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Freethinker thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb, very nice update dear...you made me curious now...pls update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

superb part dear

loved it
finally veer met dr neha
she is so sweet
worried 4 his health
veer is cute
hate tanya
cant she just leave him alone
veer was amazing in the end
too gud
cont soon dear
will be waiting
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

superb, very nice update dear...you made me curious now...pls update soon...

thanks dear for ur comment
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooowww so amazing update it was...
Thanx for the pm dear...
Do continue sooonnn :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

wooowww so amazing update it was...
Thanx for the pm dear...
Do continue sooonnn :-)

thanks dear
will update soon
ur welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

<p align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">superb part dear</font></p>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">loved it</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">finally veer met dr neha</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">she is so sweet</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">worried 4 his health</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">veer is cute</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hate tanya</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">cant she just leave him alone</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">veer was amazing in the end</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">too gud</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">cont soon dear</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">will be waiting</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff3366" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">thnx 4 da pm</font></div>

thanks dear
will update very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

superb part dear

loved it
finally veer met dr neha
she is so sweet
worried 4 his health
veer is cute
hate tanya
cant she just leave him alone
veer was amazing in the end
too gud
cont soon dear
will be waiting
thnx 4 da pm

thanks dear for a lovely comment
will update soon😊😛😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...👏
😆veer...so finally u found out that she is a doctor...n neha is worried for him...hmmm...abhi se hone wale unke ka khayal rakhne lagi...rakho rakho...agey bahut kam ayega...😉
n this tanya...zabardasti use icecream khila rahi hai...😡
dikhai nahi deta ki usi sardi hai duffer...u didn;t love him...bas apni padi hai...aur jab wo itna uncomfortable ho raha hai...to baar baar uske close kiu ja rahi ho...samajh nahi ata kya...😡
ooo...neha is damn jealous with this stupid tanya...😆
n veer is clarifying her...now we are damn sure that these both are in love...😳
n veer saved her...n both hugged each other tightly...😳
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 13

both of them embraced each other...she curled her hands around him ...after sometime veer lifted her face n saw her eyes-''tum pagal ho gyi ho agar tumhe kuch ho jata to''

she looked at him n saw worriedness on his face .. tears rolled out on her face...veer wiped her tears n said-''kabhi aisa mat karna pta h mein kitna darr gya tha ''

she lowered her eyes n started sobbing...veer cupped her face n said-''neha..tanya sirf meri dost h or kuch nhi jo bhi tumne dekha wo sach nhi tha''

she was sniffing n turned on other side-''tum mujhe yeh sab kyun bta rhe ho meine to tumse kuch nhi pucha...or waise bhi mujhe koi farq nhi padta tum kuch bhi karo''

veer with anger grasped her n said-''tumhe sach mein koi farq nhi padta''

neha-''nhi mujhe koi farq nhi padta''n tried to loosened his grip

veer hold her more tightly n said-''lekin mujhe farq padta h samjhi tum''

she looked in his eyes n both of them staring at each other...after few seconds she removed her gaze n said-''chodo mujhe ..mujhe jaana h''

veer loosened his grip n said angrily-''jao yahan se''

she moved from there slowly...but she feel sad n turned to saw him but he was not there now she worried from him n searched for him everywhere...after few minutes she tired n out of breath but didn't found him n more worried...as she turned back she shocked to saw him behind her...veer came closer n said-''farq to padta h ..h na''
she lowered her eyes...veer lifted her face n said-''mera naam veer h ''

she was still breath fastly...her hairs messed on her face n she sweated badly..veer came more closer n wiped her sweat n placed her hairs aside...n said-''itni mehnat karne ki kya jarurat thi wo bhi mere liye bas mera naam pukaar deti mein khud hi aa jaata tumhaare saamne''

she staring at him n said-'' mujhe tumhaara naam nhi pta tha'' n looked at him lovingly
both of them came closed to each other n gazed lovingly...he came more closer n more closer .he looked at her lips she closed her eyes n veer bend his head to kiss her...as he came more closer for kiss..suddenly she opened her eyes n pulled him slowly aside n said-''mujhe jaana h ''

veer still gazed at her n smiled-''thik h jaao ...or apna dyaan rakhna''

she smiled back n said-'' tum bhi''n she was about to move when she remembered something n turned back n said-'' tum ice cream parlour mein kya kar rhe the meine tumhe ice cream khaane se mana kiya tha na''

veer looked at her lovingly n said-''wo tanya ko ice cream khaani thi isliye mein uske saath yahan aaya tha''to hear her name she frowned...veer saw her face expression n said quickly-''par meine ice cream nhi khaayi''...now she feel relaxed n said-''thik h bye''n finally she leaved
veer looked her n smiled again...soon he went to ice cream parlour n leave with tanya

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at night

she sat on bed with a file n turned its pages ...pooja entered in her room n saw her...she smiled to saw the front wall n turned the pages without seeing...pooja sat on the bed behind her n said-''neha kya hua tujhe ?tu smile kyun kar rhi h''

neha came to her senses n quickly closed the file n said-''dii mein kahan has rhi hun nhi to mein kahaan has rhi hun''

pooja smiled n said-''accha chodd tujhe pta h mein kal dhruv se mili thi disc me'

she frowned n said-''dhruv ...kaun dhruv?

pooja-''arey wahi jinki gaadi se hmaari takkar hui thi...or jhagda bhi hua tha...jisse teri ladai hui thi wo veer tha dhruv ka chota bhai or wo jo uske pass khada tha wo tha rudra or jisne mujhe sorry bola tha wo dhruv tha''

to hear veer's name she smiled n remembered everything happened today but soon her chain of thoughts broken by pooja again..she saw at her sister whose very happy...

pooja-''neha tujhe pta h dhruv malhotra company ka chairman...wo bhot accha h jitna mene socha tha usse kahin jyaada..wo apne dono bhaiyo se bhot pyaar karta h or dhruv ki behen diya mere hi dance class mein hi aati h shaam ko...mujhe to pta hi ni tha ki wo dhruv ki behen h''she continously told her every thing soon she interuupted by neha-''bas bas dii or kitni taarif karengi aap dhruv ji ki ...nhi nhi dhruv jiju ki'' n laughed

pooja felt shy n said-''neha yeh kya mazak h kuch bhi bolti h tu''

neha teased her n said-''accha to mein mazak kar rhi hun han or aap jo itni der se itni khush hokar dhruv jiju ki taarif kar rhi thi uska kya?

pooja put a pillow n pated n on her head-''chup kar tu bhot bolne lagi h''then both of them thrown pillows on each other n laughing...after few seconds both of them lying on bed n neha saw at her n said-''dii sach sach btao tumhe dhruv jiju se pyaar ho gaya h na''
she shyly looked at her n nodded...neha was very happy n said-''mujhe to pt tha ki aap dono ke bich me koi khichdi pak rhi h''n again teased her
but she sat on bed worriedly n said-''agar dhruv mujhe pyaar nhi karta hoga to''

neha embraced her from behind n said-'' dii aisa nhi ho sakta aap itni pyaari ho ki aap se har ladka pyaar kar sakta h phir dhruv jiju kyun nhi karenge unhe aapse pyaar karna hi hoga''n both hugged n smiled at each other

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next morning (in the office)
veer read a file in hie cabin when jai n agni entered in his cabin...veer saw him n said-''aap dono yahan ?kuch kaam tha kya?''n closed the file

jai-''han veer hame tumse ek jaruri baat karni h''

veer-''ji kahiye'' n stand up from the chair

jai-''veer hmne suna h ki agla project tum sign karna chahte ho dekho veer'' before he could say something veer interrupted n said-''han to aap dono koi problem h mere project sign karne se''

jai-''nhi nhi veer tum hme galat samajh rhe ho hum to sirf itna kehna chahte the ki yeh project kaafi bada h 150 crore ka h tum abhi abhi apni padai khatam karke aaye ho tumhe abhi in sab cheezo ka exprience bhi nhi h isliye hum chahte the ki ye project hum sambhaal lenge tum dusra project dekh lo''

veer smiled at him n said-''mamaji aap uski chinta mat kijiye kya kaise karna h mein sab sambhal lunga''

jai n agni fuming with anger but didn't showed on face n smiled fakely'--''thik h jaise tumhaari marzi''n leaved

after few hours

dhruv enteed in veer's cabin n said-''veer agle project ke liye tumhe switzerland jaana hoga''while giving him a file

veer-''kitne din ke liye jaana hoga?or kab nikalna h?''

dhruv-'' 1 week ke liye jaana hoga or kal shaam ko 6 baje tumhaari flight h''
dhruv came closed to veer n said-''veer bhot bada project h yeh or mujhe pta h mera bhai is project ko haasil karke hi lautega mujhe tumpar pura bhrosa h''

''mujhe bhi''a voice came from the door..he was rudra...both of them embraced veer n smiled at him

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(in the evening)

veer n tanya all alone in the car n tanya sat quietly next to him n saw outside the window...veer looked at her n said-''kya hua tannu itni chup kyun ho''

she said loudly-''mujhe tumse baat nhi karni tum kyun jaa rhe itni dur mein tumhe bhot miss karungi''

veer smiled n said-''tannu hmesha ke liye thodi jaa rha hun jaldi aa jayunga chinta mat karo''

tanya-''jaa hi kyun rhe ho ek project tha na hmaare pass''n looked at him innocently

veer-''tum nhi samjhogi...kher chodo yeh baat or all the best to bolo mujhe''

tanya-''all the best veer lekin dyaan rakhna project bhot bada h plsss koi galti mat karna agar yeh project nhi mila to shubh uncle tumhe koi project nhi denge''

veer smiled at her but he was very nervous after heared her words...soon both of them reached at home
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next morning

nivi was busy in served the food for everyone...she said to diya-''diya jao or veer ko bula kar lao varna usse phir der ho jayegi''

she went upstairs n came after few minutes worriedly n said to her mother-maa bhai to apne room mein nhi h ''

everyone shocked to hear this n nivi saidto her-''kamre mein nhi h to kahan gya tune thik se to dekha na diya'' she nodded n everyone was worreid for him
nivi-''kahan chala gya subah subah veer kabhi bina btaye nhi jaata pta nhi aaj kahan chala gya''

dhruv-''choti maa aap pareshaan mat hoiye shayad office jaldi chala gya ho hum sab office jaate h or veer ko ghar bhej denge thik h ''

she nodded worriedly...n everyone leave for office

in the office

dhruv searched for him in the cabin but not found him anywhere n said to himself-''veer gya kahan wo kabhi aisa nhi karta fir aaj kahan chala gya''

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome update dear...👏

😆veer...so finally u found out that she is a doctor...n neha is worried for him...hmmm...abhi se hone wale unke ka khayal rakhne lagi...rakho rakho...agey bahut kam ayega...😉
n this tanya...zabardasti use icecream khila rahi hai...😡
dikhai nahi deta ki usi sardi hai duffer...u didn;t love him...bas apni padi hai...aur jab wo itna uncomfortable ho raha hai...to baar baar uske close kiu ja rahi ho...samajh nahi ata kya...😡
ooo...neha is damn jealous with this stupid tanya...😆
n veer is clarifying her...now we are damn sure that these both are in love...😳
n veer saved her...n both hugged each other tightly...😳
update soon...
luv u...😊

thanks dear for ur comment
luv u too

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