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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Interesting update! Continue soon. And one suggestion - could you not put the English translation right there...it gets a little tedious on the eyes. :)

Hey AngelTeen!
Thank you so much for your comment!! 😃
And about the English translation, am really sorry about that, but I really can't help it! Some people do find it difficult to read such intense Hindi, cause either some of them find it hard to comprehend the heavy words or some of them simply don't know the language!
That's the only way to help them out!!😕
Uh... Let me see what I can do!🤓

Annie😳

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brainychild92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

oh holy shoot! i'm liking this wayy more than the rona dhona crap! update soon!! i'll add u;just remember to send me a pm when u update:D

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frizzy40

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

real good, loved it, absolutely fantastic, can't wait for next episode. please pm with update

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monkeydog18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Ooo loved the passionate kiss and how they forgot everything!! So he got angry and kissed her... Now that she slapped him will he give her that [/I]Pati-Patni ka rishta??![I] update soon!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Awesome update, I loved their kiss, it was amazingly written ! one of the best kiss scenes i have seen written before ! Outstanding my dear !

And hah -- she slapped him? He totally deserved it, I wonder how he will react !

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SanzBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

its awesome dear.. so nicely written. loved it.. I've sent u buddy request, pls add me to ur PM list.. would love to read more of ur updates :)

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: ccuteaangel
Awesome update, I loved their kiss, it was amazingly written ! one of the best kiss scenes i have seen written before ! Outstanding my dear !

And hah -- she slapped him? He totally deserved it, I wonder how he will react !

Hi Hayley!
Woah! That is seriously a H-U-G-E compliment coming from an already awesome writer, like You!!
Thank you so much!! It really means a lot to me!!!😳 God promise! *pinching throat* 😆
Hahahah...😆 you'll get to know in the next update!!!

Annie😳

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caged23

@caged23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Holy lord you write brilliantly. Dont let the cat out of the bag too quickly please. I want to read more of these tension filled scenes

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polly_mk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Loved it. Too good. Great writing! I could feel the intensity of the conversation. Awesome description of their sudden passionate kissing. Please continue.

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simran2697

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

please!!!! keep continuing that was amazing I luved it. its porbably the best O.S I have read today. Awesome job! you did an amazing job witht he description and hindi to english translation

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