Shetan Ka Ghar (12)-Ended

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#601

nice ending simi pari ghar wapas aagayee maan nice banagay geet feeling happy h much maan care for her bath tub scene superb when geet say maan shetan maan saying u will save if dr wont say 2 weeks more next pari 5 and make geet round whole house for milk maan ka papa maan ne maaf kardi aca hi geet again preg to make her team against maan pari she want boy maan shetaan kum naughty jyada hogaya saying i want one more gal and twin boy next gal i will decide so i want to stop or not happy ending but we miss this shetaan

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#602

really nice..a very good end...job well done...👏

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KaranWkiDewaani

@KaranWkiDewaani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#603

Awesome.
Totally loved the ending its was so sweet.
Thanks for a happy ending. Pari turned out to be a bit like maan and a bit like geet.

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#604

Your Shetan ka ghar was just amazing story..

I really loved the whole concept….

Thanks for such a dark love story

Waiting for next

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SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

haha thanks solace
and no you don't have to be sorry
that is what I wanted to do for this fan fic but everyone threatened me to not do that
but lets see what happens in new fan fic cuz of now I have nothing planned even for hte next chapter..I take it one day at a time...
but yeah I have to dissapoint my fans once for not giving them a happy ending...who knows maybe it will be for my new fan fic😉😆😆