ArSha in Macau OS Final updt pg 20

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: kriyansh117
OMG the Second part !!!!! EFFF !!!! Its soo Hot and Sensous!!!!!!!! Damn Ankita !!! You are a sure Short Killer !!!! Maar daala Mujhe !!!!

Hayyee Their OUTTA THE world , Awww-Frigging Romance , Hotness and Sensuality !!!! Girl you describe everything so well !!!!! You put this into words so amazingly !!! No one could have described it better !!!
I loved the way Shakti stopped Amar from going . She needed Her , More than the air itself !!! Their love is beyond boundaries and limits !!! They are Made for each other <3 !!!!

HAHAHAHAH Fir Dharmesh sir ka call aur Yeh Epic Dialogue Jaldi aao' yahaan yeh ladkiyan romantic locations bol bol kar pics click karte nahi thak rahi!!! Aur mera iss sab se sar dukh raha hai!! "🤣 - Hayye their brotherly bond that you put in leaves me in awww !!

Then finally a call from Falcon teasing Shakti , Bechare lol and Shakti wishing to go with his prince !! Thats choo cute !!!! And Naughty Kunwar !! Usko Cheding LOL !!! Hayyee thats choo adorable !!!

And then !!!! The most beautiful words EVER !!!!! Kunwar finally confessed his feelings !!!!! He LOVES HER !!!!!! I felt like I was with them through the entire OS !!!!! Damn you put everything in words so Beautifully !!!!!
And fir Kunwar opined Her to wear a Jacket and Hide those Hickeys and Shakti Getting Hyper , HAHAHHAHA Kunwar ne uski Baggage Check kii while the Interchange 😆😳 , The way Amar makes her cool down !!! Thats sooo Adorable !! 😳

I loved the way Amar said he would Wait for Shaks !!!!! Thats what every girl wants to hear !!!! Damn Love you for adding that !!!!! *lost *

OMG my fav part , Shakti looking a bit uncomfortable while removing her jacket and posing for a pic and then , Like an angel Kunwar comes and Holds her !!! It felt like he wanted to save her from all the atrocities of the world !!!! Hayyyee That was so Heartfelt !!! I loved it !!!!!!

Their Night meeting was so dreamy ... Amar missing Shakti awww!!!! And when Finally Amar realizes that she needs rest , He drops her princess to her Bedroom ... And Shakti. , In her sleep , murmuring his Name ... How loving can one be !!!!! Hayyeee You are awesome at words Ankita !!!!

Fir Finally Returning Home ...
I so Love the Dharmesh-Amar convos in your FF"S !!! They are Hilarious 🤣
Tu mujhse shaadi ke liye haath maang raha hai kya?? Joh itna Sharma ke pooch raha hai!! Obviously le jaaunga' Rona band kar.." And Dharmesh took away Amar's bags from him' - The funniest dialogue Ever HAHAHAHAHA 🤣

Hayye the Last part !!! Shakti wanted Amar to STOP HER !!!! Thats Choo adorable <3 !!! And Kunwar Gosh !! The most supportive lover EVER !!! Instead of Nagging , he is so supportive !!!! He wanted her to be successfull !!!!! And siad he will handle Everything !!!!! I so wish Aisa Ho !!! Gosh , I pray to bhagwanjee tera FF sach ho Jaye !!!!!

ANKITA !!!!! MAAR DAALA !!!!!m *DEAD*
Hayye Hotness , sensuality , Love , Care and each and every emotion was put up Fabulously by you !!!!
This was absolutely touching !!!
You are extremely talented Ankita !!!!
Keep your FF"S coming up !!!!
I love your writing style !!!!😳

mahi... tere comment ne literally mere face pe 1000 km lambi smile laa di hai!!! wow yaar... thanku sacchi mucchi mei fr ur comment..!! and mai toh poora tym likhte waqt yahi soch rahi thi... Kaash yeh sab sach ho jaaye!! all us ArSha fans want d same thing only naa..!!

But still.. thanku thanku thanku for loving it sooo much!! 🤗🤗

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: lovekriyaansh
First of love you for this super awesome blossom update...🤗
it was amazing...the bedroom scene in the beginning and the closet scene was hawt and so very passionate... The passion and intensity was created with your words was mind blowing.. just loved it...☺️ nd the most beautiful thing of this update were these lines

He knew she was gonna ask this sooner or later' He laughed at how he knew her in and out' and despite knowing the answer to this question herself' She wanted it coming from his mouth'
"Mai rokunga toh ruk jaaogi??"
"Haan'"
"Isiliye toh nahi rok raha Shaks'"
Kya bolu anki tere yeh sentences ke liye.. they were just too perfect ...

aur yeh Goa update ka kya chakkar hain? woh kab aane wala hain.. Macau mein itna time lag gaya.. waise woh worth tha firr bhi.. bass Shaks jitna wait mat karawana nahi tho pata chala ki Shaks NY se wapas aayi aur tera Goa ka update tabhi post ho rahah hoga...😉

Prenu!!! Jhappi badi si pehle toh!! and dose r actually my fav lines too... i can so imagine him saying something like dat... Aur Goa ka ek ArSha OS maaga tha Sona ne.. bt teko pata hai mere interviews shuru ho rahe hai..😭😭 toh tym lagega naa.. Aur Shaks ke wapis aane se pehle toh will definitely post it!! hehehehehe...

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
ahhh!!!!!!!! sooo hawttt...mere to pasine choot gye...i love dere romance...n naughty naughty kunwar DOOR LOCK KRNE JAA RA HU 😉...awww dere passionate kiss n love bites n evrythng i luv...hayeee!!!!!!! sharam aa gyi mjhe to 😳 😳 😳...hahahaha BESHRAMO WALI SHARAM😉

n yaha par b NY...kb picha chodega ye NY hmara...bt i luv ki kunwar didn't stop her 4m leaving...dis show dere true relation

luv uuu n thnx 4 such hawttt romantic cute update...n pm too 😊

hehehe.. shaffy meko toh likhte waqt bhi sharam aaying..!!! and NY toh bas 3 months ka hai naa.. tension not taking!! Thankuuu for loving d update soo much!! 🤗

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
it was so awesome, naughty, lovely,fab everything.
just one complaint_kitna intezaar karvaya.
but all in all fab update. loved the teasing and everythig.
thank u for writing the os

i hope intezaar ka fal meetha tha.. sorry for being so late.. bt m a really lazy and moody writer.. isliye dis took so much tym..!! thanku for loving d OS!! 😳

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: tish18
omfg!!... let me first jus devour dis moment... it was truely mind blowing... words bhi kam hai to describe... u r an awsome awsome writer... wat passion yaar... so intense... so adorable... so freaking hot.. all in one... i felt like i watched an entire movie in dis one update...i love u for writing dis... now i cant wait for the Goa one... pls update asap... i'l b waiting like always. thank u for pm. chalo jaldi kaam pe lag jaao... go write. :P hehe

first of all... ME LOVES UR FF!!! hehehehe.. 😆and den... ME LOVES U FOR WRITING UR FF!! 😆

thank you tish for loving dis update.. and unfortunately goa OS i wont b able to write fr a very long tym.. coz i hv interviews strting frm dis month end uptil like may...😭🤢

Originally posted by: lovely7010
Finally u updated its freakin awesome...im spechless actualyy dead after reading it...gosh amazing wonderful fantastimindblowing update tha ab words bhi nahi mil rahe to describe dis...dude ur an amazing writer luved the whole ff...n thnxx for the pm...

nahi nahi.. dead mat hona... hehehe.. thanku for the comment dear!! m happy dat u loved d update!!

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
awesome awesome awesome
loved it very much
this part was super HOT and cute
GREAT JOB
will wait eagerly for goa os

awww.. thanks sooo much... will PM u wen i update d GOA OS as well..

Originally posted by: HiIh
When ever i saw a ArSha ff, I thought dat FF on real life will not be interesting . So when U firstly PM ed me dis FF , I started reading.. Ur FF made Me Like ArSha FF..

Wow.. I must say, U r an Awesome writter. hats off to your Creativity. I really liked it. U described each and every scenes very nicely. fantastic work dear.

And thanx for the PM.. Jaldi Update Karna. ... Ok.

thanks for loving it dear... dis was d final update of dis OS.. m glad u liked it..

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: cuteupasna
at least muje comment krne layak to chod deti
sisso u killd me !!!!!!
aaa abi to middle tk pahunchi hu baaki ka padne de ab
awsam yr
m SMITten !!!!:p

lucchi... Smitten likhna zaroori hi tha naa tujhe??? poora padhke dhag se comment karna fir lady don! and all d best xams ke liye CHOTU!!!!😆😆

Originally posted by: medha16
it was so HOT!!!kya likha hai tumne,i love u 4 writing this OS!!!i was hyperventilating d whole time...n kunwar is so naughty naughty!!bechari shaks had to wear a jacket to cover the relics of his undying passion!but she wasd no less...clinging onto him like that!!!n d door locking line was EPIC!!!i so so love this update,man!!!it was mindblowingly fantastic n immensely SEXY!!!

thanks sooo much Medha!!😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

OH .MY. GAWD.

Meri heartbeat super fast haii...itna pyaar aur sweetness aur hotness aur cuteness ek saath?

mei tho gayii...

ANKITAAA BIIIG JHAPPI 🤗🤗🤗

Mei toh maar hi gayi!! it was sooo damn___?___...meri paas words hi nahi hai

pata nahi kya kahu!

sochti hu ki sweet tha par fir yaad ati hai ki hawt tha par cute bhi tha!

mei itni confusion mei hoon!

chor confusion ko maar goli but theri OS ki jai ho!

it was sooo damn awesomeee!

*sniff sniff* ashiwaad dete dete bachi kitni bari aur talented ho gayi 😆😆

absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED itt!!!!

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Arsha_Kriyansh
Omg! Frst of ol a very big hug 2 u..:* u deserve it completely...gosh i soo do wish u wre the creative director of d3!
Ur mejic olways work...i purely in luv wid ur os..<3
Dere luv soo intense n soo passionate...i hope Arsha r rili dating...!
D3 is gona b worse nw buh Arsha i repeat Arsha vl olways b da bst in da whole damn world...dere cuteness dere sweetness...kunwar's million dollar smile n shakti's cute cute face n xpressions..:*
Haayeee ur ff is gona kill me !
Aaj mujhe bahut achee dreams aayenge..! Thank u sooo v mch fo a superb update i luv it v v mch..!
N thanx fo da pm...N update soon..<3

kavyaa.. a big big hug to u too!! m soo hoppy teko acche dreams aayenge!! nd dis is d final part rey...

Originally posted by: sujucoolstar
😳ANKI ANKI... tu ne mujhe maar... kya update re i am in arsha land without stopping anywhere nd is dis hawwttt update i guesss no give me some huge word to... descrbie dis 😳...i am weak in words😉... so guys sum one help me me not able to breathe ah... awww kya update 😉... and ankita awesum wirter ... hugs nd kisses girl ... u described every thing just so perfect...😃...👍🏼
arsha i wish same things happen in der life😳... nd i must say dey shuld read dis osi am in love wid dis os...❤️arsha forever ...nd ever d hawtest nd most happening pair...❤️

suju... sabse pehle sorry baby.. i dit even realise tu meri frnd list mei nahi hai.. me sending u a buddy request sabse pehle!! aur thankuuu for loving dis!! yup.. ArSha forever and ever!!

And i sooo dont want ArSha to read dis.. sochenge wat besharam fans dey have!!

Originally posted by: Arsha_Kriyansh
Agree wid suju anki do sumthng dat dey cud read dis..inbox shakti tym milega toh she ll read...v ol r in arshaland...n kbhi bhi apne OS pehle mat likhna dat say if u dun lyk it...who da hell vl hate dis stuff? If dey hate it den dey rili need a life...!
Arsha arsha arsha...i m soo obsessd !

arre kavya.. m a nervous writer... nd as i said to suju..! I Never wat Amar or Shakti to read dis!! hehehe...

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: reyaanshlove
very good anki at last u update it love the whole part the bestest part from whole story love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aww... thanku sooo much!! 🤗

Originally posted by: lov_in_d_air
PERFECT...!!! Truly megical...
i hope it happens in real to...i esplly lov d end...back to her home(to kunwar)❤️

yup.. i too hope dis happens for real.. thankuuu so much fr d comment!! 🤗

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: PD_puja
It ws so hawttt...n sexyyy...luvd it...haye...m dead while reading dis...koi to bachao merko...ahhh!!...
Awesome awesome awesome OS...
Wow ankita...u to roak...it ws jst mejical...fantabulous writer u r...
Waitng fr d goa os...update jb b tym mile...
Luv u fr dis part...
Thnx fr d pm...

awww.. thank you Puja!!! m so happy dat u loved dis update soo much!! 🤗

Originally posted by: prrk86
omg what was that it's too hawttt to handle
thank a lot at least through ur ff arsha r 2gether
i could at least imagine and smile thanks a lot🤗

thankieeesss!! 🤗🤗

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: KriaReyansh
OH .MY. GAWD.
Meri heartbeat super fast haii...itna pyaar aur sweetness aur hotness aur cuteness ek saath?
mei tho gayii...
ANKITAAA BIIIG JHAPPI 🤗🤗🤗
Mei toh maar hi gayi!! it was sooo damn___?___...meri paas words hi nahi hai
pata nahi kya kahu!
sochti hu ki sweet tha par fir yaad ati hai ki hawt tha par cute bhi tha!
mei itni confusion mei hoon!
chor confusion ko maar goli but theri OS ki jai ho!
it was sooo damn awesomeee!
*sniff sniff* ashiwaad dete dete bachi kitni bari aur talented ho gayi 😆😆
absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED itt!!!!