Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1 - Page 89

READ THE WHOLE FF IN ONE GO!!!! LOL Ive finally caught up and i love it with each and every bone in my body and with each and every corner of my heart. OOOhhh! all the emotions the passion the intensity and the regret and pain yet the love it is all too good! I love it all the way. And I must compliment you on ur writing even when u say u wrote something in a hurry it still ends up perfectly painting pictures in my mind and every little thing is so real that I have to pinch myself to remind myself its only a FF! but a really good one! LOL and the cheeky voices are my favorite part i just gotta love them. I love it! cant tell u how much it touches me!

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Nice chapter...
I loved it all, especially the ending ;)

I loved how Arnav put the phone on speaker when he talked to Anjali and it's do like Khushi to get huffy over something like that. I loved how she tried to escape because deep down she could trust herself around him.

The cold and warmth scene totally reflects there relationship and you written it really well. Without each other there life is cold but with each other it's filled with warmth.

I loved the end where she clutched her chest and told him about her dhak dhak and he put her hand on his chest and said dhak dhak. Letting her in his own way know that his heartbeat gets fast around her as well.

Brilliantly written as always and hope you update soon :D

Updated post on Pg 137 ! :)

Amazing! I couldn't stop reading. I just came across this FF and read chapters 1 through 25 in one sitting. Looking forward to the next update! 👏

Ummm...the last update was awesome, specially the last bit! Finally they are coming close! <3

Just amazing...read al d chapters n luved dem al.. Specially last one

OMG..I love how you wrote Arnav's feeling..i was speechless and bawling reading it...i felt like i was just standing in the corner of their bedroom and listening him pour his heart out...😊

Hey there..I recently came across your FF and read it all in one go. It's beautiful!

What i liked the most is that the storyline started with ASR finding out the truth about Shyam and Khushi...! that's what got me reading...his emotions and state of mind when he finds out is written very nicely!

It troubles me to see the state that khushi is in..her lively, bubbly spirit defines her, we can't have that dying out..:( she has suffered a lot for no fault of her own..

I love the way they're still aware of each other..the fluttering of the heart, disruption of normal breathing, butterflies in the stomach..caused by the mere presence of the other! How poetic! J Sooo.. Arnav detests himself for what he has done?! Good...i love Arnav, immensely, but what he did to khushi was just...vicious! So i'm looking forward to a good amount of begging, pleading, grovelling and wooing on his part to win Khushi back..!

Shyam...he just enrages me..how can a person be so vile, evil and disgusting is beyond me..but i must concede that he is a perfect villain..

Thank goodness Arnav has finally realised that he is a maniac..a dangerous man who knows no bounds..and it was so cool to see Shyam's words having a completely unexpected effect on Arnav...he came to realise what is at stake here!

Aww..how i love the new repentant, caring, loving Arnav who's taking the effort to make it up to khushi even with all those small affectionate gestures! Khushi is in for a ride...she is going to have a hard time trying to gather her wits in the conflict of her own emotions...

I thoroughly enjoyed reading their journey through all the emotional turmoil of khushi's and Arnav discovering himself bit by bit as the story progresses. How they healed and evolved!

I didn't see that love confession coming, though! I was so surprised...pleasantly, of course. A lot changed after that, their interaction..their perception..very nicely done!

Even all the romantic moments, all the Rabba ves were well timed and well scripted! My heart was fluttering, dancing, somersaulting while reading all of them 😆

i'm so in love with this story...it's so well planned and fabulously written! Brilliannt characterisation..of Arnav and Khushi especially! I'm too awed..can't find the right words! Excellent job! 👏 Eagerly looking forward to the coming chapters!

P.S- Hope i haven't bored you with all the redundant chatter!😳

So far I have read 11 chapter of ur work and I should say I am in love with ur work. U r one freakishly awesome writer. Couldnot express how happy I feel when I read ur work. If I were u i would publish ur writings in a book.thank u so much for sharing ur writings with all of us. Plz buddy me if u like to for ur future works. Looking farword to read more of ur writings.

this chapter was amazing 👏 ur an amazing writer!!! loved how arnav put so much thought into the present he gave to khushi!!!