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Posted: 13 years ago
edited my comment on page 19😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prahelika

first of all a big hug from me for updating on valentines day dear🤗
u just made my day😃...
so finally the disco night is happening😉...
looks like everyone is in a mood of romance😳
rudra sapna shyly romancing😆...dhruv pooja in pehla nasha mood😳
and our veer neha😍...omg...
thanks for putting down the jealousy part dear...
it's such a treat to read the whole veer neha scene😳...
now neha started showing her doctorgiri😆 on veer...well it's not good to drink ice cold water veer...
neha is right this time😉
i loved that neha's lips caressing veer's chick part😍...
plz update soon dear...can't wait to read more😊




thanks swthrt 4 ur lovely comment
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11

veer was about to move when she said-''ruko''
he turned in cofusion...she pointed out her finger towards his cheek n lowered her eyes...veer touched his cheek n saw red colour on it n saw her shy face...he quickly rubbed it...he was very happy but didn't showed on his face...veer gazed at her . soon frowned to saw her face expression he sensed that she wanted to ask something from him...before he could say something he sneezed out energetically...she was worried for him n said-''tumhe to sardi ho gyi''

veer looked at her n sneezed again-''han mujhe sardi bhot jaldi ho jaati h''

neha-''to tum ab koi thandi heez mat khana nhi to tumhaari tabiyat or khraab ho jayegi''

veer smiled at her n nodded...she was lost in her cute smile n smiled back...n with some hesitation she asked-''wo ladki kaun thi''

now he understand everything n made innocent face-''kaun ladki???"'

neha -''wohi jo abhi tumaare saath dance kar rhi thi or wo tumhaare saath us din shopping mall mein bhi thi"with curosity

veer staring at her n said-''wo meri friend h''

neha-''sirf dost h''while confirmed it

veer smiled smirkly n said-''actually friend nhi h wo meri girlfriend h''
neha was shocked to hear this-''girlfriend?''

veer-''han hum dono bachpan se ek dusre ko jaante h or ek dusre se bhot pyaar bhi karte h''n feel very happy

she wanted to kill him at that moment but soon she came to her senses n turned on other side with full of anger...veer felt happy to saw her beautifull face red hot with anger n said-''tum bhi yahan apne boyfriend ke saath aayi ho?''

she stared at him n said-''nhi mein tumhaari tarah nhi hun samjhey tum''n leaved that place with anger

veer was confused by her answer but a next moment he laughed...tanya hear everything that veer said n feel very happy like she was on top of the world n said to herself-''mujhe pta tha ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho par agar tum yeh sab mujhse kehte to mujhe or bhi khushi hoti par koi baat nhi wo din bhi ab dur nhi h jab tum ye sab mujhse kahoge''

its a late night n everyone leave for their houses...veer was happy while driving n tanya who sat next to her was also smiled by his confession...on the other hand neha still fuming with anger n drive the car with full speed...pooja was confused with her sudden change said-'neha car itni tej kyun chala rhi ho abhi hme itni bhi der nhi hui h''

she looked at her sister n managed to smiled at her n said-'' dii wo mom ne jaldi aane ko bola tha na bas isliye hi tej chala rhi thi''

soon both of them reached at their houses

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next morning
(MALHOTRA HOUSE)

nivi entered in veer's room who busy in getting ready for office... nivi-''veer tum office ke liye tyaar ho gye ho kya?''

veer-''han maa"while combed his hairs

nivi -''thik h to jaldi se niche aa jao naasta karne ke liye''n leave

veer came downstairs n sat on chair for breakfast n said-''maa jaldi se naasta dijiye mujhe der ho rhi h''

nivi serve the food to him n said-''veer tumhaare papa ki medicines khatam ho gyi h shaam ko city hospital chale jaana or dr.gupta se apne papa ki medicines or reports le aana''

veer eat hurridely n said-''han han maa chala jayunga''n soon he leaves for office

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SHARMA HOUSE)
naina-neha beta dhere khao gale me atak jayega''

neha-''mom dheere khaane ka time nhi h mujhe der ho rhi h mein jaa rhi hun hospital me hi kuch khaa lungi''n picked her bag n leave

naina-''dyaan se jaana or car dheere chalana''while putting the empty plates n smiled to saw her daughter

sapna noticed her smile n said-''kya baat h mom aaj aap bhot khush ho koi khaas wajah h kya?''

naina-''nhi bas aise h ''n put other plates n said-''meri dono rajkumaariyaan badi ho gyi h ab tum dono ke kiye do rajkumaaro ki talaash h bas''n she smiled at her


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in the office
while reading a file veer said to dhruv-"dhruv agla project me sign karunga''

dhruv-"veer agla project to mamaji or agni sign karne wale h or waise bhi tum to tanya ke saath agla project karne wale ho''n confused.

Veer-"wo mein sambhal lunga bt agla project mein hi karunga n thats final'' while put the file on table n leave

dhruv smiled n said to himself-"ab bhi baccho ki tarah zidd karta h pta nhi yeh bada kab hoga?''

in the evening
veer reached at hospital n went to reception n ask-"mujhe dr.gupta se milna wo kahan milenge''

receptionist-"sorry sir bt aaj wo nhi aaye aapko koi jaruri kaam h kya?

Veer"ji han mujhe unse apne father ki reports or medicines leni thi"

receptionist-"sir aap dr.neha se apne father ki reports le skte or medicines ke liye bhi puch sakte h wo rum no16 me h''

veer-"thank you''
n went towards the rum 16
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
veer teasing neha...was really so cute...
and neha made him aware of his cheeks with lipstick imprints on it...

so so romantic...loved it

oye tanya , madam...aapne sapno ki dooniyan se bahar nikalo...

veer is nt ur bf...n will b never,
don't even think of it.
man neha is jealous...
i like it...i love it ...
imagining her like this...makes so happy and she looks so cute...

our mugdha is really cute...as neha she is awesome.

veer u r soon goin to meet ur neha...in her real AVATAAR...dr. neha sharma...


wa8in
ud soon.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update ,
Veer Neha ko kyu jala rahe ho n tumhe maza aa raha hai hamare bichari Neha ko jelous karke😆
Veer ur going to meet Neha in her hospital
nw u will know that she is a Doctor😉
update soon dear
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear
loved it
superb
waiting 4 veer to meet dr neha
cont soon dear
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

veer teasing neha...was really so cute...
and neha made him aware of his cheeks with lipstick imprints on it...

so so romantic...loved it

oye tanya , madam...aapne sapno ki dooniyan se bahar nikalo...

veer is nt ur bf...n will b never,
don't even think of it.
man neha is jealous...
i like it...i love it ...
imagining her like this...makes so happy and she looks so cute...

our mugdha is really cute...as neha she is awesome.

veer u r soon goin to meet ur neha...in her real AVATAAR...dr. neha sharma...


wa8in
ud soon.

thanks dear
im also imagining her during writing
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

Nice update ,

Veer Neha ko kyu jala rahe ho n tumhe maza aa raha hai hamare bichari Neha ko jelous karke😆
Veer ur going to meet Neha in her hospital
nw u will know that she is a Doctor😉
update soon dear
n thanx for pm

thanks dear 4 lovely comment
will update soon
ur welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

awesome dear

loved it
superb
waiting 4 veer to meet dr neha
cont soon dear
thnx 4 da pm

thanks dear for ur comment
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
veer is making her jealous...n poor neeha use samajh hi nahi pa rahi...😆
n this tanya...satve asmaan pe matt udo jab sach pata chalega to seedhe zameen pe muh ke bal girogi...samjhi...😆
n now veer is going to know about...Dr. NEHA SHARMA...
now veer is going to know that...sirf mental patient hi hospital nahi jaate...doctors bhi jaate hai...veer ki shakal dekhne layak hogi...😉
update soon...
luv u...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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