SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 28

Awesome update.

awesome update😊😊😊😊😊

yeh veer kabhi nhi sudher sakta🤣
chand ko impress karne ke liye kitna juth bolta h🤣...or uske baad phir se wahi harkate🤣...dumbooo😡

e smirked "yes Chandni...you should try first to know whether its worst or the best thing one can try" (mujhe laga tha nhi piyega...chand ke liye😕...)

he was just impossible😡...

chand was so happy...becoz of him😳😳😳
hmm...kuch kuch hota h...😳😳

Chandni looked into her eyes "that day will never come..."(that day come very soon darling😃)

waiting for next update😛
update soon😛
thanks for pm😊

pls update mjkt


luv u😳

are in dono ke liye main hi gana ga deti hu

ho gya hai tumhe pyaarrr ooo ho gya hai tumhe pyaar

ye yaar karne wae 1 baar me samjhte kyu nahi pyaar ki bhasha

loved it

continue soon

This whole story has a mystical feeling... It's lovely! I really like this style of writing and layout. 👍🏼

ooohhhooo...!!!! I'm just loving the bkground environment of story...freshnesss, excitement n suspence !!!! Your story is full of these three 😃 ❤️

superb update dear 😊...loved it 😳...

it is just getting more & more mysterious ...& also more interesting 😍...

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

so amazing ud di.😳

well i jus thought veer won't be dat easy to change.

i could have bet on thisat least i would have earned sm thng,...che!!! missed it yaar!

though under her proximity he behaves, but still the same wen away frm her.

the dialogue u gave to him during nite ws mindblasting...

well he is sooperbo in this case👍🏼-RAAT GAYI, BAAT GAYI...😎...sooperb boss.😆

in morning he ws early to wake...😲...

poor veer, can't sleep due to restlessness n chand's dreams...😆...

the dialogues u give them while they were thinking of each other were really so apt,

u deserve a pyaari, lovely shovley jhaappi here.🤗

dis ud ws best wen they think of each...

chand talking to maneka n veer to manohar.😃

gosh! veer don't want accept that she lives in him, his senses want to feel her...thats y he exclaims his love always out of consciousness, wen he is back wid his mind, he rejects...kabhi nhi sudherga yeh ladka.

same goes with his partner chand......

both are equal in attitude, consider themselves on top of world...

they both neglects that they r fallen for someone......

gosh!!!...kya hoga inka...!!

bhaagvaan bharose h yeh dono...or to say, di bharose h veer-chand coz di is writer.

u mean the black box is still intact?????????

but chand touched him right??????

then hw come?

i m confused here di...

veer thinks of calling his good for nothing gf,...why???

he wants to escape frm chandini i guess...😉...her trance is not letting him breath...

but he cuts the call as soon as he hears her voice...

dat surely means she is above all useless gals in his life for him...😳...

happy for this

she wore a short black dress, surely killed veer...😍...

n he is back is again in his very true avatar...

hats off to veer...😉..he is the one piece in world.😃

😳

terminal line- screw up brew, i wanna wishky...😆...

mind blowing again...⭐️..

so here goes ma punch line, wid no modification at all...coz ma di is as usual sopper in this ud too...but i can bring a little modification as ur writing, i m enjoying more n more...

u r amazinggg...and authentic...

love u di.🤗

ud soon.

wa8ing😳

thanks sweetie...i am not that amazing, just trying to write well, i am not a writer...its all an inspiration and encouragement by Ranju who thinks i can write well...but believe me i only write because of you all who aprreciate my FF...thanks to you all, love you for posting such a sweet and long comment...🤗.will try and update soon...😊 remember i always wait for your chweet comments...sweetie...😊

Originally posted by: princesspriyart

o god kaisa h ye ldka chodne ki jagh ulta chand ko drink try krne ko kh rha h 😛
or ye kya koi bhi manne ko tyar nhi h hmmm bt truth is truth
tum dono ko pyar ho gya h ji
for veer
ye ldka haaye allah kaisa h diwana
kitna mushkil h yaara isko smjhana
such me veer ko smjhana bhut mushkil h
bechara manohar pta nhi kaise jhelta hoga
bt kya kre jhelna to pdega hi akhir uska best buddy jo h 😆
veer ki gf 😡
vo hak sirf ek ka hi h chand ka
wah wah kya bat h gf ka ph cut kr diya chand ki aawaz sun kr 😳
ye to hona hi tha 😆
w8ing for next ud

thanks a lot sweetie...will try and update soon...😊

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

hey.. just yesterday i was thinking about the update.. :)

story is turning too mysterious.. and dam interesting..

please reveal some secrets yaar :)

hey
thanks dear...for secrets you will have to wait for the next updates...lets see if i can update today...😊