Feelings/Aftermaths THE END PG 19! (arhi OS/SS) - Page 14

Originally posted by: januable_sammy

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As you can see, you have truly rendered me speechless. I read your part the day you updated it, but I thought in my excitement to read it and get to the end, I was bound to have read it without truly absorbing the text and drowning in the beauty of your writing. So, as soon as my busy senior year schedule permitted me to do so, I went back and read all three parts slowly, savoring every bit of the third one, my favorite. I apologize for the mediocre adjectives I'm going to use (as you see, everyone is not as talented as you), but IT WAS MINDBLOWING, HEAVENLY, CAPTIVATING, and most of all just, PERFECT!! Not the regular kind of perfect, but perfect in the sense that it captured the essence of ArHi and there's no bigger compliment, in my opinion, for a fanfic writer. I love that fact that your updates are long so when I finish, I always feel satisfied and the waiting pays off. I, as a reader, didn't know the kind of ending I wanted. Happy would've been inappropriate considering the circumstances and sad would've been heartwrenching. But you worked your mind and wove these beautiful words into one of the most beautiful endings I have read. The way you progressed the part from being suicidal, to anger, to acceptance, to forgiveness, to love, and finally to confession. You deserve a standing ovation girl for making it fit so perfectly, It was a happy ending yet it felt in no way inappropriate even under the current circumstances. I was thinking that Arnav would never be able to redeem himself no matter what, but as a great writer should, you proved me wrong. The redemption was in character and I felt my heart go out to Arnav. Khushi... she was just Khushi. I loved every part of her reaction... It epitomized a realistic reaction. I am going to say it just one more time just in case I didn't make it clear before, YOU ARE GIFTED! Thank you for letting the readers read this and be honored that such great talent exists among us.
Lots of Love,
Jazzy
P.S.: I WANT MORE WRITING FROM YOU
P.P.S.: I know my comment is long as it is, but I have one more thing to add. Do not worry for a second about the people who don't comment. A lot of us are lazy, like I used to be, but that doesn't mean they don't appreciate your work. People will come around as you write more. And your comment about no warnings/disclaimers, girl the intensity of this conversation surpassed any sexual content you could've included. THIS is who ArHi are to us. The other "stuff" just made me nauseated, except when Arnav castrated Shyaam. Oh how satisfying that was.

I SALUTE YOU SENORITA 👏

Originally posted by: goahem

poor anjali even when she is injured she thinks of that shyam😡 and poor khushi 😭i feel bad for both of them and by the way amazing os simply loved it please continue 👏