DROWNING IN YOUR LOVE ...teaser ..pg 56 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

congrats on new ff...

interesting start...
so wats the back story abt geet
waiting for the next




you will have to wait for the back story...
thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan




ossum promo dear...
loved it
so marvin calls her jasmin
great dear
i hope we can see J msk dear
and dear pls give precap after the update dear




thanks dear ...

updating in few minutees ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aur kitna time lagega dear pls tell
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Posted: 13 years ago


Geet didn't knew what hurt her the most '. Anwesha hiding the fact or maan calling her gold ' digger '. Did he really think so low about her ???? maan had seen her and anwesha together thousands of time '.so he knew that she was the only friend of anwesha because anwesha didn't talk with others '.

Was it his way of saying that she was a gold- digger ??? she looked at him and saw him smirking '. It WAS Indeed his way '. Fine '.

Boss is always right naw '. Fine then let it be this way mr.khurana '.. if you think that I don't say it doesn't means that I am weak' you will see now what I am capable of doing '..

And then a splendid idea came to her mind as she was staring at the india forums and was reading one of the fan fictions'.. and as she was she made the plan more devilish and devastating '..

As dekhte hain mr. MULE SNAKE KOALA '' ki aapko mujhse kaun bachata hai '. You are going to regret what you have said to me '. Be ready for the GAME IS ON'..

She rubbed her hands together in a evilish way and laughed loudly ' and after she planned every thing and was satisfied she remembered that maan had given he a file to complete and then she hit he head and mumbeled to herself '..

Geet '. Chal bte lag ja kaam pe '. Warna whoh snake tujhe dass lega'.

And then humming to herself a nice song she began working on the file '.

And this was how maan saw her through the binds '. Looking at the computer with great concentration'' and then she smiled and what ??? she rubbed her palms and laughed while doing a little bhangra sitting on her chair' and then she picked up a file which he very well recognized to be the one he had given her to complete and then she looked at it for some time ' slapped her forehead and began to work on it'.

Yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi'.

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Maan was working concentratedly on the desai file when he heard a knock on his door'.

Come in '..

And after some time when he had convineintly forgotten that there was some one in his cabin .. he was brought to present by a ring of sharp bell that was on his table to call the peon '.. he looked up to see who the hell was that who had the nerve to do so???? And he looked up to see the familiar sight of the sawar claded spectacled wearing girl looking down at him as if he was some alien'..

What ???? why did you do that ????

Geet ' what ?????

Maan ' ringing the bell near my ears geeettt '

Geet ' so that you can see that I am standing here from past 15 minutes sssiiirrr''.

Maan - kya hua ???? he asked shaking his head'. By now he knew that there was no way out arguing with her '..

Geet - kya hua ????

Maan - geet tum mere cabin main kyun aayi ho ????

Geet ' ooww!!!! Whoh aap jane ''

Maan ' main kaise janunga ?????

Geet ' aapne mujhe bulaya hai remember ?????

Maan ' oh !!! haan '. Maine tumhe jo file diya tha whoh complete ho gaya ?????

Geet ' ji sir'.

Maan ' fine ' on Saturdays its half day and you don't have to wait for me ' you can leave at 12 '. Par pehle submit the file '.

Geet ' ji sir '..

And with that she went to get the file '.

Yeh mujhe kya ho gaya ???? maan singh khurana kabse bhulne laga ???? damn this girl ' I have to keep my distance''

Again a knock disturbed his thinking '. And as he saw her head popping inside first he couldn't help but smile and forgot what he was thinking at the first place!!!!!!

But controlling himself he called her inside '

Geet ' sir!!! File '..

Maan ' hmm'.

Maan took the file and looked inside but was unable to see anything ''

Mujhe kuch ho gaya hai ' I wont let this girl effect me '.. I will prove today ki yeh ladki mujhe effect nahin karti '.

Geet .. mujhe is file ke 10 copies cahiye' abhi ' maan said '

Geet ' okies '..

Maan ' kya ????? what did you say ????

Geet ' okies '..

Maan ' now what does that mean????

Geet ' sir aapko nahin lagta ki aap jyada hin serious joke karte hain ?????

Maan ' serious joke ???? yeh kya hota hai???

Geet ' jaise ki aapne abhi kaha ki aapko okies ka matlab nahin pata '..

Maan ' huh ''

Now actually geet was staring as if maan was from some other planet'.

Geet ' sir aap alien ho ????

Maan ' huh?????

Geet ' okies!!!! Okies ka matlab hai ok ' thik hai '.

Maan ' huh!!! Tum aur tumhare words '' anyways go and compete the task '.

As she went he was astonished '.

Yeh ladki mujhe kya kar deti hai??? nahin yeh aaj yahan se jane se pehle hin main prove ka dunga ki geet handa doesn't effects me '.. wait'' wait'. wait '.

God!!! Yeh main kya sooch raha hoon ???? effect me ???? whoh bhi geet handa ???? sach main yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi '.

Damn you MSK'..what the hell are you thinking????

And after chiding himself for some time when he was sure that he wont think about his secretary he went to work '.

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A car halted in front of KC'. A boy looking 22- 24 years old came out of the car '. Giving the keys to the driver ' and walked inside the company '. As he walked inside all the girls were looking at him '. Drooling over him '.

Hey beautiful '.. he said to the receptionist '..

Yes '' the girl was also drooling over him '.. he gave a killing smile and the girl almost fainted '.

Can you tell where is jasmine ???

Sorry sir ' par yahan koi jasine nahin kaam kati '..

Oh '. Then tell me atleast what's your name beautiful ????

Sharmili ''

but you look too bold to be sarmili you know '..

marvin ?????

the boy turned around to see the girl who knew him there '. He came face to face with anwesha '.

Marvin - hi lady '.. there was a hint of disliking in his tone that he was clever enough to hide '.

Anwesha ' what are you doing here ????

Marvin ' of course to see jasmine '..

Anewsha ' she is called geet here marvin '.

Marvin ' thanks for reminding of her original name anwesha singh k.

Anwesha - I will tell her '.

She said completely offended by his talk ''

Marvin ' sorry lady '. But you don't need to do that she is coming here ''

With that he pointed towards the corridor from where geet was coming towards them ..

Geet ' hey marv '. Seen my pencil some where ' I seem to have lost it '.

She said without looking up at him '.

Marvin ' yah '. Its on your head love '.

And with that he pulled out the pencil that held her bun ' and as the pencil came out so her long beautiful hairs that were held up in a hair band '

Geet ' thanks marv ' you are a life savior '..

Marvin ' I know '. Well this is for you '..

He said as he gave a rose to her '. She took it with a smile on her face '..

Geet ' you know I hate roses marv'. And I don't understand why you bring roses for me every day '.

Marvin ' well I know you hate roses and love jasmine flowers '. But you know I so love roses and I also love you so techniqually you love roses or even roses love you '.

Geet ' oh !!! I dodnt knew that dr.marvin disouza became a mathematician all of a sudden '. Gadha kahinka '..

Marvin ' my pleasure love ' well I hope you remember that we are having a match today and franco is on my team '..

Geet 'babaji '. I hate you marv '..

Marv ' but I love you jashmine '.. he said winking at her '..

Geet ' hai babaji'.. kya hoga is ladke ka ????

Marv ' oh jashmine's babaji '. Can you please remind this girl that someone doesn't understands hindi too well '. So she can do the honours of tanslating it to english''

And then geet laughed '. Heartily and felt the pain of maan's words being lifting from her heart '.

Geet ' what are you doing here marv???

Marv ' well I was coming from hospital so thought you can drop me'. Hamare ghar main ?????

Geet ' where is your car ???

Marv - in the road '.

Geet ' and road ???

Marv ' to our destination love '.

Geet ' third to left is my cabin marv '. Wait there till I finish my work '.

With that she started to walk out when marv again called her '.

Geet ' let me finish my work marv'. Else MD will kill me '.

Marv ' first tell me what are you wearing jasmine ???

Geet ' its called dress marv '..

Marv ' no'. its not dress ' it's a typical Indian salwar '. When did your taste become so weried ???? he sounded actually astonished '.

Geet ' shall we talk about my dress when I come to my cabin marv '..

Marv ' fine jash '. Hey where is your cell ????

Geet ' why ?????

Marv - I want to talk with your boy friend '.

Geet ' in my purse '. And please don't do any funny stuffs with it ' and keep it in the vase '.

And with that she went on her way throwing the rose back at marv ' while he walked wishtling to himself and winking at girls '..

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Anwesha ' care to tell me the reason of your rudeness marv '.

It was that while he was sitting in her cabin anwesha barged in to geet's cabin and dragged marv out and pulled her to a corner of the office'.

Marv ' you know the reason lady '..

Anwesha ' you have been avoiding me since the day you came to know that I am maan singh khurana's sister '. Yeh toh nahin jaise kit um koi middle class ghar ke ladke ho '.

Marv ' at least I am not hiding any thing from her '. But did you tell her that you are actually anwesha singh khurana '. She hates lairs anwesha '. You should know that '.

Anwesha ' is it the reason or have you fallen for her marv ???? oh yes you both stay in one house '..

But before she could continue any thing marv held her hand roughly and pushed her to a piller with their faces very close '.

Marv ' don't you dare any more word miss. Anwesha ssingh khurana '. You are her friend right ??? and you don't fell shame to say so ???? and get one thing straight anwesha '.. I don't have any feelings for you and it would be better if you get that '.. and just because you are a khurana it doesn't mean s that every boy will kiss your feet'..

MARVIN '''

They both turned to see geet standing there with shock written on her face '. And then her shock turned to anger '.. marv left anwesha and took few steps back '..

Marv ' jasmine ''

But geet stopped him from saying anything by showing her hand '.

Geet ' to my cabin now '.

Marv ' but jas'..

Geet ' now marv' before I do some thing I will regret '.

Without arguing any more he walked back to her cabin .. when geet rushed to anwesha '.

I am so sorry anwesha ' pata nahin use ky aho gaya '. Believe me he is a flirt but he never misbehaves with any one '. I am so sorry anwesha ''

Anwesha ' geet '. Whoh '. Marv'..

Geet ' you don't to say anything anwesha '. I will make sure that he doesn't comes near you ever '. Don't worry I will talk with him'.

she said as she went away to her cabin clearly hurt by the sceen witnessed'. Anwesha was left shocked at the turn of events '. And after few seconds she too went away'..

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Geet ' what was that marv ????

Marv ' believ me I have not done anything ''.

Geet ' I don't wanna talk about it '. I just want you to stay away from her '. pehle hin uske bhai ne mujhe gold-digger kaha hai ' I don't want any more accusitions marv '.

Marv ' who ????

Geet ' maan singh khurana '. Anyways marv you go and wait in the reception I will be there in few minutes '.

Marv ' where are you going ????

Geet ' to give the files to MD '.. please stay away from her marv '..

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As expected there was a knock in his cabin '

Come in '.

But this time there was no head instead geet walked inside the cabin '

Sir' files ' 10 copies kardi hain '.

She said without looking up at him '.. and handed him the files '.

Maan could see that she was upset ''

Ok'. He said

Geet ' good day sir '..

She was so disturbed that she failed to notice few peoples in the cabin looking at her intently 'She said as she went out of the cabin '. Only to see both marv and anwesha talking '. Now she was furious '. Actual furious '..

You don't get it once said ' do you marvin????

Anwesha ' geet '.

Geet ' I don't want to hear anything from you anwesha '. Nothing '.. I know and I respect marv and I don't want any of your acquaintance to blame me later for I have spoiled their girl '. I WONT TOLERATE IT'.. and so its better you remember it always '..

Walking upto marv she held his hand and dragged him out of the office '.

Precap '

The cricket match'.



hope you will like it ...

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sia ...


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Edited by lovelycutietedy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it dear
ossum
why marvin and geet leaves in same place
And why geet said at last tht she and marvin.redpects
whom she respevts dear
is it msk
wht is the truthdear
do.annie knw abt tht
waiting fr next prt dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
cool yaar yeh marvin kya cheez hai
maan calling geet gold digger
one more update i get clear i think
geet , annie, n marvin
god how will the story go
marvin falling for geet oh sia

will be waiting for another part
now time to watch gurus new soap
ounar vivah
bye
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Posted: 13 years ago
Too good.
This has to be the best ff of yours...I love your work but this one is too good...
The mystery of geet just gets getting big and more mysterious...
Continue soon...
But I am sad that you did not send me pm this time... 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear sia
love each and every word you write dear love the update and waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update dear
i loved it so so much
continue soon

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