SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
wow another rtmc ff😛
im super excited 4 this ff now😊

plsss update sooon dear luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
wooowww one more rt-mc ff...tht too from u dhanvi... Its like cherry on top :-)
Loved the update and looking forward to the intro of ''VEER RAICHAND''
Continue sooonn
Thanx for the pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
wow...one more RT-MC FF...🥳
congratulations...n thanx for sharing it...🤗
awesome start...👏
loved the title...of the story...
n ur banner is really amazing one...as per ur title...of the story...just perfect...👍🏼
n part fist is amazing...seems chandani is full of attitude...waiting for our the gr8 veer raichand...😉
well as u said that DANGEROUS LOVE...so be like it...not that typical love stuff n typical fight...a thriller one...n we believe u...u will give us a story like we want......muahhh...❤️

''...Her life was going smooth...she was happy and satisfied...nothing was wrong until he saw her one day...''

n now after these lines...it will become a bit difficult to wait...
update soon...
luv u...😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
wow...one more RT-MC FF...🥳
congratulations...n thanx for sharing it...🤗
awesome start...👏
loved the title...of the story...
n ur banner is really amazing one...as per ur title...of the story...just perfect...👍🏼
n part fist is amazing...seems chandani is full of attitude...waiting for our the gr8 veer raichand...😉
well as u said that DANGEROUS LOVE...so be like it...not that typical love stuff n typical fight...a thriller one...n we believe u...u will give us a story like we want......muahhh...❤️

''...Her life was going smooth...she was happy and satisfied...nothing was wrong until he saw her one day...''

n now after these lines...it will become a bit difficult to wait...
update soon...
luv u...😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#15

woowww seems interesting...

the name itself seems more than interesting..

making me curious...

continue soon..

thnx for the pm/...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
love it love it
hope it wil b full of thrill n chills

loved the banner n the font but i do have wish can u pls use other rtmc pics i.e more handsome n beautiful respectively this is coz mugs is a bussiness student n all n i guess rajat really wil b super something (as the fff is suspense can describe his character shades),i mean to say that rajats more handsome pic . pls pls.


sorry if i have offended u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG..! u must b one hell of a crazy RTMC fan (just like me..😎).! 3 ffs at a time..! great going dhanvi...👍🏼 keep up the good wrk..
concept seems interesting..tanks 4 the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatzfathi

OMG..! u must b one hell of a crazy RTMC fan (just like me..😎).

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even me.😎...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lollss..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2


Darjeeling


It was not a silent morning as usual, she could see black clouds covering all over the sky...she took out the umbrella from her huge cabinet...that was very old, indeed that was her Grandmother's old style...black color with a little crown on its top...


she disliked rains, but she had no choice, everyday she walked all over her tea estate build by her Grandfather...it was big and had many women working over the place...she loved talking to all her workers...she knew about their families and children now...Chandni was respected and loved all over the place, even though she was proud...but at the same time she was emotional and very sensitive...


she was wearing her blue jeans and high boots...red is her favorite color...she loves red color...she wore her black color top and a small jacket with red stole...with her soft and fair hands she picked up a glass and poured some juice...she never liked ordering her servant Kamla for little things...she liked to do everything herself...


She had lots of patience...she rarely got angry, no one ever saw her angry...she spoke very less...she hates someone who keeps on talking all the time without any reason...she's very quiet and has a small world inside her...she never likes sharing her moments with anyone...she never had any best friend...but she has one close friend who lives far from her place...she always meets her when she goes to college...she attends her college three times a week.

Chandni was still brushing her silky hair when her Mother called her "Chandni...please have your breakfast..."


she had to go...even if she didn't want to eat anything...because she will never hurt her Mother...her Mother is everything for her...she simply loves her more than anything else...she knew how her Mother had raised her and gave her every happiness in life...


"Morning Mom..." she said while picking up one red apple...she opened her mouth to have a bite and started chewing the juicy apple...her lips were pink, that seemed like a rose petal...though she never applied any lip color...she had a natural beauty...most of her college friends were jealous of her...as she had everything perfect...all her features were designed with utmost care...she was the most beautiful girl in her college...anyone who would see her once could never forget her face...


Most of the women workers in the tea estate always looked at her for her wonderful smile...the moment Chandni smiled, it seemed thousands and millions of flowers gathered from heaven are showering all over the place...her sweet voice made everybody smile...


The clouds had covered entire place making it dark...they say it wasn't good...people who lived in a small village down the hill regarded it as a bad omen...


It was 10a.m and as usual Chandni started walking towards her tea estate that wasn't far from her house...she preferred walking rather than driving...it was difficult for her to drive in a narrow path and around the hills...someone has to be an expert driver to drive around the area.

With a black umbrella in one hand and a small bag in her other hand...she walked briskly towards the path...the high boots prevented any dust or mud on her clothes...she always wanted herself clean...her red stole was nicely covered around her neck and her silky hair were left open...


Her big eyes were looking for the manager of the estate...Mrs Verma was working in the tea estate since many years...she managed everything very nicely...she was very particular about giving all the reports to Chandni...she always loved Chandni as her own daughter...


Chandni looked at Mrs Verma "good morning Verma Aunty..."

Mrs Verma always waited for Chandni's lovely smile... "i am very well...how are you Chandni?"

Chandni never treated her like her employee but always looked up at her as a family member.


Mrs Verma as usual gave her the daily report...for the previous day...


Chandni took the report "thanks Aunty...i will go for a round..."

she went outside the small office...and looked at the sky... her fair and innocent face looked at the dark clouds...she blinked her eyes '..it was raining now...she quickly went inside the small office...

Mrs Verma turned towards Chandni "Chandni, you shouldn't go out today...look at the weather...i have never seem such a dangerous weather in my life...you must have stayed at home...we don't have any workers today...you know they all consider it bad...and its difficult to work in the rain"

Chandni looked at her huge estate "i know aunty...but you know I always follow my routine..."

she said and quickly went out...it was raining...but Chandni went around the whole estate '..

Mrs Verma wasn't surprised to see Chandni's behavior... "she's as stubborn as her Mother"


After few hours Chandni was returning back from the estate, when she saw a very old lady sitting in the rain... Chandni stopped and bent down towards her... "its raining...you please take this umbrella...otherwise you will fall sick"

The old lady looked at Chandni "no beta...i am absolutely fine...this rain cannot harm me...but you must be careful...this is a signal for you"

Chandni couldn't understand her words "sorry I didn't get you" she said while the old lady looked into Chandni's eyes... "i don't know what to say...you will yourself embrace the biggest danger in your life" Chandni was little scared now...the old lady smiled...suddenly a loud sound made her tremble...the clouds were roaring...it was getting dark... "sorry I have to go home..."

She started walking towards the narrow path when again she heard something for the old mouth "may the smile on your lips never die."


Chandni walked faster...she was scared of dark...she felt as if someone will surely come and hold her from behind...she always ran from her own shadows...

as soon as she reached home she kept the umbrella at the dockyard and walked up towards her room... she closed the door and took a long breath of relief...then she closed her eyes for a moment and recalled what the old lady had said...

she opened her eyes and walked towards her wardrobe... she quickly went to change...she knew the warm shower will make her forget everything...


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Mumbai


Raichand Mansion...


Digvijay Raichand was famous industrialist...he was settled in England but now he moved to his mansion in Mumbai...his wife expired when his only Son Veer Raichand was two years old...Digvijay did not marry again...but he was so busy in expanding his business that he forgot about his Son...

Digvijay loved Veer very much, he always fulfilled all his wishes and that was his biggest mistake...

Digvijay now wanted Veer to settle in his life, so he called him over to Mumbai from England...

It was afternoon...Digvijay was waiting for his Son to join him for Lunch...

"please call Veer ...i was waiting for breakfast but he didn't come and now lunch...where is he and what is he doing"

Kaka was working with Digvijay since Veer was five years old...he very well knew what Veer was upto... "yes my Sir...i will go and check chote sahib"


Kaka sahib knocked at Veer's door... Veer loved and respected him like his own Father and never hurt him... "chote Sahib please open the door...sir is waiting for you at lunch"

there was no response... Kaka was about to knock again but then he knew what to do...he went towards Manohar's room...

Manohar was Veer's childhood friend and he knew everything about Veer...

"Manohar, where are you??" Kaka called out... Manohar knew he will be in trouble now...he quickly called Veer...but Veer wasn't answering the phone...

Kaka reached Manohar's room and saw him on the phone... "where is Chota sahib??"

Manohar "Veer...is in his room..." he said with a scared tone as if some bomb will explode soon...

"i will go and call him...you please stay here Kaka"

Kaka wasn't surprised "yes I think that is better...please come down soon...Sir is waiting for lunch"


Manohar quickly rushed to Veer's room... "Veer...Veer...open the damn door..."

after he knocked many times the door opened a little... Manohar peeped inside and then closed his eyes... "you haven't changed...at least you would have thought this is your ancestral house...and your Father is sitting downstairs..."


Veer had strong features...he was very stubborn and alcoholic...his eyes frowned at Manohar "you know me since childhood and even then you ask me"

Manohar didn't say anything, he knew if Veer gets angry then he will not be able to control him...Veer's eyes were still red as he was drinking all night... Manohar was not at all surprised to see different women on his bed...Veer was so handsome that where ever he went women run after him... he never felt any regret for what he was doing...

"Women come to me...i don't go to them..." he said while getting ready...

Manohar quickly looked at the bed... "can you ask her to leave now...???"

Veer "wake her up and show her the door..."


Manohar heard his phone bell... "hi Misha...you called on my phone?? how can I help you dear lady"

Misha shouted at Manohar "just pass the phone to Veer...you jerk"

Manohar "you broke my heart..." and gave the phone to Veer...

Misha was happy to hear Veer's voice "when are you coming to club...i am waiting for you darling"

Veer "don't know..."

Misha "please...come soon"

Veer "i said, I don't know...and don't irritate me" he threw the phone carelessly...

Manohar looked at Veer and smiled "hmmm...you are so lucky, girls are dying to meet you...talk to you...how do you manage to like all of them at one time??"

Veer "i don't like anyone...now stop your nonsense..." he walked out of the room...

his personality made him the most unique man...he was full of attitude...he always got what he wanted...being very stubborn and dominating he never listened to anyone expect his Father and Kaka...


he came downstairs and saw his Father waiting for him... "i never ask you to wait for me Dad...you please go ahead..." his Father looked at his handsome Son... "its been after so many years that we are together...come have some lunch"

Veer had a big frown on his forehead... "i already had lunch...sorry I have to leave..." he put on his sunglasses and left...


Digvijay was worried about Veer's changing attitude... "day by day he is going away from me"

Kaka was listening and saw Digvijay's sad face "My Sir...you must do something to keep him involved with you...it seems chote Sahib is running from work..."

Digvijay gave a thought about it...he knew Veer did what he wanted, he knew his only Son was alcoholic, he knew Veer wasn't happy...there was something very strange about him...he knew he was responsible for his Son's cold attitude...even though Veer had everything in life, he seemed unsatisfied...there was something missing in his life...

Digvijay never wanted to loose his Son...he had to think of some solution that would help Veer get out of his addiction...that would make Veer realize his responsibility...


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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago

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