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Wonderful part ...loved it...😳😛
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geet facing maan revealing her reason ...nice part...
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Chapter 28:


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In KM:

vijaya bhabhi bachon abi wapas aaraha hain. Mauje tho geet ko lekar pareshan hu. Jab usko pata chalega tho kya hoga.

Mujhe bhi darr lag raha hain. Geet ko kaun sambhalega.

Wahi tho bhabhi. They all enjoyed the trip n coming happily.

Kya hua mama came a voice from behind.

Pooja n vijaya turned back n saw cildren with quite worried faces.

Mama aap itna pareshan main kyun hain. Boliye na.

Geet beta wo.. wo.. shanti..

kya hua shanti ko?? asked geet.

Now all r worried about shanti.

Mama plzz tell me what happened to shanti asked geet almost in tears.

Geet first come n sit told pooja.

Mama plzz.

Pooja looked at vijaya n sighed.

Geet, shanti ka accident hua told pooja.

All are very much horrified by the news. Karthik dropped the bag which is there in his hand n stood there rooted.

Mama aap kya keh rahe ho? Kya hua usko. Plzz mama asked geet n tears rolled down her cheeks.

Mom where is she now? Which hospital?? asked maan.

She is in ******** hospital told pooja.

Ok mom we r going now told maan n all of them ran from there.

All of them sat in the car n maan started driving. Within 20 min they reached hospital. Maan parked the car n all of them ran inside. They asked in the reception

excuse me.

Yes sir.

Patient name shanti accident asked maan.

Yes sir she is in ICU. Go to 2nd floor.

Thanku told maan n went near ICU.

Outside the ICU shanti'd dad, geet's dad n maan's dad are waiting for doctor. Just then doctor came out. Geet ran to doctor and asked

doctor how is she?

She lost lot of blood n head injury. We r trying our level best to save her but at present she is not responding to any medicine. Some miracle should happen told doctor.

Doctor dont tell like that. Shanti ko kuch nahi hoga. Mujhe pata hain wo.. mujhe chodke kahi nahi jaayegi told geet n hugged maan tight.

Maan, shanti. See what doctor is saying. Kuch nahi hoga usko.

Maan too had tears in his eyes but controlled himself for the sake of geet n told ha geet hamari shanti ko kuch nahi hoga. Hum sab hain na.

Here karthik dont know what to do. His love, his life is in danger. Tears rolled down his cheeks. Sudha kept her hand on his shoulder. Immediately karthik hugged sudha n crying like a small kid. Sudha is rubbing his back to calm down. Sudha is also crying uncontrollably.

Geet broke the hug n asked doctor can we meet her??

only one can go told doctor n left from there.

Immediately geet went in n saw her best friend, her childhood friend lying there on bed. Her head is bandaged n oxygen mask. Her face is pale. Geet went near her n touched her cheeks.

Shanti yeh kya hua tumko. Chalo jaldi utho. Mujhe tumko bohot saare baat karni hain. Plz shanti utho told geet crying bitterly. But there is no movement in her. She is just like a lifeless body lying on the bed.

Shanti tumko uthna hi hoga. Dekho karthik ne tumse kuch baat karna chata hain. Agar tum aise rahogi tho wo kaise baat kar sakta hain. Bolo?

By hearing karthik's name there is a slight movement in shanti. Geet saw that n called her shanti.. shanti utho.

Again there is no movement. Geet understood now karthik can save her. Immediately she went out n saw karthik sat on the bench, tears rolling down his cheeks. Geet sat on her knees infront of him n cupped his face n told

chinna dont be upset, shanti ko kuch nahi hoga. Now u should save your love. Yes chinna only u can save her. Go chinna go n talk to her. Plz save my friend told geet n hugged him. Karthik too hugged her.

Will she be alright? Asked karthik.

Maan closed his eyes listening his brother.

Go chinna. Dont loose hope told maan.

Karthik went inside n saw his love lifeless. He went n sat beside her n held her hand.

Shanti main karthik, tumara karthik. Yeh kya hogaya tumko. 1 week ke liye hum nahi the aur tum apna kya haalat bana diya. Chalo utho bohot ho gaya.

Karthik kissed her palm n told plzz shanti tumko meri baat sunna hi hoga. Kyunki main tumse bohot pyaar karta hu. I love u shanti, I love u very much. Bohot dinon se yeh baat kehna chati hu but himmat nahi the but aaj muje tumko aisi haalat mein nahi dekh sakta hu main. Agar tumko kuch hua tho main jee nahi sakta hu.

When those words escaped from his mouth shanti started breathing heavily. When karthik checked the machine her heart beat is rising. Immediately he went out n called doctor.

Doctor doctor.

Kya hua chinna asked maan.

Karthik pointed towards ICU n told shanti ko hosh aya.

Maan n geet felt very happy. Doctor came n checked her n gave some injection. Now she is responding to medicine n her BP level is little high.

Doctor came out n told really its a miracle. She is responding to medicines. But her BP is little high. We will keep her under observation for one day n we will shift her to the room.

Thanku so much doctor told maan.

Even all the elders are relieved n even happy seeing their care for their friend. From past 2 days they r trying to bring her out of that stage but their all efforts went in vain. But today she is responding. They r very proud of their children.

Shanti's dad went near the children n holded his hands n told aaj aap logon ki wajah se meri bachi thik hui hain. I am very much thankful to u beta.

Immediately geet n karthik held his hand n told what r u saying uncle she is our friend. How can we see her in that condition. Hamari jaan bhi de sakte hain hum apni dost ke liye told karthik,

shanti's dad hugged him n blessed him. Then after 4 hours shant opened her eyes n looked here n there.

Papa called shanti in her weak voice.

Her father came near her n asked kaisi ho beta ab tum?

Thoda dard ho raha hain papa.

Tum bulkul chup raho aur aaram karo told geet.

Shanti looked at her n smiled geet tum kab ayi ho?

Geet had tears in her eyes n told I dont wanna talk to u. kya samaj thi ho tum apne aap ko.

Shanti made a baby face n told I am sorry geet.

Geet carassed her hair n told aaram karo shanti.

All of them smiled with tears.

Ha shanti tum aaram karo. We all r here only told maan.

After sometime shanti slept. Next day she is shifted to ward from ICU. Karthik is taking good care of her.

After one week in hospital room:

how r u now shanti? Asked karthik.

I am fine now karthik told shanti.

Today u r gonna discharge, 1 month tak no college n no work. U have to take complete rest. Ok?

Shanti made a baby face n told ok.

Dont make those faces yaar.

Karthik called shanti.

He went near her n held her hand n asked what happened?

Shanti hugged him tight n told I love u too.

Karthik's happiness have no bounds. He is on cloud 9. she proposed him, omg...

his tightened his grip n told I love u shanti.

Karthik broke the hug n kissed her fore head.

Later in the evening shanti got discharged n went to her home with her friends. They made her comfortable n karthik is taking special care of her.

Tum thik tho ho na? Kuch chahiye tumko asked maan.

Nahi bhai main thik hu.

Maan kissed her forehead n told tum tho hum sab ko dara diya.

Sorry bhai.

Accident kaise hua?

wo.. jab main road cross kar rahi thi. Uss taraf ek truck aaraha tha maine nahi dekha aur..

be careful bacha, pata hain geet kitna darr gayi. When u r picking ur mobile she was so tensed n restless.

Ji bhai main samaj sakti hu. I will be careful from now onwards.

Better be n ha tumare liye ek car hain aur driver bhi. If u want to go anywhere u should go by car told karthik in a authorative voice.

Shanti made a baby face to maan. Maan smiled at her n told no use shanti. Your safety is important for us.

Just then pooja n vijaya came there n gave her food.

Thanku aunty told shanti.

Aunty nahi beta maa bolo told pooja.

Shanti's eyes filled up n called maa.

Ha beta n hugged her. Tum khurana parivaar ki choti bahu.

Shanti looked down feeling shy.

Next month passed n shanti became normal n started going to college in the car. She tried to convince karthik, maan n geet but there is no use. They became very careful about her.

Due to all this yash-sudha postponed their marriage after 8 months.

One day all are in the hall in KM n chatting with each other.

Just then maan came there n told seriously muje aap logon se kuch baat karna hain.

Bolo beta told anand.

wo.. wo.. mera studies next month katam ho jayega, so I am thinking to go to US for higher studies.

All the ladies geet, sudha, pooja n vijaya shouted WHAT??

all of them looked at them, maan singhed n sat on his knees in front of them.

Plz try to understand, its just for 2 years uske baad main kahi nahi jaoonga.

Nahi tum kahi nahi jaa rahe ho told vijaya n pooja.

Mama, mom plzz just 2 years, I will come in every holidays. Mama, mom its very hard for me to stay away from u but hamari company ke liye, plzz mom, plzz mama. Di plzz aap hi batayiye na. Aapki shaadi ke baad hi main jaoonga.

Somehow pooja, vijaya n sudha are convinced. But here geet looked at him with teary eyes n ran to her room.

Maan followed her. Geet sat on her bed crying furiously. Maan came n sat beside her n kept his hand on her shoulder. Geet jerked his hand n moved other way.

Maan went infront of her n cupped her face. Geet started punching his chesh with her small fists.

I hate u I hate u I hate u I hate u I hate u I hate u I hate u

geet suno meri baat.

Mujhe kuch nahi sunna. I hate u.

maan hugged geet tight n told jaan plzz 2 years ki baat hain. Main holidays main aaonga. Tumko ko pata hain na main tumare bina nahi jee sakta.

Phir kyun jaa rahe ho tum.

Maan broke the hug n said lovingly tumko hamari company NO.1 mein nahi chahiye kya. We both r in the same field u should understand geet. Plzz mishty maan jao.

Geet rested her head on his chest n closed her eyes n told

maan..

hmm

2 years ke baad tum muje phir se chodke nahi jaoge na.

Bilkul bhi nahi mishty. Kabhi nahi.

Geet hugged him tight n told thik hain only 2 years n she cried uncontrolably. The thought of being away from him for 2 years is killing her inside but she cant come in the middle of his dreams. So she is hiding her pain inside n smiling at him. But maan can see her pain through her eyes.

Days passed maan didnt leave for even a single minute he is always with her. But here geet is happy that maan is always with her. She again became to her normal self.

But what happened in those 2 years that geet left all of them. When maan came back from london she was happy no no acting as if she is happy. Why didnt she tell anything about her past in those 2 years to maan. Whom she is afrid of? Eventhough she left all of them then why she is dying to meet all of them? Isnt her decision to leave the house. Do anyone of her family knows that she is leaving? No? But the answer is YES. Yes one person in her family knows that she is leaving. But who is that? Why didnt they try to stop her?



Precap: present...

maan-swetha-?????? confrontation.



Ok guys here is part 28. hope u all like it.

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I will update next part by seeing your response. Give me fast comments then the update will be fast.

part 29: page 35

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Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i think that stupid swetha created some problem...u stopped this part at peak point...eager to know what happened in those 2 years...why she left her family when she love them lot... fingers crossed...continue soon...
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so much of past is narrated but still the main part is remaining...why Geet left every body...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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