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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update

you know what do i feel ki
mayank k mann mein ab bhi koi baat hain
jo ander hi ander use chubh rahi hain...

i just hope ki sab kuch jaldi sort out ho jaye...



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Posted: 13 years ago
wow. mayank is so mature. love the sayank convo
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.

sayank talk was very nice ... loved their herart to heart talk.

n nupur was too funny ... jai n veeru ... LOL

pregnancy me wo aur bhi filmy ho gyi hai ...

jai-veeru nhi to karan-arjun ban jao ... ROFL .

waise mayank to arjun hi hai :P

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 15

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Mayank walked out of the class , ria followed him out. Nupur noticed that her face changing . Ash nudged rohan who anyway looked harassed

"tumne apni stupid si sister ko mayank sir aur di ke baare mein bataya ki nahin? " ash asked rohan in a whisper

"aaj subah hi bataya tha."

"phir se wo unke peeche kyun bhaag rahin hain?"

"tho main kya karoon? " he whispered back helplessly

"rohan!" nupur called him still looking at the door through which ria had walked out, "rohan yeh mayank ko class mein kuch zyaada hi ghoor nahin rahin thi? "

"nupur, ria ko abhi pata chala ki mayank sir ki shaadi ho chuki hain , Aap itna worked up mat ho"

"haan di aapki health ke liye itna gussa achha nahin hoga" ash added though glaring at rohan

Nupur turning to him continued, " tumhaari behen hain so bach gayi warna koi aur ladki ..."

"nupur relax . Aap bolo, aapki padhaai kaisi hain? " rohan tried to change the topic

"kya padhaai yaar. Tum dono ke jagde mein mujhe akele padne ke liye chod diya , gunjan ki shaadi bhi hain aur main jo bhi subah padthi hoon woh shaam ko bhool jaathi hoon" nupur cribbed," aur mayank teen din ke liye delhi jaarahaan hain dia ke saath tho..."

"tho aap unko miss karogi" rohan teased her

"di sorry " ash replied guiltily ,"yeh sab tumhaare wajah se" she hit rohan and walked out.

"ash, listen..." rohan ran after her.

Nupur smiled after them affectionately- its okay ashwini. Main jaanthi hoon ki tum dono abhi apne relationship ke baare mein zyaada concentrate karna hain. Tests kya hain aathe rahenge! Lekin aisa waqt jab naya naya pyaar hota hain, jab naya naya takraar shuru hota hain woh kabhi nahin aatha. She sighed remembering herself and mayank in college during their initial days of relatonship and suddenly missed him- main usse mil lethi hoon.

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Staff room- just outside

ria waiting, mayank walked in from one side and saw her. Nupur came in behind him. On seeing both of them, she stood hiding behind the pillar trying to overhear what was happening

"hi mayank...sir" ria stressed on the word sir

'hi ria. Nice to see you" nupur made a face while mayank smiled

"aap mujhse escape kar rahe the? Maine aapko class ke baahar bhi bhulaaya tha"

"of course not" he answered a little too fast and as she continued to irritatingly stare at him," kuch kaam tha?"

"haan" " bolo"

" mera heartbreak hogaya hain mayank sir. Ab aap hi batao ki mujhe kya karna chahiye! "

mayank gave her a bad look but with difficulty controlled his annoyance and said, " ria tumhaare age mein heartbreak jitne easily hota hain usse bhi fast hearts meet hota hain. So dont worry . You ll be fine" and with a stiff smile walked to the staff room. Ria stopped him by moving in front of him and said

"maybe. But wo aapko suit nahin karthi. thoda sa disappointed hoon. Kuch zyaada hi loud hain aur overweight bhi" she commented

nupurs mouth fell open and glanced down at herself critically

"shut up ria. Jiske baare mein tum kuch jaanthi nahin ho, uski baare mein baat mat karo" mayanks anger got the better of him and ria backed off at the sternness in his tone . He continued in the same forbidding tone" maine tumhe pehle bhi kahaan hain, tum student ho, student banke raho"

she moved forward and said," sorry. Okay fine! Aapse ek favour chahiye tha "

"bolo"

" maine half year miss kiya hain tho kya aap mujhe study karne ke liye help karsakthe hain?" she asked innocently

mayank looked at her and smiled," of course. Infact mujhe tho lagtha hain ki tumhe nupur ke saath padna chahiye. Uski bhi half year miss hua tha. Tho both of you can help out each other. Okay?" and walked away leaving her to recover from his taunt.

Nupur grinned involuntarily and did nazar utarofying action in the direction of mayank moving off. She glanced at ria who looked upset.

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MN house

mayank sitting down on the sofa book in his hand ,nupur entered from college late . Before he knew it she had hugged him , kissed him on both his cheeks and forehead.

" nupur!" mayank looked at the door ," kya hua?"

nupur gave him a huge smile and said," aise hi, tumpe pyaar aaraahaan tha" he smiled showing his dimples

"mayank , yeh batao . Main kitna overweight hoon?" she asked him turning side to side


mayank s face cleared," achha tho tumne meri aur ria ki baat sunli. Kaise? Tum kya meri spying karthi rehthi ho "

she grinned," suna ,tho? Bolo na"

he looked at her , eyes apprehensive waiting for his answer. He knew she had put on weight but he had never really thought she looked bad , in fact she had been looking prettier by the day. He laughed and placed his hand on one of her cheeks, affection oozing out of his eyes , voice and words, he replied

" haan. But nupur tum achhi lagrahin ho. You know why? Kyunki wo saara weight hamaare bachhe ka hain. Infact mujhe tho tum pehle se zyaada beautiful lagrahin ho, ek ajeeb si kashish hain tumhaare ankhon mein lagtha hain ki duniya ke saari sachaai in ankhon mein chupa hain "

nupur placed her head on his chest and held him.

"agar bachhe ke baad bhi main aise hi rahin tho tum mujhse bore nahin hojaaoge na mayank? " she asked him

"tumhe aise doubts hi kyun aathe hain nupur? ria ke baat ka bura laga?" mayank put some distance between them and asked her

"nahin kyunki mujhe tumhaare jawaab se khushi hui . sach boloon mere dresses ab tight horahe hain . Par mayank tum itne sadu kyun ho? Pyaar se baat nahin karsakthe the?"

" Pyaar se baat karoon? Ria ke saath?"

"haan, bichaari"

"kya? Usne mujhse..."

"pata hain. tum ho hi itne ...impressive tho kya karegi . Waise mujhe bhi apne teacher par crush tha"

"kaun shukla sir?"he teased

"chi mayank. Nahin. high school mein. Par tumse ek baar pyaar hojaatha haina tab wo bhoolna mushkil hain."

"nupur? Tum teek ho? Tumhe ria par gussa nahin aaya?" he patted her forehead and asked her completely surprised at her behavior

"mayank mujhe aajkal kisi par bhi gussa nahin aatha."

"haan amba ko chodke" he quipped raising his yebrows and remembering all thr recent times that she had got angry on diiferent people for different things . but she gave him a thats a joke ? look and continued

"Meri zindagi mein bhagwaan itna kuch khushi bheji hain tho bas main chahthi hoon ki saare duniya ko apni apni khushi miljaaye. Bachpan se leke aaj tak mujhe bohot saari khushi mili hain. Aur pechle teen saal tumse door rehne ke baad mujhe aaj ka khushi naseeb hui hain mayank. Mujhe koi shikayat hi nahin aaj kal . Ab dekho Gunjan aur samrat bhi saath hain. Tum ho, hamara bachha hain " and she placed her head back on his chest. This time he couldnt push her back, instead he held her closer and tighter.

"haan nupur sab kuch itna clear aur achha chal rahaan hain ki ...darr lagtha hain ki kuch galat honewaala hain "

"kuch galat nahin hoga mayank" she hugged him reassuringly

they stood in each others arms for a while deriving comfort and then moved apart

" ab chalo. Mujhe jaana hain airport. Tum apna khayal rakhna aur tests ke liye best of luck. yeh samrat abhi tak aaya kyun nhain?"

"main yahaan security banke khada hoon" samrat walked in grinning with gunjan," kya hain nupur!? Aap log ke ghar mein baby aanewaala hain ab tho thoda sharam karo , yeh door close kyun nhain karthe tum dono?"

"samrat ! Di, jiju ek good news hain" gunjan stopped him and turned to mayank bursting with happiness

"kya? Gunjan itni jaldi? Abhi teri shaadi hui nahin. Samrat tum meri behen..."

"DI" gunjan stopped her embarrassed while samrat had a typical naughty smile on his face. And shook her head.

"achha tho wo nahin . Main bhi sochoon...gunjan aur ...nahin nahin..." nupur looked at them one to the other her face clearly indicating that she was thinking about the extent of their relationship

"di please , baat tho suno- jiju samrat ke parents shaadi pe aarahe hain" gunja announced hugging nupur happily

samrat smiled at mayank who smiled back at him happily

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Car

samrat driving. mayank next to him quiet

"mayank. kya soch rahe ho?"

"kuch nahin. good ki tumhaare parents aarahe hain"

"yes par tum kyun itne serious ho?koi problem hain?"

" bas nupur next three days tak akeli rahegi na tho...samrat tum uska khayal rakhna"

samrat looked at him to understand hwy he seemed worried but couldnt make out anything,"dont worry mayank. hum sab hain nupur ke saath"

"jaantha hoon"

and he sat silent throughout. Samrat didnt reply thinking that maybe he was just missing nupur

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hi all of you. thanks for all the likes and replies.


Edited by np18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved the update 😃...mayur are too cute...i totally remember nupur's concern in the show and how when she asked mayank, "mera size double ho gaya to" and he very cutely said "to main tumhe double pyaar karoonga"
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

i loved the update 😃...mayur are too cute...i totally remember nupur's concern in the show and how when she asked mayank, "mera size double ho gaya to" and he very cutely said "to main tumhe double pyaar karoonga"



thanks ,
and nupur looked wonderful that diwaali episode - mayanks expressiosn were also just so much to the point and sweet!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part... so lovely...

pls mayank ki baat reveal kerdo...wanra mein ksis coment mein kerdo gi jo mjhy lagraha hai... and i am actully waiting for it..

nupur is nupur... gunjan ko bhi nhi chorti..
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
i really like 13 ,14 and 15 are awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
loevd it...plz mayank ke saath kuch bura mat karna..plz... it was a nice oart...nupur's reaction towards ria was a little surprising...rest was awesome..!!!!!!!!!! thanx for the pm!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy nice update thanxx fr Pm

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