HUMTUM (RTMC FF) - Page 14

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part 10

veer saw her continously...as she look more beautiful today...but she was looking sad n uninterested...she looked like a angel today,his angel...he smiled at her n soon his chain of thoughts broken by tanya she came more closer n curled her hand around his neck n smiled at him...he felt incomfortable with her n loosened his grasp from her waist...she looked at him n said-''kya hua veer?...

veer looked at her n said-''kuch nhi ''

tanya-''to phir pakdo na mujhe tum to aise dance kar rhe ho jaise jante hi nhi ho mujhe''while holding his hand

veer-''nhi aise baat nhi h tanu mujhe pyaas lagi h mein paani pee ki aata hun''n smiled slightly at her n moved towards the drink counter

tanya felt sad n sat on chair angrily...veer drink cold water n gazed at neha n after sometime he sneezed...neha looked at veer n shocked too saw him there ...now both gazed at each other

(background music)
haan

ankhiyaan nu ankiyaan ujaar lagiyan
kb tak tera raasta mein
haan yuhin takiyaan
(veer smiled at her n she also smiled back)

tu jeene ka sahara
mere yaara oh yaara mere yaara
ho tu jaan se pyaara
mere yaara oh yaara mere yaara
(veer blink his eye n indicate that she look beautiful today)

ho tere intezaar me hun
tere khumaar me hun
ab meri har dua me
rehta h tu
ye jaan le ke h
tu...mohabbat h
tu...inaayat h
tu...tujhi se mein hun
ooo..oo.ooo
(she smiled n lowered her eyes shyly n again steal a glance at him )

tu...meri aadat h
tu...meri chaahat h
tu,,tujhi se mein hun
tujhi se mein hun
(veer moved towards her n she stand shyly on her place n continously staring at him...as he looked more handsome n dashing)

haan ankhiyaan nu ankiyaan ujar lagiyaan
kab tak tera raasta mein
haan yuhin takiyaan[jar lagiyaan]

both staring at her...veer slowly slowly moved towards her but soon his gaze disturbed by tanya...she was standing between the 2 n said-'veer chalo na dance karte h''

neha looked at her angrily n turn her face to other side...veer staring at her n smiled n said to tanya-''han chalo chalte''n moved

to saw this neha frowned n again sat on her chair angrily ...veer grasp tanya's waist n hold one hand in his n start dancing...she fuming with anger to saw both of them...veer noticed anger on her face n smiled again...

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after sometime
sapna searching for rudra n went outside n looked here n there...but he was not there now she was worried for him...she turned n shocked to saw rudra n said angrily-''kahan gaye the tum pta h mein kitni pareshaan ho gyi thi''

rudra made a innocent face n smiled at her-''sorry''

sapna-''kahan gaye the tum''

rudra-''tumhaare liye kuch lene gaya tha''

sapna frowned n said-''mere liye kya lene gye the mujhe kuch nhi chahiye tum chalo yahan se''
suddenly rudra put his pal on her mouth-''shhh...aaj tum kuch nhi bologi jo bolna h bas mein bolunga bas tum sunogi''

then he bend on his knee n stretched his hand towards her which having a red rose n said-''i love u sapna...mein tumse bhot pyaar karta hun ..abse nhi bhot pehle se but kabhi keh nhi paaya par aaj mein kehta hun ki i love u...i love u sapna

to hear this tears are rolling out from her eyes...as she waited for this from many years...rudra standup n hugged her tightly...she also hugged him n sniffing...rudra turned his face to saw her n kissed on her forehead n both of them hugged again...sapna was sobbing n said-''i love u too''
too saw them veer smiled from behind the pillar n leave from there

dhruv n pooja also busy in their talks...dhruv -''aapka naam kya h''

pooja-''mera naam pooja h''

dhruv smiled n said-''mera naam dhruv h''

pooja smiled back...n both of them staring at each other

veer sneezed continosly n said to himself-''yeh kya musibat h ''n hear a female voice n turned to saw her ...she was none other than angel...
neha-''thanda paani piyoge to yahi hoga na''

veer smiled at her -''tum yahan kya kar rhi ho''

neha-''tum yahan kisliye aaye ho''with anger

veer-''pehle meine pucha h to pehle tum mera sawaal ka jawaab do''

neha-''kyun btau mein tumhe ki mein yahan kyun aayi hun''n fumed with anger n turned her face on another side...veer staring at her rosy cheeks n beautiful fair ears..he came closer n whispered in her ears-''aaj tum bhot acchi lag rhi ho''
to hear this she feel happy n turned her face in attitude and...her nose strucked to his as he was very close to her ...they came more closer so close that they even hear the breath of each other...
veer bend his head slightly n her lips touched his cheeks...veer smiled n gazed her lips..she staring at him like a statue...after few seconds she shocked to saw red colour on his cheeks n came to her senses... moved back n lowered her eyes...veer also feel awkward n saw on other side...veer looked at her once n moved ...before that neha said-''ruko''

nice Part neha is jelous

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

happy ''deca'' ma dear-

hope to see this 10 turning to 50 and soon 100.

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thanks dear luv u

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

nice Part neha is jelous

n that Tanya ''Kabab me Haddi'' bahar nikalo yar koi us😡

''.her nose strucked to his as he was very close to her ...they came more closer so close that they even hear the breath of each other...
veer bend his head slightly n her lips touched his cheeks...veer smiled n gazed her lips..she staring at him like a statue''😳

very romantic 😍

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thanks dear 4 lovely comment
will update soon

first of all a big hug from me for updating on valentines day dear🤗
u just made my day😃...
so finally the disco night is happening😉...
looks like everyone is in a mood of romance😳
rudra sapna shyly romancing😆...dhruv pooja in pehla nasha mood😳
and our veer neha😍...omg...
thanks for putting down the jealousy part dear...
it's such a treat to read the whole veer neha scene😳...
now neha started showing her doctorgiri😆 on veer...well it's not good to drink ice cold water veer...
neha is right this time😉
i loved that neha's lips caressing veer's chick part😍...
plz update soon dear...can't wait to read more😊

Originally posted by: tejjo

part 10

veer saw her continously(aakhein hatay nahi hat rahi...ooo...).as she look more beautiful today...but she was looking sad n uninterested...she looked like a angel today,his angel(oye hoye...😳)...he smiled at her n soon his chain of thoughts broken by tanya she came more closer n curled her hand around his neck n smiled at him...he felt incomfortable with her n loosened his grasp from her waist...she looked at him n said-''kya hua veer?..(tanya...tum chup nahi baith sakti...kya?).

veer looked at her n said-''kuch nhi ''

tanya-''to phir pakdo na mujhe tum to aise dance kar rhe ho jaise jante hi nhi ho mujhe''while holding his hand(dont touch him...he is busy staring neha☺️)

veer-''nhi aise baat nhi h tanu mujhe pyaas lagi h mein paani pee ki aata hun''n smiled slightly at her n moved towards the drink counter...(good veer👏)

tanya felt sad n sat on chair angrily...veer drink cold water n gazed at neha n after sometime he sneezed...neha looked at veer n shocked too saw him there ...now both gazed at each other(so romantic😳)

(background music)
haan

ankhiyaan nu ankiyaan ujaar lagiyan
kb tak tera raasta mein
haan yuhin takiyaan
(veer smiled at her n she also smiled back)

tu jeene ka sahara
mere yaara oh yaara mere yaara
ho tu jaan se pyaara
mere yaara oh yaara mere yaara
(veer blink his eye n indicate that she look beautiful today)

ho tere intezaar me hun
tere khumaar me hun
ab meri har dua me
rehta h tu
ye jaan le ke h
tu...mohabbat h
tu...inaayat h
tu...tujhi se mein hun
ooo..oo.ooo
(she smiled n lowered her eyes shyly n again steal a glance at him )

tu...meri aadat h
tu...meri chaahat h
tu,,tujhi se mein hun
tujhi se mein hun
(veer moved towards her n she stand shyly on her place n continously staring at him...as he looked more handsome n dashing)

haan ankhiyaan nu ankiyaan ujar lagiyaan
kab tak tera raasta mein
haan yuhin takiyaan[jar lagiyaan](perfect background song...lovely)

both staring at her...veer slowly slowly moved towards her but soon his gaze disturbed by tanya...she was standing between the 2 n said-'veer chalo na dance karte h''(i wanna kill this tanya...)

neha looked at her angrily n turn her face to other side...veer staring at her n smiled n said to tanya-''han chalo chalte''n moved(veer , why r u disturbing neha with such action)

to saw this neha frowned n again sat on her chair angrily ...veer grasp tanya's waist n hold one hand in his n start dancing...she fuming with anger to saw both of them...veer noticed anger on her face n smiled again...(jealousy...umm...i like it...this is first step of love ladder/...cool going neha...cont. ...lage raho.)

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good...rudra , very good...

u were ⭐️sooper cool 😎while proposing sapna...

yeh!...i loved it...👏

veer sneezed continosly n said to himself-''yeh kya musibat h ''n hear a female voice n turned to saw her ...she was none other than angel...(ooo...veer ki angel)
neha-''thanda paani piyoge to yahi hoga na''(good logic...hamari neha kitni intelligent hai na!)

veer smiled at her -''tum yahan kya kar rhi ho''(jahan tum , vahan neha)

neha-''tum yahan kisliye aaye ho''with anger(jahan tum vahan veer, simple)

veer-''pehle meine pucha h to pehle tum mera sawaal ka jawaab do''(very good...haq se mango apna answer...aakhir u hav full right on her)

neha-''kyun btau mein tumhe ki mein yahan kyun aayi hun''n fumed with anger n turned her face on another side...veer staring at her rosy cheeks n beautiful fair ears..he came closer n whispered in her ears-''aaj tum bhot acchi lag rhi ho''(aakhir caar , yeh scene hai, scene of the ud...sooper good...loved it...)
to hear this she feel happy n turned her face in attitude (ab kis baat ka attitude...tariif tho kar di usne!🤔)and...her nose strucked to his as he was very close to her ...they came more closer so close that they even hear the breath of each other...☺️(sooo...R-O-M-A-N-T-I-C)

veer bend his head slightly n her lips touched his cheeks...veer smiled n gazed her lips..she staring at him like a statue.☺️☺️☺️.☺️☺️.after few seconds she shocked to saw red colour on his cheeks n came to her senses... moved back n lowered her eyes.(OOO...sharmagayi...neha ☺️blushed😍)..veer also feel awkward n saw on other side...veer looked at her once n moved ...before that neha said-''ruko''......(yes!.good gal...ruklo apne veer ko...aur lipstick tho poch do...)

awesome update... Thanxx for the pm :-)