Tere ishq main-Deewani (MG Ss) - Page 2

Originally posted by: sakshi04

awsome but after reading the little proloung it seems that ki ye thodi sad story hogi agar maan geet ko chod ke chala gaya to i hope ki mera assumption wrong ho aur kuch acha ho write next part soon dear waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: Amadora

First:

Congrats on new FF!!

It's the first time i'm reading your work.

The prologue is awesome. I really liked it...

part 1 is beautifully written. The beginning was sad. Why was she crying? He heard her singing and followed her voice.. that's so cute!!!! When she stops singing, he stops searching and when he starts singing she stopped walking.. Aww I really love that part. The end was nice. Is she a princess or is it her nickname? I have a few more questions..

- What happened to her mom? (Is she death?)

- Is it a sad story? ( I love emo/sad stories :D )

- When are you gonna update?

PS

You're an awesome writer⭐️ keep up the good work!

Add me to your PM list..

and update soon.. can't wait to read more

PPS

Can you make part 2 longer?

TC