IPKKND: Breathing Only Half of the Air Thread 1

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Afreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow this is really nice!!!:)

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karisma

@karisma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

so sad!!! awww..heartbreak 4 arnav

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Amazing !!!!! Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!!! Update soon !!!

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shaam91

@shaam91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

oh..i loved it..but..:(..khushi had a baby with someone else.:(..but wht the heck..u are the writer..!!..and a fab one!

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Saniya

@saniya.x

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

OMG, Khushi's married to someone else? & has a baby as well? woah, I really felt bad for Arnav there. <3 but I still loved it. (:

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moonlight99

@moonlight99

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hey! Awesome Story! Are you going to continue?

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ChicagoCarole1

@ChicagoCarole1

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Wow!...I'm at a loss...definitely intrigued...but having strange emotions about this...this isn't right. The same way you say you shouldn't be writing, I shouldn't be be tied up in emotions over lives of people in a show that don't even exist! Boy, do I need a life???/!!!!!!!

But as always...your writing is superb and I love to read your stuff...so definitely write...even though I agree the show needs some umph!!!!

If you have never loved, then begin now! If have loved, then love even more!

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

loved it to bits...this was so much different what i usually get to read on this forum...no wonder this is coming from you...felt really bad for arnav though...khushi's family paints a prety picture but what about our hottie??...continue soon...i wud love to know what happens next😊

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SStephy

@SStephy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Loved reading it !! So Khushi had moved on from Arnav...sad yet nice!!

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: reyabear
Awww that was so emotional and sad! Loved it!
Actually I love all of your OS's so I guess that's nothing new :P

Erm..finish your essay missy! :PP
(like I should be talking, I promised to update last night and haven't even written 5 paragraphs 🤣)

Btw, is this an SS? Yes? Okay! :D

Glad you liked it! I didn't think I got Arnav's reactions right but I figured his brain needs a bit of time to actually process and analyse the situation before he gets really angry.

I'm trying! And yes you need to go do some writing as well and you know what I want to read ;)

I like how you assume it's an SS without even waiting for me to reply :P