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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyy neha i am so sorry for late reply...
firstly congrats for the new SS...
the concept is mindblowing... loved it to the core...
sooo they are seperated due to MU...
she is a princess to her daarji... so much pain in her voice... why???
that bot lost in her voice n it is soo soothing for him...
ppch ... he didnt see her... no prob...
i want to know the song is from which movie or album... its awesome...
continue soon dear...
yaar ek request dont make it a sad story na... pleeejjj...

love u neha... hugs to u...
yaar koi problem nahi when u r free read n comment... actually missing ur comments...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oopsss just now read ur reply to sakshi...
yayyy not a sad story n funny moments too...
i am so so so happy...

love u neha... muahhh ... hugs to u... 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothikrish

heyyy neha i am so sorry for late reply...
firstly congrats for the new SS...
the concept is mindblowing... loved it to the core...
sooo they are seperated due to MU...
she is a princess to her daarji... so much pain in her voice... why???
that bot lost in her voice n it is soo soothing for him...
ppch ... he didnt see her... no prob...
i want to know the song is from which movie or album... its awesome...
continue soon dear...
yaar ek request dont make it a sad story na... pleeejjj...

love u neha... hugs to u...
yaar koi problem nahi when u r free read n comment... actually missing ur comments...



don't be sorry...
thanks dear...yes they will separate due to MU...
dear this song is from movie taal...in this movie aisharya and akshay khanna... that is one of my fav songs...
nahi yaar half sad hai and half funny hai... don't worry...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
part-2


on the other hand boy reached at his home...and his dadi panicked after seeing him whole drenched in the rain...she told him to take shower and get ready...
after some time he got ready...
dadi-maan bete..breakfast is ready..come fast...
maan-coming dadi maa...

maan came shimla for a project for 6months..he lives in london but he has another branch which is set up in delhi...and dadi also came with him..maan & dadi..only these two persons in khurana family...they live in shimla in their personal cottage...he became responsible very soon...in a little age...when he was in first year of his BBA that time he joined his office because dadi was too old for this...so he took the business in his hand...in the age of 19..he became a business man...in the age of 21, he opened a new branch of khurana's with the name of khurana media house in delhi...he is very responsible now and fulfilling his responsibilities towards his dadi with a great manner..he is not an angry man..but if anyone made any mistake in his office then he has to faced the real maan singh khurana...he never shown his anger to dadi..because he loves his dadi maa a lot...he was craving for love of a mother which he never get...only dadi is beside him for giving him the love...

on the other hand geet get ready in her school uniform...wearing her white shirt, maroon skirt in check design till her knee length...places tie between curves.and a waist coat matching wth her skirt….wearing black shoes & short length socks...showing her legs properly... and two plates of her hairs...
she goes in daar ji's room..
geet-daarji, chaliye breakfast karte hai…
daarji-chal puttar….
Geet is a princess in a real sense but she keep herself as a normal person..she don't want to show herself as a princess…..but her daarji is a maharaaj of shimla..everyone knew him….so for her daarji she has to be a princess but in-front of him & in-front of his daarji'd friends….
After taking her breakfast..she kissed daarji and went for her school….
She sat on her scooty & went to her school….she straightly went in her friends classroom and sat there….after sometime..miss tondon is teaching all the students….she notice her & stood in front of her..

Miss-miss handa…. Her friend poked her on her shoulder for waking her….
Geet-sone de na yaar…
Miss-miss handa…this is school, not your bedroom….
All other students start laughing…..
Miss glared at them all..all students shut their mouth….
Her friend again poked on her shoulder….
Miss tondon shout on her geetanjali...…she immediately opened her eyes want to know who is that person who called her with this name...….fluttered her eyes for a clear view… she saw miss tondon in front of her..she immediately stood up….
Geet-yes mam….
Miss-miss handa, what are you doing here?
Geet-sleeping mam….then bit her lip…. Her friend close her eyes…
Miss-hmm..sleeping….but in this class?
Geet-yes mam…
Miss-why are you sleeping here?
Geet-because it's history class na…
Miss-why were you sleeping?
Geet-jaise har ek friend jaruri hota hai waise hi neend bhi to jaruri hoti hai na mam…
Miss-what?
Geet-nothing….
Miss-do you even realize that history is not a easy subject…
Geet-I know mam…
Miss-what do you know about history? And about those people who made history..
Geet-ask the questions mam…
Miss-ok…..tell me something about subhash…..before teacher complete her sentence geet cut her and said..
Geet-subhash..subhash ghai…kya movie thi taal….you know he is producer of taal movie….you know mam I have seen this movie around 10 times…every dialogue I have remember on my fingers….she is ga ga about taal movie and subhash ghai……
Miss-miss handa..i didn't ask you about subhash ghai…
Geet-but mam subhash ghai also create history after making a very superhit movie taal..
Miss-I asked you about subhash chandra boss…
Geet-mam, who is subhash chandra boss? Her friend put her palm on her fore head…..
She looked innocently at miss tondon….miss give her a glare….
Miss calmed herself and asked next question….okay tell me about mohan but again geet cut her start..
Geet-poor mohan, bechare ka show band ho gaya….
Miss-why?
Geet-mam..show ne achhi trp nahi kamayi na….aur uski poor wife kastur..
Miss-kastur nahi kasturba…
Geet-nahi mam..kastur..her name is kastur…
Miss-kasturba..
Geet-kastur….aur uski khadoos saas…
Miss-kasturba ki saas bahut achhi thi..
Geet-nahi mam..uski saas usey blkul bhi pasand nahi karti thi….you know she hated her bahu…
Miss-tum kis mohan ki baat kar rahi ho?
Geet-dharmpatni ke mohan ki..jo NDTV imagine par aata tha..
Miss became confused…and asked ab ye dharampatni kaun hai?
Geet-serial…poor show band ho gaya…and made very sad face..like she is feeling very bad for star cast of this show…
Miss shout on her….miss handa..kabhi to serious hua karo….
Geet-sorry miss…can you ask me next ques please?
Miss-okay tell me about NRI marriage..
Geet-mam….you know dev khurana was a NRI and he married a poor girl geet for her money…and he left her on the airport…she was cried a lot….i hate that dev khurana..mam never believe on NRIs…they can cheat us like geet had been cheated by dev….mai kabi kisi NRI se shaadi nahi karungi…
Miss-miss handa to aapko kaun ke raha hai ki aap NRI se shaadi kariye….iss ladki se to baat karna hi bekaar hai….pucho kuch aur bolti hai kuch…pata nahi ye first kasie aati hai…geet was giggling mutely and her friend knew her very well….
Geet-mam, you know dev has payed back for his mistake and you know maan singh khurana, who is elder brother of his..he send him in jail…
Miss-mujhe tumhari ram katha nahi sunni…
Geet-but mam, this is not any ram katha..this is show..geet huyi sabse parayi…
Miss-mujhe nahi janna ki kaun huyi kisse parayi…come with me in principal's office…he will give you treatment properly…..geet winked at her friend & went in principal's office with miss tondon…

In principal's office
Principal-miss handa, we are gaining much complaints about you..what's the matter? are you not serious for your studies, for your future?
Geet looked down and replied, I am very sorry sir…actually sir, yesterday night I was making a project of biology and learning syllabus….i didn't sleep for a second in whole night…and if I bunked the school then miss will send the notice to my daarji so I thought I should attend the school…and I don't know when I slept in the class….sorry sir…
Principal-but you are in biology stream..why were you seating in history class….?
Geet-sir I was not in my proper sense so don't know when I entered in history class….
principal-if again i get your complaint the i have to take action against you and have to tell your daarji about all this..understand..
geet-yes sir..sorry sir..
principla-you may go now...
she silently went out from the office ..it is lunch break now...she sat the edge of ground & her friend sat beside her...she asked her..mujhe ye samajh nahi aata ki tu hamesha miss tondon ko pareshaan kyo karti hia?
geet-pagal, kyonki wo tujhe pareshaan karti hai..simple...mai uss tondon se tera badla leti hu...
wo tujhe trouble degi to mai usey aise hi pareshaan karungi...

her friend again asked...if principal told to your daar ji..i am very afraid him...
geet-pagal wo itne bhi strict nahi hai..and principal won't say anything to him because he is best friend of him...& he loves me too...

her friend said...you don't like history fir bhi you came for me...
geet-history geography bari bewafa...raat ko rato subah safa...
wah wah wah wah...a voice came behind them..both followed the voice then both shout together...
ridzy...
ridzy hugged to both...geet, bani...i heard that you again troubled to miss tondon...
geet-sahi suna tuney...
ridzy-you did all correct with her...wo hamari bani ko pareshaan kare aur hum usey aise hi chhod de...
bani-wo to ho hi nahi sakta...all laughed in unison...
ridz-geet, why didn't came in bio class?
geet-you forgot i was troubling miss tondon..
ridz-ohh yeah...maza aaya hoga na...
bani-don't ask ..i thought today she had gone...geet tu itna drama laati kaha se hai... geet raise her collar in confident...meri friend ke liye kuch bhi...
all three hugged in a group..
geet-achha sun, today i am going for shopping at mall road, are you both come with me?
ridz-i can't..today some relatives will come...so have to help mama...
bani-i'll come..will meet you at 5...i'll call you..okay..now bye..mera class hai...
ridz and geet-bye...



precap
maaneet meeting

tell me friends hows this?
hope you guys will like it?
waiting for you comments
neha



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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wow wow awesome update dear...
loved it to the core...
omg... geet is so funny... she bunked her bio class n gone to history class...
subhash ghai n started about thal movie...
mohan ka tho serial ke baare mein shuru kardi aur made a very very very sad face for stopping it...
NRI shaadi n dev khurana n geet...
arey yaar miss ne maan singh khurana ke baare mein nahi suni... agar sunli tho wo bhi fida ho jayegi... 😆 😆
hahaha convo with princi is fun... awww loved their friendship...
cute cute friends...
continue soon neha...

love u... huga to u... 🤗
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 oh god geet is evil😈
bechari miss tondan😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting eagerly for maaneet meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum update luvd it
eagerly w8in 4 maneets meetin
plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8 part
omg
geet is shooo nghty...
lvd her yaar she is shoo sweet
nd maan wah 19 years ki age se business.. gr8...
precap... hayeee mere maaneet ki frstmeetng...
cont soonnn

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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Awesum part..
Geet toh badi naughty nikli..
Loved it a lot..

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