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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
comment updated page 9 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome , wonderful update...
veryyy nice
pata nehi in dono ki biz dosti kaise hogi????

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
nic part...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited my comment on both pg.7 n 10...😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
loved the update...and i dont think ive ever told you but i love your stories also cuz you incorporate great songs in them...i always have to listen to them while im reading the part is applicable too haha...but wow mayank lashing out at samrat...it really is sad that sometimes the most deserving people never have the great opportunities that the have-it-all's have...waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Firstly A-mazing FF. Good to see both of you back and that too together. You should have done this way before.

Coming to the story... it seems quite interesting. Especially both the characters. Nupur being the hot headed one, whilst Mayank is calm and composed. And its not only their personalities that are different, but their values, thoughts, and even their relations in life are majorely different. I think both of them can learn alot from each other, because what one lacks the other have. Looking from the title, it seems like its a journey where to different worlds learn to accept each other... and with tinge of magic. :) Very interesting story, please continue soon.

It'll be interesting to see how they cope up with each other.

Yet another magical journey... with two great writers, I can't wait.

Oh and I love the daily updates, please continue with them. :)

.SilentPrincess

-Sorry for commenting so late

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
u guys are so fast but you update small parts😆

anyways it was really gud! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
thank u friends, for all the support and encouragement!! .. and ur questions will be answered as the story progresses .. btw today me and kinzu had their result of semester 5 .. and MASHA ALLAH and Alhamdulilah, I scored 3.64 and Kinzu scored 3.16 .. 😳

Chapter # 4

That dawn, Nupur woke up restless yet again. She was facing something that had ceased to exist for her - nervousness. Yes she was nervous' not to forget anxious to prove herself, yet again something she had stopped doing, but then again it had been long since someone had challenged her this way. Changing sides, she hugged her pillow and randomly played with the locks of hair that had escaped her pony tail, and her thoughts yet again diverted to him.


It wasn't even a month since he started teaching her on her father's insistence and she was already at daggers drawn with him. He tested her patience, yet again something that people around her never did, mostly because they feared her and as for her father and Gunjan, they loved her a bit too much, But Mayank'Mayank Sharma treated her like an arrogant , stubborn child. His calm, confident attitude towards her, irritated her, the ease with which he ignored her rudeness made her feel like shaking him and then the way he turned the tables on her , made her feel like hitting him with anything that she could reach quick enough.

Nupur again changed sides, her thoughts still on him.

He wasn't much older than her, maybe a difference of 5 to 6 years. And he wasn't that bad looking too, infact Nupur had herself announced her new tutor to be *very handsome* but that was before he spoke to her, oh! and how can she ever forget those lines.

*as ur dad would have informed u , I'm ur tuition teacher. That's all we need to know about each other so let's began. I hate wasting time.*

When finally her eye lids became too heavy to lift, she yet again turned her side and decided to sleep for a while longer. However just before sleep took over, she was still thinking about him and it was a mercy that she couldn't remember her dreams next day, because some way, Mayank Sharma had made his way into them too.

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Nupur quietly held out the page to him and smiled with satisfaction when she saw his surprised expression followed by,

"r u already done?"

" I was done 5 minutes ago but then u were busy studying my scar (she glanced at her arm) so I thought I shouldn't intrude."

Another content smile appeared on her face when she saw him flustered for the first time since they have met.

It wasn't unusual for Nupur because people kept on asking her about that scar. It was a few inches long scar on her otherwise smooth, beautiful arm, which she had had since she was a kid of 10 and had fallen from cycle.

Mayank was indeed caught red handed and the worst part was, he was already disturbed by the way his heart wanted to ask her, whether that scar hurt. he frowned realizing , it may matter to him if it did.

He quietly held out his hand to take the paper and in his embarrassed state he accidentally touched her hand. For the moment the slight touch stilled the time, and they both looked up at each other, their eyes meeting'.

ankhon se ho ankhon pe ye jadoogari ..

Suddenly Nupur blinked and the spell was broken. Mayank quickly took the paper and leaned as far away as he could still sitting in his chair, while Nupur felt a weird warmth travel down her body.

It wasn't as if she was a complete innocent. She had had her share of boyfriends, and although she didn't go for too much intimacy, but still, she had been kissed and she had never felt this warmth even in those most intimate moments.

It wasn't until Mayank took his leave with a slight nod, without meeting her eyes, after having announced that she scored full marks in the test, Nupur finally breathed freely and realized Mayank made her feel weird in too many ways to ignore them as being harmless.

Mayank sat at the window seat of the bus and looked out at the fast darkening sky.
He was looking at his reflecting, but his mind at the image of Nupur looking at him with those beautiful eyes'

Kuch saz hain.. jagay thay jot hay soye..
Alfaz hain.. chup se nashay mein khoay..

Mayank knew today he had let himself be carried away but he also knew he couldn't let it happen again. Nupur Bushan was just an arrogant, spoiled girl who was also his student and he couldn't let any wrong thought enter hers or his mind that would end up complicating things.
With a firm decision to be more careful around Nupur, Mayank entered his room, and decided to go to bed , because for once, he didn't had the courage to hear Samrat talk about Nupur and he himself answer with the disinterest he was no longer feeling for her
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Chapter 5 - Page 15 - Fantasia.

Edited by mulan. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Congo for ur marks Fantu n Mehak 🤗 May U achieve great success👍🏼 Res😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
firstly congratulations on both of ur scores...congratulations...

now coming to the update...its really nicely written ...lovely

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