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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

Part 53



Dev: bro

Maan: hmm

Dev: bro koi tips do

Maan: mein kya do

Yha toh geet khud naraz hai

Geet: aap bhul rhe hai

Mein yhi hu

Aur aap mere baare mein hi kh rhe hai

Maan: wo geet

She turns the face in another direction.

Geet: dev

Dev: hmm

Geet: meera ko jaake mnao

Dev: pr kaise

Geet: apni galati
maan lena dil se

Tum usse dil se job hi khonge

To wo maan jayengi'..

Dev: hmm







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He sits near to her, and takes
her hand on his.



Maan: geet , wo mein



Geet: mujhe aapse koi baat
nhi krni

Maan: jaisi tumhari marzi

Geet: hawww

She turns the face.



Geet(mummer) : dekha babaji inhe meri koi parwah nhi hai

He stands for leaving the place, but she held her hand.



Maan(think): mujhe pata tha geet , tum mujhe rok longi

Maan: hmm

Kya hua

Tumhe to mujhse koi baat nhi krni

Fir mein yha rhke kya kru



He shocked due to hear geet words.

Geet: jaate waqt door close krke jaana.

Ok



Maan: kya

Geet: oh

Aapko sayad sunai nhi diya

jaate waqt door close krke jaana.



She loosens the grip from his hand.



Maan: hmm

She lightly smiles but unnoticed by maan.



Maan(think) : jyada gussa hai sayad mujhse



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Dev: meera sch mein maine
jaanbuzkar kuch nhi kiya

Meera: wo to tum kbhi krte hi nhi ho

Bs sb apne aap ho jaata hai

Dev: hmm

Meera: kya

Dev: nhi

Wo meeting ke baad mein direct bro ko lene chla gya

Phone silent se general pe krna yaad hi nhi rha



Sch mein meera

Maine
tumhara phone jhanbuzkar avoid nhi kiya hai



Meera: ho gya

Dev: ha

Meera: to mein jayu

Dev: hmm

Meera(mummer) :- idiot, stupid, duffer



Dev: tumne kuch kha

She denied angrily.

Dev( think):- ye kya abhi bhi gussa hai kya



She takes one step for leaving but his voice stop her.



Dev: ek minute meera

He came front of her and says " tumne mujhe maaf to kr diya
hai na"

She not gives any answer.



Dev: kuch bolo to shi

Meera: mere bolne se koi farq pdta hai tumhe



He held both ears and say sorry.

Dev: please



But she is not ready for forgive him.

He pulled her by wrist; in this sudden pull his lips lightly
brush her.




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On dinner table



Daadi: I hope aap dono ne abhi tk hmari betiyo se maafi
mangli hongi

Dev: hmmm



Daadi: aur apne maan

Maan(mummer): wo to mujhse koi baat hi nhi krna chahti



Daadi: apne kuch kha

Maan: ji nhi

Daadi: to phir kuch khiye

Maafi mangiye

Maan: koi kuch sunana hi nhi chahta ho to

Daadi: kya khehna chahte hai

Geet: daadimaa

Dinner ready hai

Mein serve kr deti hu

Daadi: bte aap dono bhi baith jaiye hmare pass

Meera: ji

Meera sit with dev and geet goes near meera , but maan said
"geet yha baith jayo"

She come sit near to him.

Maan(mummer) thanks to geet babaji, ab isne kuch nhi kaha

Geet: kuch kha aapne



Maan : ha

Geet: kya

Maan: mujhe wo sbzi pass krna

Geet: hmm

 



Her spoon fall down on the floor, she bends for picking the
spoon. At this time, maan held her hand'

She gritted her teeth and says "leave my hand"

He denied.

Maan: phle promise kro'''mujhse baat krongi

Geet: nhi

Bilkul nhi

Maan: baat to tum ab bhi mujhse kr rhi ho

Fir mna kyun kr rhi ho

Geet: nhi sunani aapki koi baat

Maan: to thik hai

Mein bhi hath nhi chodunga

Geet: dust danav

Maan: dust hi shi

Jaisa bhi hu''tumhara hu

She smiles, she realize, she is angry with him, so she make
again angry face.



Maan: geet hsne mein koi burai nhi hai

Jitna hasna hai has
lo

Geet: mein nhi hs rhi hu

Maan: maine abhi
dekha tumko



Daadi: wha kya khusr fusr ho rhi hai

Maan: kuch nhi daadimaa

Geet tum khana kyun nhi kha rhi

Daadi: kya huya beta aur kuch khane ka mann hai

To hume btaiye

Meera: ha geet

Mein abhi bna lati hu



Geet: nhi

Mein khana kha rhi hu

Acha bna hai

Meera : hmm

Maan: to mere samne khayo

Geet(mummer) : ravaan

He smiles.



She tries to eat food from right hand.

Maan: geet tum sidhe hath se khana kyun kha rhi ho

Tum to left se khati ho na

Daadi: bte kya huya dusre hath ko

Geet: kuch nhi daadimaa

Ek dust kide ne kaat liya 

Meera: dust kida

Khi swelling to nhi aa gyi

Geet: nhi meera

Bs katne wala tha

Usse phle maine usse maar diya

She pinches on his hand tightly.



Maan: oouch

Daadi: ab aapko kya huya

Maan : kuch nhi daadimaa

Galati se apni ugli kha gya

Daadi: aap khana khaiye

Hmara ho gya



Geet: mera bhi

Meera: geet mein bhi chalti hu tumhare sath

Geet: hmm



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Dev: bro sb thik ho gya 

Maan: kuch thik nhi huya

Geet to mujhse baat hi nhi krna chahti

Dev: aur meera to mujhe dekh ke bhi andekha kr rhi hai



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Geet: kya huya meera

Tum khush si lag rhi ho

Meera: asa kuch nhi hai

Geet: kuch to huya hai

Mujhe nhi btayongi

Meera: aaj humara rishta ''.ek kadam aage bd gya geet



Majboori mein jude rishte mein ''.dosti se aage bdkar''..ek
nye ehsaas ko phli baar mahsoos kiya

Geet: meera is rishte ko majburi ka naam mt do

Tum to shuru se hi '''dev ke liye kuch mahsoos krti thin a



Aaj tumhari baton se lagta''.us pyaar ki tapis ko dev ne aaj
mahsoos kiya

Meera: hmm

Shuru se bhut pasand krti thi dev ko

Na jane kb dosti se jyada mere liye maann mein pyaar ka
ehsaas aa gya

Pr dev to naintara se pyaar krta tha

Mein un dono ke beech nhi aana chahti thi

Isliye apne papa ki khushi ke liye kissi aur se shaadi tk
krne ke liye tyaar ho gyi



Geet: mein smjh sakti hu meera

Maine bhi to maan se shaadi daadimaa ke liye kit hi

Aur maan bhi mujhse shaadi unhi ke liye ki

Meera: aur dev ne daadimaa ke khnepe

Jb phere ko waqt us insaan kitni asani se mere character pe
ugli utha di

Sirf isliye''..maine tute huye dev ko smbhala

Naintara ne jb dev se shaadi ke liye mna kr diya

Aur kissi aur se shaadi kr li

Usne bs apni bhen sameera ki baton pe yakeen tha

Dev ke baare mein ek baar bhi unse nhi socha

Wo tut gya tha

Usse miane ek dost ke naate smbhale

Aur us insaan ne is baat se mere character pe ugli utha di

Tb dev ne mera hath thama''.daadimaa se manjoori leke



Geet: jb daadimaa ne maan ko saaf saaf mna kr diya

Wo sameera se unki shaadi nhi kra sakti

Wo unke liye ek schi humsafar kbhi nhi ban payengi

Tb maan is baat ko manana hi nhi chahte the



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Geet: maine khurana construction join sirf ek contest ki
fees brne ke liye join kiya tha



us din mein bhut khush thi'..mein contest jeet gyi
thi''..mujhe 1^st prize mila tha''aur usse bhi interesting baat
''..maan wha ke chief guest the with magazine owner.

Unhone mujhe gift diya''.apne dost ke hatho se gift leke
mujhe bhut acha laga''



Wha sameera bhi thi'..maan ke sath aayi thi

Na jane mujhe un dono ki closeness achi nhi lagi'''sayad
isliye maan ke life mein sbse imp, thi ek waqt''aaj kissi aur ko itne karib
dekha'''..



Maan ussi din sameera ko daadimaa se milana chahte the'..



Sayad daadimaa ne uss din sameera ki kuch baatein sunli
thi''.wo kissi se baat kr rhi thi phone pe''.

Tb daadimaa ne ye fasla le liya''.wo maan ki shaadi asi
ladki se nhi hone dengi'..jiske liye maan bs ek siddi hai uchaiyo tk puchne
tk''.

Isliye daadimaa ne maan ko mna kr diya''pr karan nhi
btaya''maan karan janana chahte the''..issi bhs mein daadimaa ko heartattack aa
gya'''



Daadimaa ne mujhse maan se shaadi krne ko kha''.mujhe kuch
smjh nhi aa rha tha mein kya jwab du''.

Ha kh diya'..to''.khi mera dost mujhe galat na smjhle

Na mein kh nhi sakti thi'''''



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Meera: mein smjh sakti hu geet

Jb papa ne mujhse shaadi ke liye kha tha

Mujhe bhi asa hi laga tha

Ha kaise kh du

Mera dil to bs Dev ko chahta hai''..

Aur mere papa mera ghar bsta dekhna chahte the'''



Pta nhi geet ye kaisa pyaar hai'''aaj jisse phli manzil milli'''''.





Both pass the smiles.

wow priyanka...its really nice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

MAANU SER GEET SAWA SAIR😆😆😆
it was such a beautiful update
meera n geet conversation superb
so maanu first liked sam gosh
acha hua daddi ne maaneet ko baand diya
lvd it