MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER#2 (24-38) parts

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lovely and emotional update

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Amazing Update
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tat wazs\ an emotinal update,,,

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neha gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow jyothi dear what a emotional part..
some suspense are revealed...
now i ma very happy that vinod wala sach to samne aa gaya..
his story is painful...
the family reunion.. i am very happy... geet got her family back...
you made me emotional..
ohh that sweety is vinod's sister and through them vinod reached to his real sister...
wow what a mystery...
i think you are a qyeen in creating mystery, suspense and etc etc..
now what how maan knows about geet?
but he is THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA, he can do anything...
chalo waiting for next update...
love you dear..
hugs to you....

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Reshu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome update di!!!!!!

too many strong emotions...

son-mother

son-father

bro-sis!!!!!!!!

best frnds!!!!!!

wow !!!!!!!

maa the mastermind!!!!

wanna know di...

update soon😊

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nagajyothi

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Originally posted by: mayapari
update soon ll be waiting

updating destiny and love tonight dear...
will update this one tomorrow...

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Originally posted by: jyothikrish

updating destiny and love tonight dear...
will update this one tomorrow...

waiting for an update

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 37:

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How u know that I am in banglore asked geet confusingly.

Maan smirked n told kya laga maan singh khurana koi bewakoof hain kya?

Matlab?? asked geet.

U came to delhi 3 times from last 6 months. Tell me if it not true?? told maan n smirked at geet's expressions.

tu.. tum ko kaise pata?? asked geet by widening her eyes in shock.

Main MAAN SINGH KHURANA hu... told maan with full attitude.

Tell me na maan, how u came to know?? asked geet.

When maan was about to tell something maanvi started crying. Maan n geet turned towards her. Maan took her in his arms n asked aww why my princess is crying?? asked maan kissing her cheek.

But maanvi didnt stop crying. Geet I think she is hungry told maan.

No maan I dont think so, she just had milk told geet.

Then why she is crying? Asked maan worriedly.

Oh no I think she is in pain told geet n panicked.

Pain ?? wait we will go to bhai told maan n rushed to vinod's room.

Here in vinod's room pooja n vijaya are there talking with him.

Vinod bhai called maan.

Immediately vinod got up from pooja's lap n opened the door. He saw maanvi crying n maan tensed.

What happened maan?? asked vinod.

Dont know bhai, maanvi is crying told maan worriedly.

Vinod took her in his arms n rested her on the bed. Maan is carassing her face n trying to calm her down.

Beta dont cry, see daadi n naani are there here told maan.

Immediately vinod checked n gave her some medicine.

Nothing to worry, she had a small breathing attack told vinod.

Beta kya hua maanvi ko asked pooja worriedly.

Nothing to worry mama, she is fine now. Sometimes small children have such problems told vinod.

Pooja n vijaya kissed maanvi's forehead who is sleeping now due to medicine n left from there leaving them alone.

Bhai what happened asked geet.

Gudiya, there is nothing to worry, we have to give one strong medicine to her then everything will be fine. But we cant give now, have to wait for sometime told vinod.

Bhai nothing will happen to our princess na asked maan worriedly n fear in his eyes of losing his princess.

No maan, nothing serious told vinod.

They bid good bye to him n left from there. Maan made his princess sleep peacefully on his chest n on other side geet in his arms.

They both staring at their princess lovingly n carassing her cheeks. After some time maanvi got up n saw both maan n geet are sleeping. She frowned n thought when I am awake then how can they sleep. She stood up on his stomach n starting jumping. Maan slightly opened his eyes n saw his princess jumping n giggling. Suddenly when she was about to fall on the bed he held her tight.

Why my princess is not sleeping ?? asked maan kissing.

Maanvi pouted her lips n indicated towards window.

Do u want to go out?

Maanvi nodded her head. Maan smiled n took maanvi to the balcony.

Princess u fell cold, lets go inside.

Maanvi made a crying face. Maan smiled at her antics n both settled on the chair, maanvi on his lap.

Daa daa... maanvi started jumping on his lap feeling excited to be out in the night. Maan twirled her in the air n maanvi is laughing n giggling. It felt so peaceful for her to be in the arms of her dad. It is the most safest place in the whole universe.

Princess u know one thing, u look same a ur mom. She too loves to wake mw up in the night times n talk to me just like u. she use to call me, kabhi kabhi we talk for whole night. In this matter u r same like ur mom. U both are my life now.

Maanvi smiled at her dad. Sometimes father become with his children n play with them, talk with them, share their childhood memories with them. Now big business tycoon he might be, but he is also a father.

Maan is sharing with his princess about her mom, she is smiling once, giggling once n frowned once. Like she is able to understand each n every word he is telling. After some time maanvi slept on his lap. Maan smiled at her n made her sleep on the bed. When maan was about to move from there maanvi cluched his shirt tight, like she dont want to lave him for a second. A lone tear escaped from his eyes thinking how he missed his daughter this one year. He felt so unlucky. Maan too slept peacefully beside his 2 princess.

Next day morning:

Maan got up n saw his 2 princess are still sleeping. Just then he heard a knock at the door. He opened the door n saw anand there.

Good morning papa, aap? Do u need anything ?

Umm sorry for disturbing maan, actually I wanna see my daughter.

Come in papa, she is still sleeping.

This is the peaceful sleep she had in these years I think told anand n a lone tear escaped from his eyes.

Anand went near geet n kissed her forehead. He saw maanvi too sleeping same like geet n he smiled n kissed her forehead too.

Geet just got up n saw her dad n smiled.

Good morning dad wished geet n hugged him.

Good morning beta.

Maan too came n sat beside her. Maanvi too got up n she pulled geet's hair which is her favorite thing to do.

Ouch.. gasped geet.

They 3 turned back n saw maanvi rubbing her eyes. Awww she looked so cute. Maan took her in his arms n geet side hugged her dad.

Such a awesome scene geet is in her dad's arms n maanvi in her dad's arms. They talked for sometime n went to freshen up. After some time all of them came to dining area n having breakfast.

Suddenly maan n karthik looked at each other n smirked.

Papa can I ask u something asked maan to anand.

Ha beta told anand.

How do u know that geet is in banglore n about maanvi? Asked maan n smirked.

wo.. wo.. actually fumbled anand.

Yes dad boliye we r waiting told karthik.

Arey why u r scaring bhai, he will tell na told pooja.

Anand n geet looked at each other n exchanged a nervous smiles.

Papa, do u know one thing u act very well told maan.

Act ?? asked vinod confusingly.

Ji vinod bhai told karthik.

Matlab? Asked vinod.

Papa is out of coma 6 months back. Haina papa? Asked karthik.

All are shocked to hear this except maan.

What?? shouted vijaya. Is it true?

U two khurana brothers are impossible told anand. Now he know that there is no option left to tell the truth.

Yes I am out of coma 6 months back, but one question how cum u guys know??

I am doctor papa told karthik.

He gave a proud smile n told ok fine, 2 years back when I was in coma geet came to me before leaving the house, she told me what all happened. Even though I was in coma state but I was able to understand all that geet dont know. One day geet did a wrong thing that she wrote a letter to me what is going in her life after one year. She told to give this letter only to me. But I was not in a state to read, so they kept it aside. One more wrong thing she did is that there is her address in that letter. When I was out of coma 6 months back I read that letter. With the help of that address I found out geet's phone number n talked with her. I want to find some truth so I didnt tell anything to u guys n I managed hospital people. They helped me told anand n sighed.

Papa u too did one wrong thing. U acted very well. One day I came to hospital to see ur reports. Actually I came to ur ward that day n there was a laptop in ur ward. I was surprised to see laptop in ur room. I thought its chinna's laptop n he forgot here. As I want to check some mails I took it. But I got the shock of my life. U didnt log out of ur id n there were geet's mails in ur inbox told maan.

So in that way u came to know asked geet.

Yes n I asked chinna about ur condition papa, he told me that u r out of coma but dont know why u r acting. Then I came to know all. From that day I appointed my detective agency, they were following u n I kept a hidded camera in ur room. I came to all ur talks with geet. But I dont know where I missed about maanvi's matter. One day when I was in office I saw geet entered ur room. I was hell shocked to see her after a long time n I was happy too. Immediately I came to hospital to meet her. But to my bad luck she left by the time I reached there. I was silent for some days. Then again geet came to meet u to delhi, that time I followed her to the airport. There I saw shanti too. Then I came to know that shanti too helping her. Then I got to know that geet is staying in banglore, so I came here to open up a new branch. Even I know that geet is a professor in a college, so I changed the name of the banglore branch to KHT (khurana-handa technology). Unknowingly she sighed a deal with our company told maan n looked at geet.

Geet widened her eyes in shock n tears in her eyes.

That means u know all these days where am I?? asked geet.

Yes told maan proudly.

Oh so my laptop ditched me joked anand.

By no one smiled at him, all gave angry glare to him.

Yeh kya kiya ji aapne, aapko pata bhi hain hum kitne darr gaye the ek ek din, aur aapko mazak suj raha hain told vijaya n started crying.

Nahi vijaya, I didnt do it wantedly told anand.

Phir yeh sab kya anand asked rishab.

Tho main kya kar sakta hu, mujhe geet ke baare main sab kuch pata hain, aur yeh baat uss insaan jaanta hain. So he can do anything to know about geet. N he knows our weakness n that is my family. So he can do anything to my family. That I cant bear it, so inorder to keep u safe mujhe yeh sab karna pada. R u thinking that I am happy doing all these things, har waqt mera mann tha ki main aap sab se milu but its not safe for u told anand.

Ha mom, dad ne sahi kiya, when dad called me I was so happy but afraid of meeting him, everytime I came to delhi he arranged a private jet so that no one can see me. I cant see u all hurt because of me. Isiliye main ghar chodkar chali gayi, aapko ek aur baat batao mom, mama dad ka accident nahi tha told geet.

All of them gasped hearing this n had tears in their eyes, their daughter left the house because of them. How much sh thinks n loves them. Till today they dont know where is she n she is alone with her daughter.

Geet ek batao kisne kiya yeh sab aur kyun asked maan with full rage in his eyes.

Geet immediately hugged maan. Maan too hugged her back. Maan thought today its going to be a long day.

Geet broke the hug with anger n disgust in her eyes.

SID told anand n geet at a time.

Hii friends here is part 37. I dont know how this part is?? hope u liked it. I am very nervous.

Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.

Plz plz do comment, criticism is also welcome, I want to know ur opinions about this update. Hope I reached ur expectation if not plz do tell me, I will try to improve in next update.

p.s: next update of all my FF's n OS will be after monday... have exams this friday and saturday..

Waiting for ur response. 😳

Love
-jyothi😃

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago