Feelings/Aftermaths THE END PG 19! (arhi OS/SS) - Page 13

thank you guys! i'm so glad you liked it!
and i have 18823 views in total and 160 replies! LOL.
i must suck. :P
anyway
THANK YOU! love you! :)

Originally posted by: cmileyfreaky

thank you guys! i'm so glad you liked it!
and i have 18823 views in total and 160 replies! LOL.
i must suck. :P
anyway
THANK YOU! love you! :)

Originally posted by: ccuteaangel

Oh naa, don't take it personally, the more you write, the more people will leave comments, so if you are a bit new at this thing, people won't leave as many comments... and then the more people you message after getting more in to it, the more comments you will get, and the views will seem very little then !

Your story was great 😊

OH.
so that's how it works.
haha i'm SUCH a newbie at this. :P
and aww :$
hayley you're so sweet!
awww!
i swear your comments make me smile for a good ten minutes :D

it was amazin buddy!! way 2 go girl!!👏

Oh gosh First off i am so so sorry for the late reply...u know i got ur pm and actually went back to read it and i was like...where??? In my defense as i said...my room is now cousin central and you know what that's like...arghhh!!!

Lol neways on to the review - My favorite part of the chapter was when Arnav realizes there is so much left to do, there are so many questions left unanswered yet at the same time he realizes how none of it matters. It was very very eloquently put and you are nutty if you think it could have been done any better by anyone. The character's carried their emotions beautifully and you portrayed it perfectly.

Much Love,
Nmyra😳

wow! that was amazing!! and such a splendid chapter - chapters - what ever that was - that was amazing!! kudos! the way you got out light from the dark situation was soo darn beautiful!!! their conversation. the way he confessed - damn got a smile on my face too. soo like him. "nahi bolunga" lol ... loved it!!

the way khushi 1st responded, slapped him, scolded him, was just incredible and imaginable. just awesome. for a few seconds there, even i thought i lost him. damn it was scary!

the ending! perfect! their confession, the unanswered questions, a imperfect situation yet perfect in its own way!!

just one word - AWESOME! 👏 😊

Originally posted by: Nmyra

Oh gosh First off i am so so sorry for the late reply...u know i got ur pm and actually went back to read it and i was like...where??? In my defense as i said...my room is now cousin central and you know what that's like...arghhh!!!

Lol neways on to the review - My favorite part of the chapter was when Arnav realizes there is so much left to do, there are so many questions left unanswered yet at the same time he realizes how none of it matters. It was very very eloquently put and you are nutty if you think it could have been done any better by anyone. The character's carried their emotions beautifully and you portrayed it perfectly.

Much Love,
Nmyra😳

thank you thank you!
and it's on the second part, when Khushi realizes that she wants her happiness with him.
"It had been a mistake. A terrible one. An inhumane one.

Yet it made him human.

It made him "perfectly imperfect," as her friend Nameera would have said.

To err is human. Regardless of the err.

But whatever it was, it did not matter anymore.

She wanted to move on, to touch this happiness, this hope that had sprung up inside her, chasing the darkness away. It was the most beautiful thing, and she wanted it. Not for her family, not for anyone else - she wanted it for her. She wanted it with him. And she wanted him to see how beautiful it was."
:D
thank YOU so much for your support!
couldn't have done it without you! <3

Originally posted by: asumi

wow! that was amazing!! and such a splendid chapter - chapters - what ever that was - that was amazing!! kudos! the way you got out light from the dark situation was soo darn beautiful!!! their conversation. the way he confessed - damn got a smile on my face too. soo like him. "nahi bolunga" lol ... loved it!!

the way khushi 1st responded, slapped him, scolded him, was just incredible and imaginable. just awesome. for a few seconds there, even i thought i lost him. damn it was scary!

the ending! perfect! their confession, the unanswered questions, a imperfect situation yet perfect in its own way!!

just one word - AWESOME! 👏 😊

awww thaaank youuu!!!!! :D
and yes i wanted arnav and khushi to have a conversation which would lead them from one place to the other
and YES the nahi bolunga part! i LOVED writing that part! hehe :P
thank you so much for liking it and for the lovely feedback! :D

Oh yay!! I get my own mention!!

-_Jumps with glee_-

hihi now let me go reread...=P

Edited my comment on page 20 😊. I know, super late but I hope the length makes up for it.