ArSha in Macau OS Final updt pg 20 - Page 19

Originally posted by: maddieee

anki i love you!!!!!!! i have fallen in love with this update... kya likha hai sweety,wah wah!!!!!!!!😊the romance was awesome😳
i was eagerly waiting for friday for ur update🤗har ek word meri kaan mein ab tak ghoonjing😊 super duper nice it is

Originally posted by: aditi061

Its too hot and amazing. I hope ki sach main aisa hi ho.

Originally posted by: apurva100

awesome...awesome...awesome and just awesome...such a romanic part...loved the last sequence!!! Simply loved it... aisa koi nahi likh sakta except u ankita..u r awesome... luv ur work...
and the dharmesh part was funny🤣🤣...coolie bana diya use...can't stop laughing bwahahah...
and the update is full on romance and megical⭐️⭐️...
kash real mein aisa ho jaye😊...and thanks update karne ke liye...

Originally posted by: cheersona1

Anky intnaaa badaaa saaa update ke liye tujhe bahut badiii huggg aur kiss..mwaah...Hayye u knw ke mujhe shuruat ke 2-3 para bahut bahut zyada pasand aaye...I love all dat hawttnesss n passion...u have written it so well..Bt my fav lines wud be these :

"Mai rokunga toh ruk jaaogi??"

"Haan'"

"Isiliye toh nahi rok raha Shaks'

😍 very filmy but very apt...I love it ...

Aisa kuch ho jata real life mein...sigh...and I mst say dat the 2nd update is better than the 1st one...

I am sure Neethu will be happy hoppy wth one particular para...

ANd no worried abt the GOA OS...tu time le jitna chahe par likhna zarur..ab to main teri fan ho gayi hun jaana...

Thanks a ton for dis update..I feel lil better now...🤗

Originally posted by: chsripriya

mindblowing mindblowing mindblooowing just out ofthe world yaar when i read this i thought shakti is sooo lucky! thnx fo pm me and update soon amazing yaar no words to describe dude amazing!

Originally posted by: binx-D3

Oh my god!!!! All I have to say is that the wait was completely worth it!!! The scene in the room and the supply closet...tht just took the word HOT to a whole new level!!! There was so much passion, intensity, love and cuteness in all of this...you are freaking awesome writer...u described every single emotion perfectly!! Ankita you make me wish that shakti actually feels this way about Amar...that for her amar is "her home" as you rightly put...I love how you described how supportive he is of her decision...u beautifully described his unconditional faith and support for her...you showed that his hapinness is truly only in her hapiness and that was beautiful!!
My favourite line was - Tu mujhse shaadi ke liye haath maang raha hai kya?? Joh itna Sharma ke pooch raha hai!! Obviously le jaaunga' Rona band kar. I just couldn't get myself to stop laughing :P
This was seriously fabulous...I can't thank you enough for this this update!!

It ws so hawttt...n sexyyy...luvd it...haye...m dead while reading dis...koi to bachao merko...ahhh!!...
Awesome awesome awesome OS...
Wow ankita...u to roak...it ws jst mejical...fantabulous writer u r...
Waitng fr d goa os...update jb b tym mile...
Luv u fr dis part...
Thnx fr d pm...

omg what was that it's too hawttt to handle

Originally posted by: neethuuthaman

OMG Dead Dead Dead! I need an oxygen mask now. Jaan...sabse pehle a tight hug for u. Itna wadda update! Itna time laga mereko padne me. Jaisa update mein chahti thi yeh toh usse bhi zyada beautiful hai re. Mein toh tujeh compliment de dekar bore ho chuki hoon. Still i want to say that u r an amazing writer babe. Kunwar ka woh line "Door lock karke ata hoon"... Hayeee mera naughty kunwar! Shaks bhi kuch kam nahi hai. U Potrayed his charac very well in this OS. Phir shaks ko usne hotel ke peeche waale room me le gaya! Teri dimaag me kya kya imagination ata hai re. Par shaks toh lagta hai jaldi so gayi...hehehehhehe And Yes Yes Yes. Mereko hot scenes bohat pasand agayi. I just loved it. Aur tujeh pata hai ki teri toh mein humesha se hi fan hoon. This was really a treat for me. Aur mere bichare Dharmesh bhai ko coolie bana diya! I loved his part in this. Ab mein aur kya bolu? It was a Chummeshwari Update... Thank u so much for this jaan. I know bohat sar khaliya tha teri. Now i understood ki sabr ka phal Theeka hota hai. Awesome awesome awesome. Love u jaan. Muaaahhh.

Originally posted by: SanjArsha

ok mein phirse comment karing

Awsome Amazing Hot Mindblowing romantic update

i love each &every para i just love it

I read it many time again & again

anky You are a awsome writer.😊

I love u for this awsome update❤️