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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh kabhees kon ghus gya bich main grrr 😡
iska toh main baad main dath torro gi kabar dar jo maanet ko alag kiya
plzzz continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaanu ye kya hai ye kon ullu hai jo meri angel ko pareshan kr raha hai...mere samne aa jaye to i ll kill him/her...euuu...grrr
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Posted: 12 years ago
Priyanka, awesome as always.
Do cont soon & do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 52

She hugged him more tightly.

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He caressed her hair.

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Maan: geet

She doesn't give any answer.

He came out from hug ' she placed her palm on his face and cares his cheek.

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Maan: geet kya huya hai

Mujhe btao

She is happy'he came back home safely'but her tears not stop'continuous following.

Geet: maan

Wo

She sobbed between in talks.

He cupped her face and said "mishty , please stop crying"

Tum janti ho na mein tumhari aankho mein aansu nhi dekh sakta

Daadimaa: geet kya huya beta

Ab hume fikr ho rhi hai

Maan: geet , kuch btao na

Geet: maan wo '.wo'..phone call''.

One man enter in house and said "hey maan"

He turns and looks at this person.

Maan: tum yha

Man: I think mein wrong time pe aa gya

Sb thik to hai na

Geet ko kya huya ''.. wo asse''.

Meera: kuch nhi

Dev: tum yha kaise

Man: wo tum apna credit card mall mein bhul gye the

Dev: mall mein

Man: ha jb tum aur maan aaps mein baat kr rhe the

Tb sayad pocket se kuch nikalte waqt ye wha gir gya

Dev: oh, thanks

Maan: karan andher aayo

Hum andher baithke baat karte hai

Karan: hmm

She entangled her fingers into his.

Maan: geet are you ok

She nodded, but her heart and mind not there.

Her heart carries some fear'

Fear to loss own life''..

Maan , her life

Her love

"Hum unhe kho nhi sakte

Apni zindagi'' ko yu bikhrte nhi dekh sakte''

Lafz hotho pe aake ruk jate hai'''..

Aur ye aansu '''na chaha ke bhi bh jate hai'''."

All are seated in hall.

Karan: geet , preprations kaisi chl rhi hai

Geet:

Karan: geet kya baat hai

Maan: ha geet

Mujhe btao na

Geet: maan wo kuch nhi

I am not feeling well.

He stands and scoops her into arms''she encircled her hand on his neck.

He walks one step and turns'said "karan abhi geet tumse baat nhi kar sakti"

Tum baad mein baat kr lena

He nodded and said: - "apna dhyan rakhna geet''aur tumhare apno ka bhi"

Dev: kya matlab

Karan: I mean ' apne pariwaar ka

Maan: hmm

In Room

He placed her on bed and softly caresses her cheek.

Maan: geet tum aaram kro

Mei n abhi doctor ko phone krta hu

Geet: pr kyun

Maan: mujhe tumhari tabiyat thik nhi lag rhi hai

Daadimaa: wo to hone hi tha

Maan: kya matlab daadi

Daadimaa: wo aap humse puch rhe hai

Aap dono ko koi parwah bhi hai

Hmari betiyo ki

Maan: daadi maa wo hum dono

Shopping ke liye gye the

Daadi: to ghar mein bta nhi sakte the

Aap jante bi hai maan

Hum sb kitne pareshan ho gye the

Maan: sorry daadimaa

Dev: sorry daadimaa

Daadi: for what

Jb aapko hm sb ki koi parwah hi nhi hai

He stands and takes daadi hand in own hand and said: "sorry daadimaa"

Hum dono aage se asi galati nhi karenge

Both hold the both ears.

Daadimaa: maafi mangni hai to hmari betiyo se mangiye

Both said together: ji

Daadi: aur ha

Usse phle'. Geet ko kuch khila dijiye

Unhone subh se kuch nhi khaya hai

Maan: kya

Geet tum'

Daadi: pyaar se baat kriye

Dev: meera

Wo mein

She not hears anything and goes to own room.

Dev: daadimaa

She also left.

Dev: bro

Maan: hmm

Dev: bro koi tips do

Maan: mein kya do

Yha toh geet khud naraz hai

Geet: aap bhul rhe hai

Mein yhi hu

Aur aap mere baare mein hi kh rhe hai

Maan: wo geet

She turns the face in another direction.

Geet: dev

Dev: hmm

Geet: meera ko jaake mnao

Dev: pr kaise

Geet: apni galati maan lena dil se

Tum usse dil se job hi khonge

To wo maan jayengi'..

Dev: hmm

Precap :- kaise mnaye

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update so much dear...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet sab kuch maan ko bata do...chhupao maat...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ITS RLLY GOOD YAR

SACHI MAIN RLLY GUD

APP PICS KAISEY POST KARTE HO??????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..geet scared for maan's life...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor scared geet
n whi is that person
y me feeling that its may n that karan
n ye geet preegy news kab degi maanu ko
precap- maaanu manao geet
cont soon

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