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part 4

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neha gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: etrika

wow wow wow wow
what a update.geet is so funny yaar.she is in bio stream n went to history class coz mis tandon uski frnd ko pareshan karti hai.
geet is indeed a princess.
the whole conversation b/w mis tandon n geet hilarious n out of the world.
waiting for maaneet meeting
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for the nxt pm.

thank u so much dear...
glad that u liked geet and tondon's talks...
yeah that was out of the world...

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TanuDDian

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part 5

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tia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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omg all parts r amaznggg
suprbbb
lvd it...

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neha gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part-6

armaan-but jab bhi mai uske saamne jata hu to mera muh hi nahi khulta..
geet laughed at him..
armaan-don't laugh at me..meri help kar na...
geet- you know ridz also likes you..
armaan-really...
geet-hmm..
armaan- you know i am planning some surprise for her..
geet--sachi...
armaan-hmm...
geet-bata kya?
armaan-nahi tu usey bata degi..
geet-promise nahi bataungi...
armaan-i am writing a poem for her...jab complete ho jayegi tab tujhe dikhaunga..
geet-ok..chal bye...

geet started to went maan's home when he is not at home..he went his office and geet spend her time with dadi...geet is getting love from dadi like a mother's love..dadi also loves her..likes her..find her perfect for his grand son...now she get to know that why maan is happy now a days..this is because geet..
geet-you know dadi aap bilkul show wali dadi ki tarah ho..
dadi-kaun se show me beta?
geet-geet guyi sabse parayi...
dadi-achha..
geet-haan...usme jo main lead hai na maan uski dadi maa ki tarah ho..woo bhi maan and geet ko bahut pyaar karti hai aur aap bhi mujhe and maan ko bahut pyaar karti ho..
dadi-sach me..
geet-hmm... dadi found her a cute innocent girl..and she loves maan...and maan also loves her...but never tell...
some times maan went to her hawali and her daar ji likes him...his speaking style, his attitude which never show that he is in atitude...his love towards them, his respect towards them...daar ji likes his business ..everything about him..he is like a grand son like him...daar ji never told their son and daughter for the grand son...he wants but never showed it...geet is everything for him..and now he take care of her just like her parents...now she is very reserved her feelings for him...she knew what she felt for him...and she also knew about his feelings for her..he never tell that but she felt his love in his every act for her..protectiveness towards her...listening her without any question...he knew everything about her, about her taste, about her likes & dislikes..and somehow she found some likes about him..he never told her about himself...but she find out..some from him and some from dadi...she is a princess but never behave like a princess to anyone..she kept herself like a low-profile...maintain herself very obedient girl..very sweet towards others...very protective towards her friends...
geet shared everything about maan with her friends...he is like this, he is like that...bla bla bla... on which topic they talk...how they shared their view to each other...holding the care for each other...one day maan & geet were roaming in marker then two boy came on their bike and passing dirty comments to her...maan winched his fist in anger...tighten his jaws in anger..geet hid behind him...maan hold her behind her and stop their bike from the handle on the edge of the bike...the tyre is moving in air..he lifted their bike little with his one hand..they looked at him horrified...kick then from the bike...one of them fell down from the bike on the ground...and the another boy stepped out from the bike himself...geet tried to stop him but eyed at her..she gulped her saliva seeing his red eyes in anger...she stepped back...maan grabbed them from their collar and kick them on their stomach blood coming out from their mouths...punching them straight on their nose...they tried to fought back but maan didn't let them...kick them between their legs sweeping them in pool of pain...he hold geet's hand and went away from there...she saw hidden love in his act which he never voice out...she is again falling on him...he drop her in her home...she went inside and maan was watching her going inside...maan turn for leave but geet came out and kissed him on his cheek...he smiled...he get what he wanted from her...he felt that he is the most happiest person on the earth who has geet in his life and other side geet is feeling the same... full day be with him after the school and in nights dreaming about him...
now she is more aware of her feelings for him...
it's been like 3 months they are together...
another day in school...geet is telling her friends about maan...
ridz-are you sure you loved him?
geet-definetily..no doubts..all clear..
bani-what is the gurrantee he will not ditch you like dev ditched geet in the show?
geet-i saw in his eyes..he too love me...
bani-but ye to dev ne bhi kiya tha geet ke liye..
geet-har NRI dev jaisa thodi hota hai aur wo to specially geet ke money ke liye aaya tha na but maan ka to bahut bada business hai..aur wo to yaha business ke liye hai...
ridz-fir bhi...
geet-fir bhi ka kya matlab? i knew i love him and he loves me...
ridz-did he told you?
geet-nahi..
bani-fir
geet- i saw in his acts...in his eyes... aur ridz are you sure you love armaan...?
ridz-yes, i am pretty sure..
geet-jaise tu sure waise mai bhi sure...
all hugged to each other...they are very happy to each other...

geet's exams started and maan teach her...helping her in learning...giving her tricks that how to learn..yet she knew everything but she love that when maan help her...maan helped her and she watched him..then he distract her and told her that concentrate on her studies otherwise i'll go... she made faces then studied... her exams are going well...
next day she is going for her last exam on her scooty but in mid way the tyre got punctured...she is walking while pushing her scooty with herslef on the hills... then a man was there with his van... he has the machine which repairs the puncture tyre...
man-hey, have tyre puncture..
geet nodded...
man-come, i'll repair it...
geet thought for a while then goes towards him and gave him her scooty...she took out her belongings from her scooty like bag and lunch box... man repaired the tyre but then he move towards her...she is looking at him with corner of her eyes...man came near her and hold her hand..
geet-leave me..what are you doing..
man-come on baby..
geet-i said leave me..
man-not so soon...
then he hold her from her waist and tried to push her inside in the van..but geet hold the knob of the van not letting him to push her inside... but man tried with his full strength...but geet clutched her lunch box tightly and hit on head with her full strength...making his head bleed..then again hit him again on his nose...he left her at once, hold his nose & head...geet scared and panting..then she hit him between his legs...he fell down on land holding himself...geet ran from there holding her bag & lunch box...she is running with her full space...after some time man came behind her searching her everywhere...then she found a church but the gate of church is closed...man is behind her...she saw a car there..she tried to open the door of car...but she is failed..the she removed paper cutter from her bag and tried to unlock the car but again failed...she some how opened the door and hid inside the car...man reached there found no one...he looked here and there for her then came towards the car...he peeped inside the car but maan came holding him back... kicking him, punching him for peeping inside his car... geet saw fight not saw maan's face... maan made that man bleed furiously then that man ran from there...maan sat in his car and drove away... he stop his car between the road..cops are checking the cars...there is full security because it is heard that there are some terrorists and illegal things are supplying...
cop checked his car..maan showed his licensce..then asked where you from? before he replied his back..a gang came there and start firing in air and on some people...cop tell him that leave from here... maan drove the car fastly...geet still in his car but maan didn't realize that some one in his car..he is driving but because of sudden firing he has to changed his way...he lost his track and don't know where he is..network is also failed..he can't call to someone...and no one is there...they are in mid of some jungle...exactly don't know the place...he stopped his car... geet sneeze...and heard the voice of sneezing...he looked here and there is anyone here...he stepped out from the car and looked again here & there but no one...again he heard the voice of sneeze... geet slowly came out from the back seat and looked outside from window..maan sight fell on her..he saw someone in his car...he opened the door then shocked geet is there...he stepped inside the car and sat beside her...
maan-tum meri car me kya kar rahi ho?
geet didn't bother to reply him back hugged him immediately and started crying...maan caress her back for calming her...but she cried more...
maan-sshh geet,stop cry..what happened? she shook her head in no...just hugged him tightly...maan hugged her back...both swept in different world..longing craving for each other...she broke out the hug and looked at him with her teary eyes...maan tucked her strands behind her ear and wipe her tears with his thumb...

on the other hand daar ji & dadi are very tensed because of geet & maan..daar ji went maan's cottage for want to know that is geet there but no use...daar ji called to commissioner and tell them everything about their children...first they are very worried because of sudden firing in the city and then they don't know where is their children...commissioner alert his whole police force...

maan tucked her strands behind her ear and wipe her tears with his thumb...again asked what happened?
geet-wo..woo..
maan-ek min tumhe ye chot kaise lagi? some brushes on her arms...he immediately heal her wounds with his lips..kissed on her wounds healing them slowly -2 but geet is sweeping in different world with his kisses...she is gazing to his face who is busy in healing her pain...some tears formed in his eyes after seeing her wounds...she pressed her lips on his lips at once...his eyes widen opened due to sudden kiss but then both closed their eyes...she locked her arms around his neck pulling him more closer...maan lift her little while kissing her and made her sit on his thighs...kissing to each other madly...his hands snaking on her back...there is very cold outside but they can feel warmth from each others body...clouds thundering..geet broke out the kiss and hugged him at once...maan rested his head on her curves..feeling her curves up and down due to breathing hard...she can feel his hardness...they are longing for this...his hand removed her shirt from the skirt and his hand went inside her shirt on her waist...touching her milky smooth skin..she shivers from the touch of his chill fingers...chills ran through in her spines...she pressed herself more into him and hugged him more tightly..his face digging in her curves...he looked at her blush & red face...she guided his hand to her waist coat for opening the button that is indicating that don't hesitate..she too want him...she opened buttons of his shirt removed from his shoulder and kissing his shoulder..giving him wet kisses...maan removed her waist coat and his hand went to her tie...removed it from her neck..he continously looking at her face...her blushed crimson red face...his hand went inside her shirt snaking her bare back...she closed her eyes...he opened her shirt from his another hand...she trust him fully...he removed his vest...their bare body touched...maan's hands went her curves holding them in his hand...he gave her full mouth kiss...their tongues dancing in each other's mouth...she looked in his deep eyes...she guided her hands ..his hands went on her bare curves,,,cupping them in his full hand...kneaded them...she cried in the kiss...maan lay her down on the seat and laid on her..broke the kiss and now kissing her curves madly..giving her pleasure...maan is torturing her slowly...sweetly kissing her everywhere on her body..relishing her body...Every moment was beautiful, every touch was magical, how he touched her, claimed her, how is hand knew exactly were to to touch & how to make her feel what he felt. He again went back to her face, his kisses moving across her cheek to linger at her mouth.he kissd her earlobe ,his lips replaced to his teeth..biting him..making her moaning in pleasure...

She hugged him & so did he. She felt complete. She felt truly his..she looked at the ceiling of car as he lay on her with almost a soundless sigh of contentment. She bit her lips to stifle the sob that rose in her throat ..she didn't want to disturb him by letting out a cry..as he was relaxing into sleep hugging her. It was silly to cry because it was the most wonderful thing in her life had just happened.

tell me friends hows it?
waiting for ur response...
and hugs to all of you for ur lovely comments
neha

Edited by Angel-Jot. - 12 years ago