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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

Typing The LAST Scene!

Bear With Me Guys!



PLZ YAAR JALDI KARO TUMARE INTEZAR ME MENE ABI TAK KHANA NAHI KHAYA...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: misssmily



PLZ YAAR JALDI KARO TUMARE INTEZAR ME MENE ABI TAK KHANA NAHI KHAYA...😆


Soo Sorry Zubi!!!
Give Me 20 Minutes To Finish It Off!!!
Tu Jaake Khaana Khaa Ke Aa!!
I Haven't Had A Thing Since I Woke Up😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
DONE!!!!!!
Posting It NOW!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I've eaten Sadie u can post now ^^
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Posted: 13 years ago
RIGHT!!! Me Back Again To Bug You All!😆
First Of All
I Am Feeling Much Better Now😃
Secondly, This Thing's Been In My Head All This Time😆
There Was Some Award Nomination Going On Right And I, Felt Like Laughing That Day!!!!
OMFG!!!!! I Heard About FILM Nominations
NEVER Heard Of FF Nominations🤣
Okay! So I Knew!😆 But Never Mentioned It In My Work😆 BECAUSE!!
1) My Work Is Crap ANYWAYS!
2) Yes Yes My THEORY Is Different Here!🤣 I Feel Its A Way Of De-Motivating Writers🤣 Because ALL Of The Writers Are Good!
So Yeah Tit For Tat! I NEVER VOTED EITHER HUHUHUHAHAHAH!!!🤣🤣
Okay ENOUGH Of That!!
I ALREADY Have Enough Threats Around Me!!

So Here Is The NEXT Part Of Gangsta😳
Thank You Guys!! I Never Thought You Guys Were Soo Eager For My Childish Work😳

So Enough Of My Bak-Bak

Here Is The Next Part!

NOTE---My MAX Likes Is 10😆 So I'm Happy When I Get 11🤣
And Yeah! My Theory Is DIFF Again! 😆 I Will NOT Bug Or Demand Comments NOR Likes😛 Cuz Work Is Mine And Its My Responsibility To Continue With It. Cribbing And Complaining Makes You An Idiotic Person To Some Extent😆
So No Complains From Me Guys!😳

Ufff I NEVER Shut Up Do I?!!

BAS!!!

Here It Is!!!😳

Oh No No No WAIT!!!
AN IMPORTANT THING!!!
YOU GUYS WILL HAVE TO BEAR THIS THING!!!
See The First Update, That Dance Sequence, It was Supposed To Be REAL🤣
See Geet Was Supposed To Slap Someone In The FIRST Update🤣
See GURMEET Was Supposed To Be SOMEONE Else🤣
So You Guys Will Have To Bear This!!! Cuz My Story Is NOT What It Was SUPPOSED To Be!🤣
Oka I'll Shut Up Now😆


ONCE AGAIN!!! Don't Pick On My Handwriting!!!🤣

Part 3

Re-cap:

"Uhhmm.." Geet fumbled looking here and there.

"Oh! I forgot to introduce myself" Said the Man Extending his hand.

"Hi! I'm Gurmeet" he said, waiting for her reaction.


Now the Rest:

"Gurmeet" she whispered.

Moment later she heard him chuckle.

"That's me, won't you introduce yourself?" he said, moving his eyes towards his extended hand.

"Oh" she extended her shaky left hand. *I ALWAYS Do this 😆 I was a Lefty when I was a kid so my everyday job is with the left hand but I'm a Righty when it comes to writing. Soo many times I've extended my left hand and the person just looks and me and laughs 😆 😳*

"Oops" she quickly exchanged her hand to right and shook it with his.

The moment their skin came into contact, sparks dazzled her skin, giving her tingles behind her nape. 'Is he a Magician?' she thought as she shook hands. 'My hand is so small!! Babaji!!' she thought again, making a baby face.

His expressions changed to something Geet was yet unfamiliar with. His eyes were dark, he was scaring her.

"By the way do you wear eye contacts?" she blurted out. His expressions changed back as he chuckled slightly. She tried taking back her hand but he held it tighter. No matter how Frigin good looking he was, he was scaring her!

She jerked back her hand with all her strength.

"We shake hands then leave them also" she muttered. Suddenly he grabbed her hand and jerked her closer to himself.

"What's already mine cannot be let go of" she heard him say.

"WHAT?" she almost screamed, moving back. He smirked as he let her go.

"Obviously you're interested in me" he replied to her reaction, bold yes he was.

The next moment his entire boldness went to drain when he felt a slight tingle on his right cheek. HELL YEAH SHE SLAPPED HIM TIGHT!

"How Frigin dare you!" she shouted, rubbing her hand in pain. He tilted his head back to the previous position and stared down at her. He was seething.

"How dare you mister!!" she shouted.

He stayed silent but his eyes were enough to show damn angry and amused he was at her little act.

"Just Cuz I talked to you doesn't mean I like you!!" she shouted.

"Geet!! Kya Hua?!" She heard Meera say.

Meera walked up to her and held her arm.

"Geet what's all this?" Meera asked.

"Meers we're leaving Right NOW!!" Geet shouted.

"But but but but but" Ranted Meera, completely puzzled.

"Yeah but No But Move Your Butt!!!" Shouted Geet and dragged her towards the exit.

"And Yeah! We're taking our car back! Drop it in town I'll pay for it" Said Geet, looking back at him and dragged Meera out.

Although he hadn't said a word, his eyes showed nothing but anger and something else which she could not identify.

As soon as she disappeared, a faint smile crept on his lips.

Amusing Yet Deadly.


"The wheels on the bus go round and round!" Meera sang sarcastically.

"SHUT UP MEERA!" Geet shouted.

"WHY SHOULD I SHUT UP?!!" Meera screamed.

Geet placed her hand on top of her big mouth.

"Shut up Meers" Geet spoke through clenched teeth.

"Now for the next few weeks you're gonna be listening to the same song! The wheels on the bus go round and round Lalala" Meera Complained, looking the other way.

"Meera do you have any idea what had happened?! He Effing is a big shameless pervert!! He goes to me 'Oh you're interested in me I know!' And he even grabbed my hand! Now do you expect me to be still there at that Khatara Garage while he says THAT?" Geet said frustratingly.

"Oh Teri!! How dare he!!!" Meera shouted.

"And now I'm worried if he calls the Police and sends me to Jail" Geet made a Baby Face.

"No Look! Do you still want me to be there when he says that?! No Right! And Yeah FORGET That Yash Pash Tash! He must be the same!" Geet chided.

"Oye!! Don't drag him into this you monkey! Chal we'll get our Car back and we'll never go there again!' Meera said half-heartedly.

"YEAH!!" Geet replied and continued "Now SHUT Up and Enjoy the Double Decker Bus! Miles Better than your Khatara Mercedes!" *WOHOOO!!!!! FINALLY I KNOW ONE CAR NAME!!!!! Before It Was ONLY Gonna Be Colours 🤣!!! Sorry If Any Of You Drive LOL No Offense To Your Khata---To Your Cars 🤣*

"Oh My Days!! Geet Do you wanna Fight?!" Meera retorted, showing her hands as if she was about to punch someone.

"A Fight with You?" Geet asked.

"Haan!" Meera Replied, still in the same position.

"Meers…You love your Big Tweety right?" Geet asked, almost raising her brows.

"Geet!! Don't You DARE Do anything To My Tweety!" Meera Warned.

"We'll See.." Geet Replied.

'Huhuhahaha Tweety, Tu Toh Gaye Abh!!' Geet Thought, and Giggled.

"Geet You've already done enough damage to my Cutie! My Tweety Doesn't Have A Leg!!! You Kamini!" Meera Complained.

"How's It My Fault that I was playing with the scissors and Cut the Leg instead of the Tag" Laughed Geet.

"Shut Up! Meera Shouted.

"Make Me huhuhahaha!" Geet retorted.

"Gabbar Singh Ki Bachchi!" Meera Commented.

"Haaaww!!! Tu..Tuuu Mogambo Ki Maa!" Laughed Geet.

"Geet!"

"Meera!!"

And Both Laughed Together.

Even though Geet was being funny with Meera, Deep inside she was regretting the Slap she had gifted to Gurmeet or whatever he was called.

"The wheels on the bus go round and round, round and round, round and round" Both Sang, ignoring the glares they were receiving from left right centre.


He walked around in his cabin like a caged lion.

"You've invited yourself a lot of Trouble" He smirked and touched his heart.

"This place needs filling now" he murmured.

He picked up his phone and made a few calls.

"Trouble to you, blissful thing for me" he smirked.


"So! How was Meera Singh Chauhan's trip in the Red Double Decker Bus?!" Geet pretended to have a mike and walked out of the Bus.

"Geet! I Mean Miss.Reporter! First Of all! My name is NOT Meera Singh Chauhan! Its Meera Malhotra! And Yes! The Ride Was BAD!!! I Miss My Car!!" Meera Complained.

"Oh That Banger! Miss Meera I Must tell you, that Khatara Car must be scrapped!! Why has Babaji given us TWO Legs?! To walk!! Cars are for people who want to end the world pretty quickly!" Geet argued.

"OYE!!! Kamini Chup Kar!! What If you want to go somewhere far?!" Meera Retorted.

"WHAT IS PUBLIC TRANSPORT FOR?!! What Are Trains For?!! What Are Buses For?!! What Are Coaches For?!!! MONKEYS?! Or PEOPLE?!" Geet Retorted Back.

"FOR WACKOS LIKE YOU!!" Meera shouted, cursing her luck for having such an idiotic friend.

"Haaawww!!!!! I AM NOT A WACKO!!! You're just jealous I have brains!" Geet shouted.

"And You're Just Jealous because Others Can Drive while you go Knocking people off the street!" Meera Laughed.

"OYE!!! ONLY Once And That Was Just ALMOST!!" Geet defended herself.

By Now they were near to their apartment.

"Oh Teri!!! SHOPPING Toh Bhool Gayi In Your Khatara Car!!" Geet shouted.

"Uff Don't worry!! I don't think those workers would wanna see what we GIRLS Buy for ourselves" Meera said and both started giggling.

"But I am Damn sure that Shameless guy WILL!" Geet remembered him all over again and it made her blood boil.

"Calm Down Calm Down Geet! Forget Him Now!" Meera tried calming her.

"Lalalalalaaala!!" Geet sang trying to avoid screaming her lungs out.

Meera knows that whenever she gets angry, she starts singing loudly in order to take out her frustration.


"There has been a murder in the town centre, the murderers were clever enough to disguise themselves as the security guards and turn off all the CCTV Cameras. The murder took place in less than 5 minutes between the Turning on and Off the CCTV Cameras. We're still trying to find any sort of evidence to prove this was a murder and a gang of people did it all together…" The news was bombarded with the same news.

Meera and Geet forgot to blink, as they sat in front of the telly.

"Meers.." Geet said meekly.

"Haan..?" Replied Meera meekly.

They both looked at each other and

SCREAMED their lungs out.

"OH MY DAYS OH MY DAYS!!!!" Both Repeated.

"We're Doomed!!!!!" Geet shouted

"Did you hear that?!!! They suspect EVERYONE Who was in the parking lot!" Meera screamed.

"BUT MEERA!!!! The CCTV Cameras were off!!! And I think they came back when your Khatara Car Smashed into the Damned Pole!!!" Geet shouted.

"Oye!! Phirse Khatara!!!" Meera Complained

"Haan Ji!!! Now shut up and CALM DOWN!! Arghhh!!!!" Geet screamed

"YOU CALM DOWN MONKEY!!!" Meera Chided.

"No You!!" Screamed Geet.

"BABAJI!!!!!" both Screamed together, running eher and there.

DING DONG

Both Stopped moving.

"I think it's the …Police…" Geet squeaked.

Both looked at each other and screamed their Lungs Out!

"BABAJI!!!!" Both hid behind the sofa.

"Geet!

"Meera!"

"Babaji!!" Both Squeaked.


THERE!!!😃

NOW ME OFF TO UPDATE THE REST!!!🤣

AYIII MERI KAMAR!!!!!

Oh Oh Wait Lemme Explain.

Geet SLAPPED HIM!🤣 And That's All😆

Ignore The Errors!!😳

A Poem For Zee😳

All My Life I Needed That One Person
One Friend
One Human Being
Who Could Understand Me
A Wait Of Years
And A Pool Of Tears
Despite It All
I Finally Found You
But Happiness Doesn't Last For Long When I'm The Cause.
However May Life Be Cruel To Me
I Cannot Afford To Lose You.
If You're Reading This
You'll Actually Think I'm A Fool
But What Else Can I Do?
Poems, Words Is The Only Way I Can Merely Explain
You're Not Here But Yet You're Here
I Haven't Seen You But Yet I've Seen You.
I Know I'm Crazy
I Know I'm Emotional
But New Found Happiness Can Make You Do More..
This Is Merely My Time pass For Now As I Have Nothing Better To Do Than Sit And Day Dream!
Kidding!!
Life Has Taught Me Things I Never Wanted To Learn.
Friends Were Never The People Whom I could share My Pain
Years Of Experience made me Lose faith in something called Friendship.
But Today
After A Long Long Long Time
I Feel As Though
Friends Which I was Looking For
Were HERE
And I was Looking Foolishly THERE.
Thank You For Being My Friend.
A REAL Friend..
Forgive Me If I Am Not Being Reasonable
My Hearts Cries Yet I CANNOT Show It
Forgive Me For Being A Pain
My Own Pain Makes Me A Pain For Others.
And Again
THANK YOU For Being There And I Hope I Have You As A Friend...
All My Life.

NOT Very Poetic😆
Sadiie x

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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeah yeah yeah me FIRST !!!!

Ok let me explain ^^ :

I was refreshing the page each min... and when i saw that the scrolling bar on the right was smaller than before, i didn't even see the updt propoerly and jumped to post the comment !!! 🤣

So first thanx yaar not to ask for xx likes and comments... and for taking seriously your HUGE responsability as a writer ( yeah... it is indeed a huge responsability, because hysterical people like me needs there quota of ff updts, otherwise unka BP low hojata hai 🤣 )


Now comming to the updt : I loved it !!! Keep it up with meera and geet "kuti kamini" fight am lovinf it ! they are sooo funny ! 😆

OMG geet slapped maan ?! SHE IS...DEAD !


AND of course : EARGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART 😆

Thanx for entertaining us sweety Sadiie
😆




Edited by misssmily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nahi im second. . .stupid spamming thing!!!grr

res

----editted:

yaar r u planning to turn this into another Comedy FF 🤣

meera and Geet are hilarious 😆

The wheels on the bus go round and round . . .round and round 🤣🤣

and oyeee do u know what a MERCEDEZ is?????

it's not a shitty car unless u have one from like 30 years ago 🤣

and in ur FF. . .it sounds like Meera's car isn't that top notch. . .but a Mercedez is 😆

anywayz .. .Geet slapped him!!! woahhh 😲😲

yup she is in for it

plz i want more geet-gurmeet scenes 😳

awesome job. can't wait for the next one 😳

haila u posted the poem!!

awhhh sending ya a *tight hug*

luv ya! muahhh!
Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hehehe...
me laughing lyk mad...

wat an update...
awesum grl...

poor guru...
jhapad pada use lol...
stupid phr b has ra hai...🤣🤣


geet bechari marne k baad
dar rahi hai...

who is on d door????
aila police
or
kaun???😆😆



Edited by khushi1022 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt sadiie!
hilarious!
omg this gurmeet guy is so chipkoo n demanding yaar!
already saying mine without asking!
haila she slapped him lol !!!
he is scaring me too with his phone calls lol;););)
ha ha again meera n geet fight over her khatara i mean car!!!!!!!!
omg whos there on the door now! gurMEEt?
loved the public transport thing! lol!
cont soon!
u rocked it!
thnx 4 d pm!
no dhamkis this time! i am very much threatened myself to give an update on my ss lol!
but why yaar such a cliffhanger!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update she slapped him seriously that was funny and the wheels in the bud goes round and round loved it geet threatening to cut up meera tweety loved it thanks for the pm

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