Tum Se Hi (MG) #2 (last part/Epi @pg 71) 15th July

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

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^^ main toh aa gayi lekin meri bacchi kaun hai...😲...🤣

abhi toh ek part kiya..abhi hi next bhi de doon...do u think i will do it...😈

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: jyoti_l
^^ main toh aa gayi lekin meri bacchi kaun hai...😲...🤣
tujhe pata nahi?? 😲... koi baat nahi kuch hi saalon you'll know🤣

abhi toh ek part kiya..abhi hi next bhi de doon...do u think i will do it...😈
haan de doh na next part... usse pakkad ke kya karogi... dekho humara chehra kitna masoomiyat se tumhe dekh raha hai... don't u feel indebted to these innocent faces... *puppy dog eyes*

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Maaneet099

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

I thought earlier this would be emotional for Geet

but you can write emotions so well

👏👏

you were marvelous

I lack words to explain

I can only say that I felt a lump in my throat when I read the last lines

well done

will eagerly wait for the next part

where Maan finds her missing the unborn baby

and imagining filling that emptiness in her

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jenny

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Beautiful part Jyoti.
Maan's whole family are so joyful, the convo btwn all of them were so fun to read.
Geet poor soul, she was so emotional seeing Maan's family.
Loved the way you described her feelings about Maan's family and also her visit to the new born babies.
Now she is all set to have Maan's baby, I hope she will be aware of her feelings for Maan.