HUMTUM (RTMC FF) - Page 17

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome update...👏

veer is making her jealous...n poor neeha use samajh hi nahi pa rahi...😆

n this tanya...satve asmaan pe matt udo jab sach pata chalega to seedhe zameen pe muh ke bal girogi...samjhi...😆

n now veer is going to know about...Dr. NEHA SHARMA...

now veer is going to know that...sirf mental patient hi hospital nahi jaate...doctors bhi jaate hai...veer ki shakal dekhne layak hogi...😉

update soon...

luv u...😊

thanks dear for ur comment
will update soon

part 12

veer moved towards room no. 16 n knocked the doors...a female voice was came from inside n he entered in the room...she was reading a report but her back on his side...veer-''excuse me doctor'' ...she turned n shocked to saw him...veer also shocked to saw her there n said-''tum yahan kya kar rhi ho?''n frowned

neha-''mein yahan'' but veer quickly interrupted n said-''tum mera piccha kyun kar rhi ho?''

neha-''tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho jo mein tumhaara piccha karungi''with anger

veer smiled n said-''accha to tum yahan kya kar rhi ho...wo bhi ek doctor ki cabin me''

neha-''mein yahan kuch bhi karu tumhe isse kya tum btao tum yahan kyun aaye ho''

veer-''mein apne dad ki reports lene aaya hun...mujhe dr.neha se milna h''

neha -''kya naam h tumhaare dad ka-''while looked at him

veer-''tum kya karogi jaankar mein dr.neha ko hi btaunga ...wo kahan h''n raise his eyebrows

neha folded her hands n said-'' mein hi dr neha hun jise tumhe milna h'' to hear this he was shocked n staring at her n said-''tum dr neha ho...i mean tum doctor ho''

neha-''han kyun koi shak h tumhe''

veer-''han...nhi mera matlab tha ki tumhe dekhkar lagta nhi h ki tum ek doctor ho''stiil gazed her

neha-''accha?to kya lagta h tumhe?..''fumed with anger

veer smiled at her-''itni beautiful doctor aaj mene pehli baar dekhi h''

her anger is converted into a smile...veer also gazing at her lovingly...both were looked at each other...neha still staring at him-''tuhaare dad ka kya naam h''

veer came to his senses n said-''siddarth malhotra''

neha while picking a big envelope-''tumhaare dad ki reports normal h or medicines ke liye meine is mein ek paper rakha h wo medicines tum le lene or routine ke according hi medicines dena''

veer nodded n said-''thanks '' n moved whan she interrupted n said-''tum apni medicines bhi le lene''while giving a small slip

veer frowned n said-''meri medicines par mujhe kya hua h?

neha-''tumhe sardi h na isliye meine isme tumhaari dawa bhi likh di h tum le lena''
veer shocked n gazed at her...she continued n said-''or dawa lene ke baad koi bhi thandi cheez mat khaana...paani bhi nhi ,,pina h to normal paani hi pina bas''

veer-''thank you''lovingly gazed at her n after sometime he leave

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at night
veer lying on bed n continously staring that slip which was given by her...closed his eyes n saw her beautifull face n he quickly open the eyes n sat on bed...diya entered in veer's room n saw him worried...she sat in front of him n said-''bhai kya hua aap abhi tak soye nhi ho?''

veer looked at her n said-''han mujhe neend nhi aa rhi thi isliye nhi soya''

diya gazed at his face n said-''neend nhi aa rhi ya koi or baat h ..hmm.''

veer-''nhi aise koi baat nhi h tu btaa tujhe kya kaam h''

diya-''han mein ye kehne aayi thi ki subah dhruv bhaiya ko ek urgent meeting me jaana h to aap ko mujhe college chodna hoga isliye subah mehrbaani karke jaldi uth jaana''

veer (in his mind)-''jab soyunga tabhi to subah uthunga na..mujhe to neend hi nhi aa rhi h''

diya saw his face expression n said-''bhai kya hua mein aapse hi baat kar rhi hun diwaaro se nhi ''

veer looked at her n said-''han han mein subah jaldi uth jayunga ab tum jao mujhe sona h''

she frowned n leave from there...
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next morning

veer sat next to rudra who was very happy n busy in eating...nivi serve the food n sushma busy in her pooja...siddarth,shubh n dhruv leave for office...
diya came downstairs n said-''bhai jaldi chalo na me late ho jayungi''

veer''-han chalo''n leave with her n rudra

diya sat next to veer n rudra on back seat in the car...diya looked rudra n said-''bhaiyaa kya baat h aap bhot khush baat kya h?''

rudra-''nhi aisa to khush nhi h mein to roj hi khush hota hun''

veer-''han han khush to tum roj hi hote ho par aaj ki baat hi kuch or h ''
n smiled in a naughty way

rudra-''kya ...kya baat h koi baat nhi h''n saw on other side

veer-''diya me btata hun ki baat kya h rudra ne sapna bhabhi ko purpose kar diya h isliye wo aajkal itna khush h ''

to know this diya was very happy n said-''really?... o my god chalo accha h sapna bhabhi kab se wait kar rhi thi''

both of them happy while rudra just smiling...soon rudra leave for a meeting... omly diya n veer in the car...when she said-''mein bhot khush hun ki rudra bhai ne sapna bhabhi ko purpose kar diya but dhruv bhaiya ka kya unhe to abhi tak koi ladki pasand hi nhi aayi.''

veer smiled n said-''diya dhruv ko ladki pasand aa gyi h par wo kuch bolta hi nhi h''

diya surprised n said-''kya? kaun h wo ladki...

veer-''h ek ladki bhot acchi h wo ...par mujhe hi kuch karna padega unko milane ke liye''n diya smiled

soon she leave for college n veer for office

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in the evening
veer n tanya returned from office when she shouted-''veer ruko''

veer shocked n stop the car-''kya hua tannu''

tanya-''veer chalo na ice cream khaate h apni favourite jagah par jahan hum hmesha khaate h''

veer rememered neha's words n said-''nhi tannumujhe ice crem nhi khaani tum khaalo''

tanya-''kyun nhi khaani hum hmesha to khaate h na phir aaj kya hua''

veer-''nhi wo mujhe sardi h na isliye mein nhi khaa sakta;;

tanya laughed nsaid-''tumhe zara si sardi h isliye tum ice cream nhi khaa sakte come on veer..chalo thodi si ice cream se khuch nhi hoga''she came out from the car n open the door of his side...both o them came out n went to ice cream parlour... veer ordered only 1 ice cream for her n gave to her...tanya frowned-''tum apne liye nhi laaye''

veer-''nhi tum khaalo phir hum chalte h''
she smiled n came closer to him n said-'' koi baat nhi hum dono ek hi share kar lenge thik h na''

veer feel incomfortable n said-''tannu ye kya kar rhi ho tum jaldi se icecream khatam karo hme ghar bhi jaana h''n moved backward

she came more closer n said-'' veer kya ho gya h tumhe jab bhi mein tumhaare pass aati hun tum hmesha dur kyun chale jaate''n placed her hand on his shoulder...veer saw on another side n saw neha standing outside the car with her sister...

she didn't like them so closed to each other n leave from there...veer looked at her n about to moved when tanya hold her hand-''veer kahan jaa rhe ho''

veer looked at her n said-''tannu tum ice cream khao mein abhi aata hun''n loosened her grip

tanya-''nhi tum mere saath ice cream nhi khaoge to mujhe bhi nhi khaani''n she throw her ice cream

veer frowned at her n said-''tannu ye sab kya h meine kaha na mera man nhi h tum samajhti kyun nhi ho''

tanya with anger-''han mujhe kuch nhi samaj aata bas mein jaa rhi hun bye''n moved
veer was very confused by her sudden change n hold her hand-''accha thik h chalo hum dono saath mein khayenge chalo''
she smiled n sat on chair..veer ordered two ice creams n smiled at her...but his eyes searching for neha..he worried for her n said to tanya-''tannu mei abhi 5 min mein aata hun''she nodded n he leave

he searched but didn't found her...he came outside the parlour n saw her on the corner of road waiting for her sister ...he feel relaxed n went towards her...she looked at him n moved from there
veer-''neha meri baat to suno''n followed her

neha-''mujhe tumhaari koi baat nhi sunni tum jao yahan se''while moving fast

veer-''neha pehle meri baat to suno ''n still followed her n said-''jo bhi tumne dekha wo shi nhi tha ''

she stopped at that moment n said -''to mujhe kyun bta rhe ho mujhe koi farq nhi padta''n again moved towards the road

veer hold her hand tightly n turned her towards him n saw her moist eyes...n loosened his grip,then cotinously gazed at her black moist eye n feel sad...he cupped her face n said-''dekho neha jo bhi tumne dekha wo shi nhi tha wo'' before he could complete his sentence she angrily removed his hands from her face n run from there...veer was very upset n sat on bench worriedly...then he heared a horn sound of truck which was moving with its full speed towards her...he stands up quickely n shouted-''neha''

she didn't listen her n run fast...veer followed her n truck moved with its full speed ,,he shouted again-''neha hato wahan se''

she didn't saw behind n run even more fast...veer run more fast n followed her...as the truck came near her . she heared its sound n turned to saw the truck...she shocked n scared ...n run more fast...truck came more closer n about to strucked her when he holld her tightly from the waist n moved towards the other side...he was out of breath n relaxed to saw her that she was safe...she scared badly n hugged him tightly n closed her eyes...veer lifted his hands n hugged her back more tightly

such a wowieee,... ud

lovely update dear😊...

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

sorry for the late comment..

didnt got tym...was busy...

simply superb parts..

loved all of them..

im not liking tanya always trying to come close to veer..

but loved neha n veer's moments...sooo cute..

n the last scene was really scare..

but thnx god veer pulled her out of the way..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

its ok dear n thanks for ur lovely comment swthrt
will update soon dear😊
ur welcome😛

Originally posted by: prahelika

lovely update dear😊...

finally veer met dr. neha sharma...

and he thought she's following him😆

but still he's flirting with her😆...beautiful doctor😳...

she's really concerened for him😳...

he just caught a little cold and she started applying her doctorgiri😆...

and veer is following her orders so sincerely😳...he denied tanya🤢too...

what kind of girl this tanya is🤢...so chipku...gal he didn't even propose you yet and won't ever😡

and i doubt does she really love veer😕...

look at neha...she cares for his health😍

and this tanya is just provoking him to make his health worse😔...

and now neha is fultoo jealous😳...

and veer saved her from the truck⭐️

waiting for next😍

thanks dear 4 ur comment😊


😊will update soon

Originally posted by: pranita1202

huh! finally finishes all parts

awesome, superb👏

but onething dear u wen u send links they don't apper as links i.e in blue color, sometimes they show error 404. i have to go to my posts then go t ur ff.

thanks dear for ur comment
sorry for that mistake i''ll try to correct it