can't believe on any NRI..
maan-but why?
geet-NRI fake marriage karte hai aur fir money lekar bhaag jaate hai..
maan-ye tumhe kisne kaha?
geet-kaha nahi dekha maine...
maan-kaha?
geet-show me...dev geet ke sath fake marriage karta hai aur fir uska money lekar bhaag jata hai...
maan-but geet to tum ho...
geet-arey mai nahi..serial wali geet...
maan-uff tum ladkiya kitna tv dekhti ho..
geet-as if you didn't watch tv in your entire life...
maan really...i didn't watch tv till yet..
geet-then meet me tomorrow at 2:50 pm outside the ****** cinema..
maan-why?
geet-cinema me kya karte hai..movie dekhte hai...kal hum movie dekhenge..
maan-but mujhe movie nahi dekhni..
geet-lekin mujhe dekhni hai...
maan-to tum dekho..
geet-but mujhe aapke sath dekhni hai..
maan-but mai to NRI hu...
geet-to??
maan-you said you can't believe on NRIs...then how will you watch movie with NRI?
geet-sab NRI ek se thodi na hote hai...
maan-ohh...
geet-then meet me tomorrow...
maan-okay..
geet-mera ghar aa gaya..bye...
maan-bye...
maan murmured pagli hai ek number ki...NRI se prob... then shook his head went in his cottage...
dadi saw him..bandage on his fore head and head...dadi panicked..
dadi-bete ye kaise hua?
maan-kuch nahi dadi...bas wo...he narrated the whole story to dadi then went in his room for rest...it is quite late... he was in his room and thinking about morning wali girl...her song was very beautiful..very sweet but why she was afraid from me...? she didn't turn and running away from me..as i am some animal..and who will eat her...he slept while thinking...
next day maan saw movie with her and listening her bak-bak while watching the movie...

3 days passed..now maan is fit & fine...he again went to hills of shimla for searching the girl who was singing the song but she was not there..he came daily but failed to find her..actually her daar ji denied her not to went there...whenever daar ji stop her then she stopped herself to go there for some days then again she started to go there..same this time... ...

tell me friends hows it?
waiting for ur response...
and hugs to all of you for ur lovely comments
neha

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

part-4

its been 11 days geet and maan met with each other, sometimes in coffee shop..sometimes cinema hall..sometimes in market...she was continued with her continues bak-bak and maan was niharing her lovingly...sometimes she caught him when he was niharing her but never complaint him because she also liked it...he sat there on a rock and clicking snaps again of water fall and pleasant weather...and again he listen her voice singing the same voice...

Dil ye bechein ve
Raste pe nain ve
Dil ye bechein ve
Raste pe nain ve
Jindari behaal hai
Sur hai na taal hai
Aaja savariya
Aa aa aa aa
Taal se taal milaao
Taal se taal mila

maan again became restless and looked for her ...he was heading towards the large rock from where she came out that day...but he is very far from that rock..both are different edge of the hill...but her voice echoing everywhere...he can feel the hidden pain in her voice...again rain started...clouds thundering loudly but today she didn't went from there..she is still there and singing the song...she stood up behind the rock...

Saawan ne aaj to mujhko bhigo diya
Hay meri laaj ne mujhko dubo diya
Saawan ne aaj to mujhko bhigo diya
Hay meri laaj ne mujhko dubo diya

she is remembering her mom...because today 8 years has been completed of her mom & dad died...8 years ago her mom & her dad died from this hill...they came here but that this place was very muddy...geet insist that she want to came here so her mom and dad took her on the hill...she want to see the rainbow..because she read in her books that after the rain rainbow show in the sky...she never saw the rainbow in her life..so she was very excited but she didn't knew that her excitement push her in dark...her excitement snatch her mom and dad from her...
her mom's feet slip on mud and she rolled down from the hill...her dad ran behind her and he too..but geet stood there watching them rolling down from the hill...she was crying badly...her mom and dad stuck on a tree...they were calling geet by her name that call some one who will save them..geet ran from there for calling someone...she came there with some people but they failed to save them...and her mom & dad died...only daar ji left beside her...in the age of 11, god snatch her mom and dad from her...her life became hell without them but her daar ji tried more and more to give her love..taking the place of her parents...he succeed on some things..she never talked with him about her parents...she know that her parents with her..and always with her..and her daar ji is beside her for taking care of her...

Aisi lagi jhadi sochoon main ye ghadi
Kuchh maine kho diya kya maine kho diya
Chup kyon hai bol tu sang mere dol tu
Meri chaal se chaal milaao

she start dancing in rain bleeding her feet badly..dancing on the rough rocks badly...tiny-2 stones were there those are digging her feet...blood start coming out from her feets...

Taal se taal milaao
Taal se taal mila

maan saw her dancing in rain but still he didn't saw her face.as she is taking quick turns in her dance and raining also..his view is hazy...he can't control on himself and he also start singing...
maan is falling on her without seeing her face..without knowing who is she? he can feel the pain in her voice...like the same pain he suffered

Maana anjaan hai tu mere vaaste
Maana anjaan hoon main tere vaaste

she stop dancing hearing his voice...stood there like a statue...and maan coming her nearer...and nearer...

Maana anjaan hai tu mere vaaste
Maana anjaan hoon main tere vaaste
Main tujhko jaan loon
Tu mujhko jaan le

she saw this is maan..she ran with her fastest pace and stop in front of him and he is singing...

Aa dil ke paas aa is dil ke raaste
Jo tera haal hai vo mera haal hai
Is haal se haal milaao

he stretched his arms for her...

she couldn't control on herself...she cried and hugged him immediately...he too hugged her back...they stood there like two bodies & one soul...their bodies drenching in rain..wetting their clothes...but they can feel the warmth of each other...

Taal se taal milaao
Taal se taal mila

his hands snaking on her back and she has clutched his shirt tightly..tears in her eyes but due to rain they were hid...but she is sobbing in his arm..and he is caressing her head warmly...calming her.but some tears in his eyes also that are shedding...today he is not feeling the emptiness in his life..as she filled the emptiness in his life...they stood there long time hugging each other...after some time rain stopped and they realized that where are they are and what are they doing? they separated form each other..she gazed down knotting the edge of her dupatta... he turned..can't faced her... but she replied...sorry... he at once turned to her...and put her finger on her lip...and shook his head in no...he asked the reason for her singing..she trust him and narrated the whole story...he felt some shedding tears in his eyes...before they came out from his eyes geet wiped them... then they silently headed to their respective home holding their hands...next day again miss tondon troubled to bani and she told everything geet...geet is the only one who can teach the lesson of her with her stupid answers...next day again she sat in her class again...and pretending to sleep...again miss tondon saw her and stood beside her and bani shooting some prayers to geet's baba ji that iss bar geet ko bacha lena...
miss-miss handa but no response from geet's side...
again she called to her miss handa..but again no response..now this time
miss-geetanjali handa... she immediately stood up because she doesn't like this name aur jab tak geet ye naam nahi sunti to mood me nahi aati...to mood me aane ke liye geetanjali naam sunna padta hai...
geet-yes miss..!!
miss-you again slept in this class..
geet replied shamelessely-yes mam...
miss-what?
geet-mam...you asked me a question and i replied you..simple...
miss- i mean again in history class...
geet-yes mam..history class me neend achhi aati hai na...
miss-you mean you came here only for sleeping?
geet-yes mam...mam, if you want you can ask me question?
miss-yeah sure..neki aur puch puch...
geet-puch...mam kiski puch?
bani mutely laughed at both of them and whole class giggled..they all knew that why geet is doing all this...miss glared to all of them and shut their mouths...
miss-puch nahi...this is phrase...
geet-ohhh...
miss-tell me something about aazaad bhagat singh...
geet-mam...kya ques kiya hai aapne...you know amir khan ne rang de basanti me bhagat singh ka character play kiya tha aur wo na usme ek foreign girl se love karta tha aur he thought that she doesn't know hindi and poor amir khan i mean movie me...pata nahi he told so many things in front of her in hindi and in the last he came to know that she knows hindi...dekhne layak face tha uska.. she told this in one go and let her breath out...
miss-really miss handa..!! mujhe to pata hi nahi tha...
geet-really mam...!! chalo maine ab aapko bata diya...no thank you please...miss passed a fake smile to her...
miss-tell me who stopped honor killing?
geet-mam geet ne..
miss-geet ne...?
geet-haan..mera fav show geet huyi sabse parayi ki geet ne..
miss-mujhe nahi janna kaun geet and kaun huyi kisse parayi..
geet-but mam..ab wo parayi nahi rahi...
miss-but you said...wo parayi hai..
geet-mam, wo parayi thi..par ab usey prince charming maan mil gaya hai...haaye so romantic..
miss-miss handa..romantic stories apne ghar par rakhiye..school me nahi..samjhi aap...it's time for punishment..
geet-what punishment mam? she said in her low tone and made sad face..
miss-come with me...
geet-ok mam..she winked at bani and followed her silently and bid bye to everyone...
miss-you will stand out of the class whole two periods..you will not attend your class...
geet nodded..ok mam... miss tondon left from there and geet ran from there and sat in her class...

tell me friends hows it?
waiting for ur response...
and hugs to all of you for ur lovely comments
neha

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

part-5

its been one month both came on hill and sat with each other..talking to each other without any topic...only talking...and met with each other at evening... maan came here for a project but find her soul-mate..dadi maa saw some changes in his behaviour..he seems happy now a days..she wished he remain always like this...on the other hand daar ji found very happy in morning time..she is not sad now a days like always in early in the morning...her daarji is also very happy after saw her happy... she again went to hill for met with him but maan was not there..she started her yoga on the hill...she knew yoga and her body is very flexible..she did her yoga with very easily...maan came saw her doing yoga...he is amazed to her patterns and her move in yoga...maan wonders that today she is doing yoga beside singing..he thought how many secrets she hid about her..and he didn't know anything about her...maan came and stood behind her...and said.
maan-mujhe yoga sikhaogi...?
geet jumped hearing his voice...she nodded innocently...she is showing moves to him but maan was not doing properly... then she came in front of him and turn her back to him..touching her back to his chest...holding his hands and doing yoga...but maan was not giving attention...her fragrance making him crazy...her sweat , he wants to wipe it with his fingers..there is no doubt that he is falling for her...she turned her face and looked at him found he lost some where but didn't knew that he is lost in her...and she kept looking at his intense eyes which are holding love for her...care for her...he bend down little and give a small peck on her lips...she closed her eyes feeling his lips on hers...she turned to him...his hands came on her face, cupped her face lovingly and her hands goes to his shoulder for support..first time she is feeling some thing like this...they are only nibbling each other lips...he is nibbling her upper lip and she is nibbling his lower lip...his hand slowly went down to her waist pulling her close to his chest...she was standing on the tip of her toes...he tucked her close to his chest while kissing her..only nibbling their lips...that was the first time for there..both don't know how to do kiss but yes they are doing...she opened her mouth for breath but maan's tongue went inside and tangled with her tongue... pacing his tongue in her mouth..travelled his tongue in every place in her mouth...relishing her mouth properly...then her tongue started responding him back and she also started her tongue roaming in his mouth...both don't know when they started kissing to each other..some tears came out form her eyes...maan felt wetting his thumb with her tears...he broke out the kiss and looked at her innocent and red blush face...he kissed her tears slowly -2 making patters of kissed on her whole face...she stood there getting wet between her legs..she already aroused with one kiss and now maan making her more wet with his continue kisses on her faces...shivers in her spines but maan is also feeling the same...now maan has to stopped himself...he controlled on himself and hugged her...she too hugged him back...both remain there for some time like this..in the hugging position until some one disturb them but no one came there but rain disturb them...water started falling from the sky like sky is also crying with both of them...pouring their sorrow..their emptiness which is now fulfilled with each others love...now no more loneliness in their life..they broke out the hug and geet ran from there with her tiny steps...maan stood there watching her going away but she was not going away from his life...he stood there mesmerized...more tempting to kiss her more & more but it is necessary for give her space to realize her feelings...she went back her hawali panting furiously...straightly went to her washroom...stood in between shower..water continuosly falling on her body...she is still feelings warmth in her body..feeling his touch that is making her insane for him...craving for more and more...closing her eyes stood there watching his intense eyes in her thought... feeling the love he holds for her...but she is not realizing why they kissed to each other..but that feeling very special to her...she don't know what is this feeling... she remember that when ridzy and bani came to her place..she was very excited..she wanted to shar something with her...
all three in her room...and ridz start with her fantacies...this happened when geet didn't met with maan...
ridz-you know geet armaan gave me love bite... geet made yuck face and innocently asked..
geet-yuck..ye love bite kya hota hai?
ridz laughed at her... duffer love bite nahi pata kya hota hai... tu english movies nahi dekhti kya?
she nodded her head in no..mai to bas apna show dekhti hu... geet huyi sabse parayi...
ridz-tu aur teri geet...
bani-haaye maan kitna handsome hai na...
geet-maan mera hai samjhi..don't eye on him... both laughed... ridz looked at them
ridz-tum dono apni baate karne lage..meri bhi to suna na...
geet-achha chal bol...
ridz-armaan gave me love bite..
geet-ye love bite kya hota hai...
ridz-duffer...
bani-tu detail me bata...
ridz-okay listen... me & armaan are in one room...raining outside...cold breeze were making us shivered... armaan slowly-2 came towards me..i was standing near the window and watching outside... armaan stood behind me...i sensed that armaan is behind me...i turned...his hands touched my waist..
geet & bani's eyes popping more n more after listening ridz talk... they looked at each other.. ridz looked at them like what happened... they shook their head and signaled her that continue...
ridz-he came close to me...our bodies touched...he slowly cupped my face... my hands went on his shoulder for support... both girls gulped their saliva... he bend his head little seeking my permission...then..
geet & bani-then...
ridz-then he bite me on my neck...
geet-yuck..vampire tha kya?
ridz-duffer... vampire nahi hai..you know him...
geet-yeah, i know him..he is my best friend...
ridz-then
bani-abhi bhi kuch bacha hai kya?
ridz-mujhe complete karne de...
geet-ok ok...
ridz-then his lips came to close to my lips...we were about to touch the lips but my bad luck my ghost alarm buzzed...and i came out from my dream...
geet & bani-what ye dream tha?
ridz-aur nahi to kya...
geet and bani sighed in relief...
ridz-mere lips par to armaan hi kiss karega...tujhe kya lagta hai geet tujhe kaun kiss karega?
geet-mujhe...mujhe to koi geet ke maan jaisa...wait...
geet switched her DVD and played the song...

haaye rama rama ho..
haaye more rama ...

and started dancing...

dil me macha hai kyo koi hungama..
aayega koi, baho me leke,
chumega mere ye lucky lips...
aaye haaye..
ho ho ho..aaye haaye..

then bani & ridz start...

haaye rama rama ho..
haaye more rama ..
dil me macha hai kyo koi hungama..
aayega koi, baho me leke,
chumega mere ye lucky lips...
aaye haaye..
ho ho ho..aaye haaye..

those three girls dancing while kissing to each other on their cheeks...then geet switch on her tv and the show is going geet huyi sabse parayi..the scene is going on when maan & geet were going on their honey moon in bus...and maan is asking her for a kiss making his lips towards her... geet, bani and ridz watching them then geet stood up and ridz & bani looked at her what she was up to..went near to tv and kissed on his lips from outside the tv...and hide her face in her palms... ridz and bani start troubling her..teasing her.. girls laid on bed and dreaming about their soul-mate... then she came out from deep thought and hid herself again in her palms thinking about their kiss...she is blushing furiously...

days are passing like this and geet started to sharing about maan with her friends..ridz is very happy for her that she also find her soul-mate like her..but armaan never tell her that he love her...
geet went to near armaan and talked him..
geet-armaan yaar, i know you like ridz..
armaan-haan yaar..but
geet-but
armaan-but jab bhi mai uske saamne jata hu to mera muh hi nahi khulta..
geet laughed at him..
armaan-don't laugh at me..meri help kar na...

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love making

tell me friends hows it?
waiting for ur response...
and hugs to all of you for ur lovely comments
neha