IPKKND-Arhi SS: Complexity *Upd. Last Pt on Pg. 43 - Page 38

Originally posted by: lil_kuri

I loved the ending :)

Originally posted by: Hunnybunny3

Beautifully written and what a lively ending. Very filmy...just right for Khushi. Thanks for the pm. Loved reading this SS. Hope to read plenty more from you.xx

P.S sorry my 'like' button isn't working but loved it as always.xx

Originally posted by: iwilldare

Beautiful story :) and what a great way to end it.

Originally posted by: indy12

and the lived happily ever after

Originally posted by: InvisibleSmile

reserved, for a big comment :)
Edited.

Okay so i read it and idk where you got the idea that i write better than you (I got the idea by reading your stuff!!!) because you write so beautiful with each emotion so easily to follow through. I just love the title and the concept you took for this story, something i wished to see actually in the show, it would have been the amazing, big dramatic twist. But anyway, glad you wrote it, as i got to see this plot come true. The whole planning between, AK was wonderful, and the little moments they had together in the room, from the drunk, to both having silent wars was wonderful <33 they are just so mega cute sobi and you brought that out wonderfully. Arnav's anger was justified at shyam's actions but shyam trying to kill the baby was so shocking, what is that innocent childs fault!😡 I am really glad they took him out together, and in the process their feelings came upfront also, so it was that much more beautiful. And the ending beautiful ending, can't really imagine Arnav Singh Raizada on one knee, but than again love makes you do the craziest of things, so this was exceptionally wonderful. And so they lived on happily forever, they deserve it after, a true pleasure to read.

You know now that i have read this, i want you to finish up in disguise quickly so i could read it one go also. I just love your writing style. Wonderful sobi jaani <3

-shiz

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Oh my Gosh!! That was awesome!! Loved it!

Happily ever after, at last!