chapter 27:
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The valentines date continues. Maan n geet shared a pasionate kiss n broke the kiss. Geet is feeling all shy n hid her face in his chest. Maan too hugged her tight.
They both are enjoying their togetherness. They are just praying that they should be always together n face all the hard ships together n live their life happily.
Maan broke the hug n asked can I have a dance with my beautiful lady.
Geet pouted n made baby angry face n nodded in no.
maan chuckled seeing her expression n asked kyun meri jaan.
Mujhe nahi karni dance wance. Main tumse naraaz hu.
Awww kyun asked maan hugging her from back.
Tumne mujhe surprise ke baare mein kyun nahi bataya. Pata hain main kitne udas ho gayi thi tumne mujhe hamara pahle valentines day par wish nahi kiya. Aur ab aagaye surprise leke.
Mishty if I tell u about the surprise, then how it will be a surprise asked maan making her face him.
Geet made a funny face n told mujhe nahi pata wo sab. Main tumse naraaz hu bas.
Maan smiled n bent on his knees n gave her his killing smile. Hayeee geet lost in his smile n charm. She is just lost seeing him.
Maan forwarded his hand n asked dance??
geet absent mindedly gave her hand in his. Maan took her hand n stood up. Geet came to reality n gave a baby angry look to maan n was about to go from there. But maan is fast n held her wrist n pulled her to him. She collided on his chest.He gazed her lovingly ,his eyes were enough to send a chill down her spine .
She looked into his eyes and fluttered her lashes.
Then the music started. (plz listen to this song while reading)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YoLGDd7zkFI
https://www.sangeetpk.com/kites_dil_kyun_yeh_mera.html
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare,
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale'
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale..
(Why does this heart of mine make such a fuss?
Why does this heart of mine make such a fuss?
Neither here, Nor there, it only walks towards you
Why does this heart of mine make such a fuss?
Neither here, Nor there, it only walks towards you)
geet is lost in those words. She kept her one hand on his shoulder n one on his chest. Maan held her by her waist. They lost in each others eyes which is reflecting their pure love, care for each other. Their fingers are entwined n geet's one hand on his shoulder n maan's hand on her waist pulled her more close. A charming smile was playing on his lips.
Each and every move was filled with their passion .
He kept looking into her loving eyes which were filled with love for him .
Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Bheed mein logon ki woh hai wahan
Aur pyaar ke mele mein akela itna hoon main yahan
(What is this that has happened in so little time?
as soon as our eyes met, I became lost.
What is this that has happened in so little time?
As soon as our eyes met, I became lost.
There she is, in a crowd, surrounded by people
While I'm here, lonely, in love's gathering)
when maan is singing his beautiful voice. Geet lost in those melodious voice n the words. Maan took geet in his arms n twirled her around and pulled her closer ,
Geet could feel the warmth in his arms , She stood on her toes and kissed Maan's forehead.
Maan leaned towards her and kissed her soft cheek , he tightened his grip and lifted her .
Geet streched her arms feeling like heaven in his arms.
The moment stopped there.
Then maan brought her down in her process her chest rubbed his sending shivers to his body.
Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
Hadd se bhi aage yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshaan hua mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya
(My story has begun
My heart did not lsiten to me
My story has begun
My heart did not lsiten to me
It has overstepped its limits
It is upset and upset it has made me too )
maan sang this looking into her eyes lovingly. Geet is lost in some world, where there is only maan n geet. Geet is feeling like there is no one in between them. They r lost in each other n dancing to the rhythm. Maan got mesmerized whenever her soft hair touched his face during the steps.
They both r looking in each others eyes n maan is singing.
Maan cupped her face and looked into her eyes
He looked into her eyes ,which were so deep filled with a sea of desire , love and passion.
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale..
The song ended.
Maan smiled and leaned closer and placed a peck on her cheek .
Geet hugged maan tight. Her loved towards him has no bounds. He expressed his feelings in such a wonderful way. She is falling again n again for him.
Maan u dont allow me to be angry on u. jab tum yeh sab karogi tho main tumse kaise naraz ho sakti hu.
Jaan tum kitne bhi naraaz ho mujse main tumko kabhi nahi chodunga. Main tumari narazgi dur karke hi rahunga.
Yeh baat tho sach hain. I love u maan.
I love u too jaan.
They both stayed in each others arms for some time. Maan asked
dinner kare jaan?
Hmmm..
they both sat on their respective seats n maan served the food for geet n himself. They ate their food feeding each other, maan with some naughty ideas, geet blushing n talking non stop. They both enjoyed their first valentines day in a special way. Maan made it special for geet.
Later they both sat in the couch maan placed his head on her lap n she is carassing his hair lovingly n lost in his eyes. She is totally drowing in his eyes she just dont want to leave him for a second. She wants to be in his arms for ever. Maan hugged her by her stomach n his breathing is tickling her. Geet giggled slightly. They both slept peacefully. After sometime maan got up n saw geet is sleeping in sitting position n a smile on her face. Maan cupped her face n kissed her forehead. Her smile in the sleep widened. Maan tried to wake up geet but she is in deep slumber so he carried her to the car. He tucked her hair strands behind her ear which are disturbing his jaan's sleep.
He drove the car to the hotel n carried her to the room n made her sleep. When he was about to go geet held his hand in sleep n murmured mat jao na plzz n made a baby face.
Now how can he reject when she asked so cutely. He sat beside her n geet placed her head on his lap n slept peacefully. Maan is lost in her angelic face n he too dossed off.
Next morning geet woke up n saw herself sleeping on maan's lap. She blushed thinking about yesterdays date. She got up n pecked his cheek n went to washroom to get ready. She came out of the washroom fully ready but maan is not there in the room. Suddenly maan came n hugged from nack n whospered
good morning jaan.
Good morning maan. Go n get ready all will be waiting for us.
But maan pecked her lips lightly n went to get ready. After half an hour both went down for the breakfast. Just then whole gang reached there. They wished each other n had their breakfast teasing each other n having fun.
So guys today evening we have to leave to delhi. So be ready for evening 6'o clock flight told yash.
Yes jiju we will be ready told maan.
But geet, sudha n sweety r dull.
What happened to u all? Asked karthik.
Humko nahi jaana told geet.
Geet we have to go na. Its 5 days we came here n u have to go college also told maan.
Plz maan thodi din aur asked di.
Sudha tum bhi choti bachi ki tarah behave kar rahi ho. Plzz try to understand na. Some other time we will come told yash.
Hmm ok told di half heartedly. Even geet too.
I miss u guys told sweety.
All the girls had a group hug. Boys r very happy seeing their bonding mainly krishna, now sweety got a family. When her own family didnt care for her but these people. He is very very happy.
After breakfast they went to their respective rooms to pack their luggage. Maan is helping geet in packing n vice versa. They heard a knock at the door.
Come in told maan.
Karthik entered the room n smiled at them nervously.
Kya hua chinna. U r looking tensed? Asked maan.
wo.. wo.. bro n geet mujhe aap logon se kuch baat karni hain.
Ha bolo chinna told geet.
Aap log baitiye na told chinna.
They felt something is wrong n asked chinna sab kuch thik hain na asked maan.
Ji bro everything is fine.
Phir baat kya hain.
Darasal mujhe shanti ke baare mein baat karna hain.
Geet got alert hearing her name. Kya hua shanti ko.
Geet kuch nahi hua usko. Woo woo
chinna batao kya baat hain.
Karthik closed his eyes n told main shanti se pyaar karta hu.
Maan n geet widened their eyes in shock.
KYA?? shouted both.
Karthik opened his eyes.
Kya tum sach keh rahe ho asked geet.
Ha geet. Plzz dont be angry. I really love her.
Geet immediately got up. Karthik thought that geet is angey but her next act made them laugh.
Geet got up n hugged karthik n told wow chinna I am very very very happy. Tum aur shanti wow. Now we will stay in same house. My best friend will be my sister now.
Maan n karthik looked at each other n layghed at her antics.
Geet broke the hug n pointed her finger to karthik n told in a serious tone.
I am very happy for u. but u should keep her happy always. Not even a single tear in her eyes. Samjhe??
ji bhabhi told karthik.
Maan hugged karthik n told I am very happy chinna.
Thanks bro. Ok I will go n pack my luggage.
Waise chinna tum shanti ko kab propose karoge? Asked geet.
Abi nahi geet let me know her feelings.
Maan patted his shoulder n gave him a proud smile.
All the best chinna told maan.
Karthik left from there. Geet hugged maan n told I am very happy maan. Chinna aur shanti.
Main bhi bohot khush hu geet. Mama, papa,mom n dad ko bhi shanti pasand hain.
Ha maan they will be very happy.
Later in the evening all left for airport. Sweety boarded london flight where as others boarded delhi flight. After 3 hours of journey they reached delhi. Yash bid good bye to all n went to his house. Others took the car n went to KM.
In KM:
vijaya bhabhi bachon abi wapas aaraha hain. Mauje tho geet ko lekar pareshan hu. Jab usko pata chalega tho kya hoga.
Mujhe bhi darr lag raha hain. Geet ko kaun sambhalega.
Wahi tho bhabhi. They all enjoyed the trip n coming happily.
Kya hua mama came a voice from behind.
Pooja n vijaya turned back n saw cildren with quite worried faces.
Mama aap itna pareshan main kyun hain. Boliye na.
Geet beta wo.. wo.. shanti..
kya hua shanti ko?? asked geet.
Now all r worried about shanti.
Precap: what happened to shanti?? 😕
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Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago