The Feather of Blue Bird#2 [MN] *Completed* - Page 16

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Suja..its wonderful update...you know the way you describe Mayank's rudeness and nupur's pain..I could actually feel it and also the silent pain of Mayank...

Beautifully written.

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Originally posted by: Mudrika25

nice part...
may be this party invitation has bought a good turn in their life...
the breakfast part was so beautiful...love can be seen in his eyes, though he aws trying not to show them...
your way of expressing feelings is amazing...
waiting for the next part...

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Originally posted by: drmaha

firstly i m extremely sorry by heart kaan paker k... m terribly late suja but believe me i am stil badly stuck in things going on in my life... 😔

now cuming to update...

my god wht a update it was just amazing.. nupur is trying to let hi back and her evry reaction made him to think over it wow...

and now m eagerly waiting for the party m sure nupur would definetly play sumtng smart wid him... 😉

and fiza eht a title... lovely...

cont soon suja... 🤗🤗

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Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Lovly part.

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Originally posted by: Sagacious.R

nicely written

thanks for PM..

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Hmm

Even I am nervous about the party, moreover about them being together in party

Mayank's condition is something it feels vr use too to it, it will be new thing even for him if he will feel good…this is something he has forgotten actually how it feels

I like MRs Roy…she was like a soft breeze for them

And the song was perfect for the moment…the moment was so so beautiful actually after so long there was like a confrontation of there emotions…infront of eachother..

But I am too afraid of wht he is gonna do whn thy will reach home

Cont soon Suja

Beautiful