Punishment Of Pretense-SS (prt5 pg17)

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Sara

@immayurfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

nice ss

could you please pm me when you update

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shwetapt

@shwetapt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

wow.. good writing.. seems so realistic. Loved it.. Please update soon with the next part

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Archana Natarajan

@archanan14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Considering everything till Part 2 has happened correctly so far, wonder if Part 3 will come true too... Poor Khushi! 😭

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Almost forgot! Awesome story btw 😊 Please do continue!

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Geet24

@Geet24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wow...it touched my heart...zee-news said same things are gonna happen in the show 😭

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suadvani

@suadvani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

loved it - and I get the family are angry she ran of and got married - but hope they will snap out of it.. and accept the marraige and her.. especially as they know her, she wouldnt have taken such a bold step without a reason..

love it though please continue!

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Ohh God :| Khushi LOST Everything :( Arnav Didn't Do Anything Man 🥺

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mimi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

pls do pm me the nxt time u update!!!!!

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

ohh poor Khushi got the brunt of everything!
the last words r so cruel..i personally believe that any time parents adopt a child they should never ever say to that child due to any reason that she proved she is not their own!

it must be so heart breaking..i wish Khushi tells at the very least payal!