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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TimelessBeauty

That was just... WOW!! Just loved it!


Arnav just knows how to make Khushi quiet. And then his "unbelievable" - typical Arnav style!

His hormones are always working overtime around her; he's always looking for opportunities to just kiss her and do stuff with her. And Khushi's heart is always on an overdrive around him. Poor girl, I don't blame her. He is hotness defined!

And did the seducer turn into the seduced? Khushi thought she could tarpaofy and tarsaofy him with her lehenga... and BOOM! He grabs the opportunity and starts playing touchy-feely with her. She should've known it was coming. Has she ever watched that song from Bobby? You know, the Hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho. She should've known.

Can't wait to see her reaction... or more like how she feels at the end of all this seduction! 😆



Haha thank you!!
Lol Khushi's playing with fire here, so she's bound to get burned 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arhi-fan

Hey n i'm also a goldie now.
It was just brilliant. I mean it would have been a tiresome job for him to shop with khushi for 2 hrs. But the end just made up for it. I think the seducer was herself seduced off. But i really liked arnav made full use of oppurtunity. Waiting for next one.



Congrats :DD doesn't it seem weird to see your name is yellow??! It does to me, lol.
Thank you!! Haha Arnav's testosterone level's are rising, and he needs to release some of that...ahem..tension that's built up 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneil92

what the... My mouth went dry... for the first time in my life! Damn! This is hotter than any of the explicit lust scenes I've seen writers do! It's the subtlety but the burning flame of passion at the same time that makes it sooo drool worthy. Loved it to bits shreya! Damn woman. You're so good at this! LOVED IT! Now. I WANT MORE.


You have to satiate my CARNAL HUNGER!🤣

Look at me. I never had a BF in my life, and I'm acting like the woman of the world. LOL. 😆

But really, shreya! THIS WAS EPIC! ☺️



SERIOUSLY??! Ahh I'm glad :))
Bahaha carnal hunger. Really Shalu? Really? 🤣
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you think so 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fatz-

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G...loved it!!❤️😳

i can just imagine Khushi in that dress and arnav's reaction😍
gosh, u better update this soon, or else u are dead meat😳🤣



My dear Fatima, you are so cute when you're TRYING to sound threatening!! 🤣(notice I put emphasis on the word TRYING 😛)
Thanks so much 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was brilliant !!!!!! Loved it !!!
Khushi is just so intelligent sometimes !!!!!!
Cant wait to read more !!!
Thnx for the pm !!!! Update soon !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply amazin update luvd it x 🤗
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt part x 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
That ws a hottt update...
but the first part ws cute when asr pecked khushi's cheeks...Loved that part...
Waiting for the nxt part...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
greaaat! loved it! xxx amazing writing shreya xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it seducing arnav singh raizada ooohhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it seducing arnav singh raizada
ooohhh

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