SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update
it is turning very interesting

thanks for your lovely comments dear.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
di today...

ab main sone jaa rhi hoon...

apke pass 2 n half hr aur h, jaldi ud do...😈...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome update...👏

veer is never going to change...but i am happy that he is controlling himself infront of chandani n not misbehaving...n not revealing his true face in front of her...😊
n they shared their feelings with their fr8's n denied it at same moment...god...what to do with them...really not able to understand...😕

''...He looked at the beautiful mountains surrounded all over the place...he could see the snow clad mountains far away..."...never have I seen anyone so beautiful, who knows when and where shall we meet again, the world can't stop me now, I have made a vow to myself...''

Kehtein hai khuda ne,Iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya,Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Mano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

''...Chandni took a deep breath and opened her eyes "i don't know why a stranger seems so intimate and right...i don't know why I am constantly lost in thought, anything I say...I say haltingly and fearfully..."

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta,Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane,Humein kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai,Phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah yahi hai,Marna isi ke liye

Kehtein hai khuda ne,Iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya,Har kisi ke liye
Ho ho ..hmm..oh ooo..hey

''...Veer smiled "because she is different...i don't know why she dwells in my heart...,i don't know what sort of bond is this...what sort of dreams are these...,i don't know why she stays every moment near my heart...he closed his eyes for a second "keep burning me with your desire, by coming into my dreams...''

Hmm..Meherbaani jaate jaate,Mujhpe kar gaya
Guzarata sa lamha ek,Daaman bhar gaya
Tera nazaara mila,Roshan sitaara mila
Takdeer ki kashtiyon ko,Kinaara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hai,Jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri saubat mein hai,Duayein hai usi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Mano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
''...Chandni closed her eyes "i don't know what sort of change this is...,i don't know about the spell...all I know is that I am not in myself...someone has stolen me...,there is always a bizarre feeling around me...''
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta,Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane,Humein kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai,Phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah yahi hai,Marna isi ke liye

''...Chandni couldn't understand how she uttered something unusual...she wasn't unfamiliar but there was something disturbing her...''

Kehtein hai khuda ne,Iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya,Har kisi ke liye

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta,Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane,Humein kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Ho ho ..hmm..oh ooo..hey...😍


poor dadi is also in worry for chand...grandmaa...just chilax...jo bhi hota hai ache k liya hi hota hai...so don't worry...apka ye evil person hi apki princess ko is evil duniya se bachayega...he will change...ur princess will change him...dekhna...she is born for it...😉
n that box...kaka...is also worry...why is every one worried...so much......god is their for everyone n for everything...just leave it on god...he will take care of everything...
n chand is back...veer saw her...n lost...😍...i really want him realise his feelings for chand...he should understand that it's his love for chand that is making him crazy...not lust...
n thank u for the long update...🤗
update soon...
luv u...😊

my dear ridzzi...thank you so much for your wonderful comments with "songs" i loved reading them...too good and they match the situation...lov u for this...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sparksfly

woow... di...dat was amazing !! 👏

just luvd it !!
Veer wont change so fast...but he atleast rembrd her words...
he was NJOYNG himself in d beautiful darjeeling all by himself !!!
pehele to he h8d d place !!!
well, jab pyaar hota hai...to sab accha lagna lagta hai... 😆
luvd d words Chadani n Veer said 2 manohar n maneka...
so..poetic...bEaUtifUl !!!!! me was lost in its ambiance...😍
n both didnt realise d powerful words they had spoken...
wats dis mystery ?? 😕
Veer is TOTALLY mesmerised - hypnotiised by Chandani !!! 😃
n she is also changng... 😉
she said she'l never fall in luv...y ??? n wats d story of her dad???😕
stOry is really xcitng !!!
u r a brilliant writer !!!
luv u...🤗
plzz ud soon...
P.S- u luk realy cUtE !!

thanks for the wonderful comments...oops so many questions...i guess you will get all the answers in next few updates... thank you for appreciating me,but i am not a writer...i am far from that yet...but i try my best to write well...that is all because of Ranju who keeps on inspiring me... i will surely update soon...thank you so much for appreciating dear...loved reading your comments..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Awesome update.

Luvd it.
Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hain.
Veer n Chandni both r going through the same phase n getting attracted to each other
I hope they dont misunderstand their feelings n I hope mu does not take place between them due to Veer's lies.
Hope her love purifies his heart, mind n soul.
update soon

thanks for your lovely comments dear...where were you? reading your comments after long time...and i am waiting for an update for tere liye...i will update but i want an update as well😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

awesome update😊

yeh veer kabhi nhi sudher sakta🤣
chand ko impress karne ke liye kitna juth bolta h🤣...or uske baad phir se wahi harkate🤣...dumbooo😡

e smirked "yes Chandni...you should try first to know whether its worst or the best thing one can try" (mujhe laga tha nhi piyega...chand ke liye😕...)

he was just impossible😡...

chand was so happy...becoz of him😳😳😳
hmm...kuch kuch hota h...😳😳

Chandni looked into her eyes "that day will never come..."(that day come very soon darling😃)


waiting for next update😛
update soon😛
thanks for pm😊

pls update mjkt


luv u😳


oh thank you so much sweetie...will update soon and regarding MJKT i will take some more time...i can't write unless it comes in my mind...lov u too baby 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
di today hi ud dena,...

ab main sone jaa rhi hoon...

apke pass 2 n half hr aur h, jaldi ud do...😈...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

are in dono ke liye main hi gana ga deti hu

ho gya hai tumhe pyaarrr ooo ho gya hai tumhe pyaar

ye yaar karne wae 1 baar me samjhte kyu nahi pyaar ki bhasha

loved it

continue soon

thanks dear...loved your song... will continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: caged23

This whole story has a mystical feeling... It's lovely! I really like this style of writing and layout. 👍🏼

thanks for appreciating dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manipadma

ooohhhooo...!!!! I'm just loving the bkground environment of story...freshnesss, excitement n suspence !!!! Your story is full of these three 😃 ❤️

thanks for your appreciation...was waiting for your comments... thanks for incouraging...😊

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