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Sabz

@romiosugar1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#711

Aap kaun hai jee? 😳 Thanks for the PM 🤗

Just read your recent update and I really loved it. Beautifully written down chapter and everything was just perfect 👏

Keep it up dear...you have done an awesome job 👍🏼

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Siddhika (siddhi)

@-RosyAzure-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#712

OMG OMG I m just can't say what a peice of writing 😳 Riddzii Talked to stanger about OMGHEEE😳 you run your horses in writing Fabulously 🤣 These type of talks are enjoyed 🤣 Lovely update amal just fabulos sorry for late commnt was having so many Updates to read 😆

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#713

Doob Jata Hun Unki Aankhon Mein
Gahri Jheel Hain Unki Aankhein
Ba😊h Jata Hun Unki Aankhon Mein
Bahti Nadiya Hain Unki👏 Aankhein
Kho Jata Hun Unki Aankhon Mein
Atha😊 Sagar Hain Unki Aankhein
Jal Jata H😊un Unki Aankhon Mein😊
Jwala Mukhi Hain Unki Aankhein
Bheeg Jata Hun Unki Aan😊khon Mein
Kali G😊hata Hain Unki Aankhein
Kya Se Kya Ho Jata Hun Unki Aankhon
Mein
Kaisi Aur Kya Balaa H nice part😊😊😊

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#714

Another beautiful part...like bua and ridhi's convo...it gave a clue of her messed up life.

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Vibha

@...vibha...

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#715

amazing update dear😳

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#716

her bua wants her to be happy...but she herself is not sure abt it...

continue soon...

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#717

Amal,My Cute lil Sis,*A tight Jhappi to you*🤗...I really missed you and YAS and of course our Talks so much🤗...Why we have to be so buzy in our life yaar?🤢...Sigh,I think this is what we called Life🤔...Anyway,Enough of my Depressed talks and Get back to update😳..Aah,YAS always brought smile to my face😃...Love the latest chapter...Bua is so concerned for Ridzy...completely understood her feelings...After all she is a mother yaar...You describe Ridzy's feelings,her thoughts too beautifully👏...Really want to read more so do try to continue soon...Thanks for the PM... Take care

Lot of Love

Geet