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AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Interesting update! Continue soon. And one suggestion - could you not put the English translation right there...it gets a little tedious on the eyes. :)

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afsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Nice OS

Loving Khushi

Plz add me to ur PM list

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lattelove9

@lattelove9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

omg I LOVE IT! did she just smack him in the end??? WHOA!

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invalid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

awesome update ! I loved their conversation, it felt so real

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peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

I thought I'll comment when you are done but the kiss and slap broke down my resistance. Terrific.!

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Bengalibabexx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Amazin... Arnav deserves the slap to wake him up from his blinding anger

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

read all d 3 parts... u r an amazing writer...plz pm me the neext update...thanks

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PhoenixRadar

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Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: molten_lava
Hey Annie!
Ola Rachel!

I read both the parts together. Sorry for the late comment but I'm gonna be really busy for the next few days.
No problemo!! Do comment only when you're free!!
Damn Girl! What was that??? I need fresh air *panting*😆 (I never knew u write such hot stuff so well☺️)
Gee!! 😳 Uh *ahem* Did I do something wrong? Woah! Heheheheh... umm...*scrunching up my nose, in anticpation* Was that HOT?
Phew!! Very, VERY GLAD that you enjoyed it!!! I wanted to make it as intense as possible, and now I see that I've succeeded!!! ⭐️
Loads of kisses to you, sis!!

That was such an intense kiss, Geez, ur Arnav is so unpredictable! 😉 Is this it?? Or is there gonna be another part?
Hahahah...😆 you sure want another part?? Heheheh...😆 Just kidding! Of course there is some more to it!

Very well written👏 and thanks for the eng translation. Makes it easier to read.
Thanks a lot, sis!!! Aww... my pleasure!! Hope it did some justice to the intense Hindi I've used in my work! *grinning sheepishly* 😳

Annie

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: tharukisenara
can some one plz tel me whether this is true or not

Hi tharukisenara,😃
I see that you've read my OS. Hmm... 😳 confused? 😕 Confused if its true or not?
Heheheh...😆 It is My Version, pal! Something what I had actually thought of while watching the episode of 21st of February!!
Hope you liked it!!😳

Regards
Annie⭐️

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Arnav kissing her was unexpected.I thot somehow he came 2 no d truth & is accepting Khushi as his wife.But after that what he said was so rude.Enough!plz disclose d truth & make him romantic from his heart

Hey jasminerahul,
Hahaha...😆 unexpected was what I wanted it to be!!
Aww...😳 Patience, pal! Patience!! As they say, "Sabr ka phal, meetha hota hain!!"!😆
And about making him romantic... 🤓 Hmm... Let's see!!

Annie😳