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Posted: 13 years ago
So maan n geet r married n brij hijackd...awsome prt
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Hope maan will be able to save dem...grt prt
raj n romeo 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it ...

who was that south man hmm😕

romeo won't leave that raj 😆

continue soon

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Woww 3 Part Awesome Update
loved it

poor maan feeling sad 😭
raj n romeo...😆😆

waiting for plan..cont.soon
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Awesome update dearies!!!!! Loved it... Poor Raj!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Plzzz cont soonn!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part dear...😛..very nice story...

omg romeo 🤣...bechaara raj...😆..

thanks for pm dear...

continue soon...waiting for next part...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hery dear
awesome part
poor maan ...he was so helpless but he wont give up so easily afterall he is Maan Singh Khurana
I really liked Yash-Meera's fight, in this situation also they managed to fight and not to forget Romeo...poor Raj😆
update soon
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chapter 4:



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Romeo is continsly torturing him and raj is bearing him becoz he have no other way as he cant move from his seat'

here in the flight brij came there n spoke

Attention everybody, I think the higher officials dont care about you. Thats why they are not taking any decisions quickly.

He took out the plastic explosive n fixed it in the flight.

Only 12 hours is left within 5 hours if they dont contact us then I will blast everything.

Geet: what the hell is this?? u gave 24 hours time right?? then why u r doing all this??

Brij: Dont shout u r not cop here just a mere passenger. Dont think too much. Chup chap baiti raho. Once my brother is out we will show our power. I wont leave u that easily.

In return geet only smirked.

After sometime one of the passenger asked

passenger: excuse me, u asked ur demands right? Atleast give us food, there are so many children and old people here. Some diabetic patients are also here they should not starve for so long. Try to understand us.

Brij called the officer.

Officer: hello brij, see we r still discussing about the issue.

Brij: first listen, here all the passengers are straving. So send the food to them.

Officer (happy): thanku brij, we will send now.

Brij: ok, but dont try to do anything.

Officer: sure.

They cut the call n informed the other air hostress to send food for the passengers who are in the flight. After 30 min one of the boy took the food packets into the flight.

Brij told the boy leave from there n asked his men to distribute the packets.

Brij: now dont ask anything. Just sit in your places n eat. He left there.

Here geet didnt open the food packet she is thinking about maan. Suddenly yash asked..

Yash: geet what u think the officials will do now?

Geet: it will depend on their demads. First of all they will ask atleast to release ladies and children.

Meera: ha geet they can do that na.

Yash: kyun tum bhaag jaane ke liye.

Geet: look guys, dont except the officials to release him, because many officers lost their lives to arrest him. He did many illegal activities like selling drugs in colleges. Even small small children are addicted to this. U know how their parents feel by seeing their children in that state. Yash as a doctor you see many drug cases right??

yash: yes geet.

Meera: that means you r really doctor?

Yash: yes I am, it doesnt mean that if there is a stethoscope around my neck then only I am a doctor.

Meera: ok ok fine I am sorry.

Yash to geet: Hmm geet can I ask u one more question.

Geet: yes yash.

Yash: why they all r not eating??

geet smiled n told until we eat they even dont touch the food. They have a doubt that, they the airport officials might mixed some drugs in it.

Yash: oh ok.. by the way why u are not eating??

geet: how can I when my maan is worried so much there.

Yash smiled seeing their love for each other.

Geet (st): maan plz u take care. I am fine here, nothing will happen to me until u r there. Plz you eat something. I know about you maan, you will be worried about me. I love you maan.

Here a smile crept on maan's lips as if he heard what geet told.

Maan (st): I am also fine shona, but I am worried about u. until n unless I see u I cant live in peace. Plzz u have your food. I have to go now.

Here officials are discussing what to do.

Maan: sir what u decided?

Officer: see maan we cant approve u. we cannot take risk by commando operation.

Maan got frustated n asked so what we have to do sir?? release that dev. Dont you know about him n his illegal activities. From past 5 years we are searching for him. That time you preasurised us to arrest him. When we arrested him now you r thinking of releasing him. Then what is the use of arresting him n interrogating him when u all decided to release him.

Shashank: see maan nothing is there in our hands. This is all unexpected.

Maan: sir as a commando n as a cop we have to face all the situations. Sir still 12 hours time is there tonight we can go for commando operation. Plz sir one chance.

Officer: Mr. maan its not that easy for commando operation. Try to understand.

Maan: sir u try to understand. Passengers will be safe. N there is a cop in that flight Mrs. geet khurana. We can take her help.

Officer: no maan its not possible. We dont know what are the weapons they are having with them.

Maan: sir that leave it to me I will fine out.

Officer: sorry maan, till we discuss this matter with CM we cant anything.

Maan was really pissed off with their decision. Maan was pacing from one corner to other in his cabin. Just then adi entered.

Maan to adi: adi did u check the list.

Adi: yes maan, actually yesterday the cleaner after cleaning the flight no one saw him. So he might be somehow linked with it.

Maan: what is his name? Do u know where is he now.

Adi: yes maan I found where is he n his name is Amar.

Maan: ok where is he??

adi: he is in *******. it will take 4 hours by road.

Maan: we dont have much time. By flight??

adi: 45 min.

maan: ok then chalo we will go. Other than we two only 2 officers more.

Adi: yes sir.

Maan, adi n other 2 officers left in the private flight to catch that cleaner. They reached after 45 min there. That cleaner is in a small dhaba having his food.

Adi went nea him with a cigerate in his hand n asked boss do u have match stick.

Cleaner: yes I have n gave to adi.

Adi kept his hand on his shoulder n asked where r u from?

Then cleaner saw him n got scraed.

Cleaner: police??

without hearing the reply he started running from there. Maan n other officers saw him running n started chasing.

Maan: officers we have to catch him at any cost.

Others: yes sir.

The cleaner entered into a construction site. In that construction site the roof is yet to be constructed so they are supported by a sticks n there is no parapet wall.

Cleaner climbed the top floor followed by maan, adi n other officer.

Cleaner: dont come near me. I will jump.

Maan to adi: we want him alive, nothing should happen to him.

Maan to cleaner: arey bhai we know that u didnt do that chori in jewellery shop. Your brother did it n we arrested him. So dont worry we just need statement.

Cleaner is confused whom maan is talking with n what is that chori in jewellary shop. But he is still scared n told dont come near me. I will jump. So dont come.

At the same time one of the officer climed the sticks n the cleaner is facing his back to that officer. Maan saw the officer climbing the sticks n smiled. Then within no time the officer pushed the cleaner from back n he fell down. Taking the chance maan n adi catched him n took him into custody.

Cleaner: sir I didnt do anything pls save me.

Maan: do u know whom u helped?

Cleaner: no sir, one of the man asked me to put some packet in the flight. He told he will send money to me n told not to come for job atleast for 6 months. But they didnt give me any money n I was afraid to come for job. So I was roaming here n there n I dont have any money sir.

Maan slapped him n asked u do whatever they tell. Dont you use your brain.

Cleaner: sir they offered me heavy amount. I thought I can live happily with my family n started crying.

Maan: what is there in that packet?

Cleaner: I didnt see sir.

Maan: do u know how much wait it might be?

Cleaner: some 6-7 kgs sir. Plz leave me sir. I wont do anything.

Maan and adi are shocked to hear this.

Maan: omg.. 6-7 kgs n closed his eyes.

Adi: maan that means??

maan: yes.

Maan: take him into custody adi. Until the problem is solved dont leave him.

Adi: ok maan.

Adi took him n arrested him.

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in the flight talk between the baby n one of the men of brij.

girl: uncle..

man: enti amma (what baby)

girl: naaku maa grand paa ni chudalani undi. (I want see my grand paa).

Man: vellipotav amma inkonchem sepu. (u will go baby. Few more hours).

Girl: kaani mamalni champestarani antunnaru kada. (but he is telling that u will kill us).

Man: ledu baby. (no baby).

Girl started crying n told meeru abbadam cheptunnaru. Meeru nannu champestaaru. (u r lying. U will kill me).

Man: ledu baby. Nenu ninnu champanu (no baby I wont kill u).

But the baby is crying continously and started breathing heavily.

Man: baby baby emaindi amma. (baby baby what happened dear?).

Baby mom: plz meeru ikkadanunchi vellipondi. Tanaki munde aasthma undi. (plz u go from here. She is having aasthma).

Yash saw that n went near baby.

Yash: baby are u alright?

Baby mom: sir she didnt have medicines.

Yash checked the medicines n gave to that baby. Other passengers who are in the flight are praying for baby.

Yash gave her injection from the first ad kit which was given by air hostress.

Yash: ma'am now baby is fine. Let her sleep for some time.

Baby mom: thanku sir.

Yash smiled n went back to his seat.

Geet: good job yash.

Yash: thanku geet.

Meera: now I am believing that you are doctor.

Yash glared at her n both burst out into laughter.

Geet: guys this is the first time I am seeing u laugh.

Yash n meera both smiled at her...



precap: talk with CM and their decision. 😕



Hii friends here is part 4. hope u all like it.

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Love

-jyothi, mona.





Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago

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