[Maan&Geet]FanFic ||*Gangsta||* Thread #1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Me Back Again!😆 For Those Who Don't Know Me, HI I'm Sadiie😛 Well My Name's ...Something😆 But I Prefer Sadiie😛 So You Call Me Sadiie😆
Okay This Is On My Maaneet😍

I Still Need A Title Between :

I Hate You!...But I Love You

Or

Gangsta

*Mind You, This Isn't A Typing mistake! When I Was In Year 8, My Teacher Told Me That The CORRECT Spelling Is Gangsta NOT Gangster And It's Stuck With Me Ever Since,DON'T Bully Me! I Just Remembered That Thing My Teacher Said And I Don't CARE if it's Wrong!😆 Plus It Sounds More Street Like... Yo Bruv!😆*

You Guys Choose Which One Sounds Better, I Have Two Plots For BOTH Titles Any ways 🤣

This Is Like, Another Version Of DON BUT! I COMPLETELY Changed The Plot...Well At least When Initially I Had Thought Of This, It Wasn't Even Closer To Don😆 But I Think It Does Sound Like Those Gangsta Films So Yeah Another Don Version.

Okay The Character Sketch...I Will Post Later On. For Now Here's The

Prologue/Introduction

She sat on the bed hugging her knees.Tears Trickled down as she buried her head in between her knees. What a fool she was to fall for his tricks. She was hurt.
The door clicked open and he entered. She brought her knees even closer to herself without lifting her head up, she knew.
"Go Away" she mumbled, her head still dipped down.
He simply Chuckled as he sat down on the bed.
"I'm not here to leave Jaan" his deep voice near her left ear sent shivers down her spine.
"You cheated me!" She said, her voice muffled.
"I Simply played myself" was his reply, as he inched closer towards her.
"Yeah Right...Murderer" she mumbled the last bit, but he heard it too.

Next moment she was flat on her back with him on top of her. If looks could kill, She would be in ashes by now. She struggled to get out of his iron grip but Damn he had her pinned down too hard.
"I told you, all your accusations mean nothing to me" he seethed, his face mere inches away from hers. She turned her face away in disgust as she spoke.
"One accusation will haunt you Mr.Maan Singh Khurana, and That is, You KILLED an Innocent Girl Called GEET SHERGILL"
"Tut Tut Tut...Geet! You're Right here Silly! So That Makes me NOT GUILTY" He spoke playfully.
She looked at him with sheer hatred. Oh How she hated this man. Hate wasn't the right word, she Loathed this man.
Unknowingly, a tear escaped her eye as she looked at him with painful eyes. "Why did you do this to me?" she asked, more tears escaped from her eyes.
"You Made me.." he whispered Huskily before getting up, leaving a broken yet angry Geet.

Geet turned around to face the pillow as she sobbed into it.
"Why?!!" She sobbed.
"I Loved You Guru" she whispered before dozing off.

*Biting Nails*
How Was It?😳 Come On Guys I'm Hell Confused On The Title! 😆 But Like I Said The Titles Themselves Give me Two Different Plots...But Still I Need Help!

And Yeah Should I Continue?😳

Sadiie


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited :

So concerning the title : for me it will b Gangsta ! 😳
And totally believe you when u say its gangsta and not gangster ! 😉
It suits the maan u portrayed !
I have a soft corner for bad boys, gangsters and dons 😆


So here is my piece of mind : well nice beginning, seems like maan broke geet's trust, the question is how and why ? does he love her ?, from the intro we can't tell that but we can assume that he is possessive abt her, is he some kind of don that used her for his purpose ? So many questions...😆 me eager to know how ths story will proegress ! 😊


I had one question : why geet shergill not handa ??? does it have a purpose or bus ainve hi ? 😆
and
One request ^^ : can u write a bit bigger plz 😳 it will be more easy to read ( not that am blind 😆 )

😳Me waiting for the next updt !

Edited by misssmily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting add me in u r pm list ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow 6 Likes And 2 Comments Not Bad Sadiie 😆
Challo Lemme Reply To Them😆😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: misssmily

Edited :

So concerning the title : for me it will b Gangsta ! 😳
And totally believe you when u say its gangsta and not gangster ! 😉
It suits the maan u portrayed !
I have a soft corner for bad boys, gangsters and dons 😆


So here is my piece of mind : well nice beginning, seems like maan broke geet's trust, the question is how and why ? does he love her ?, from the intro we can't tell that but we can assume that he is possessive abt her, is he some kind of don that used her for his purpose ? So many questions...😆 me eager to know how ths story will proegress ! 😊


I had one question : why geet shergill not handa ??? does it have a purpose or bus ainve hi ? 😆
and
One request ^^ : can u write a bit bigger plz 😳 it will be more easy to read ( not that am blind 😆 )

😳Me waiting for the next updt !


Haaayee Gangsta It Is!
High Five! I Also Have A Soft Corner For Bad Boys And The Rest😉😆
Hmm...Well...Those Questions I Can Answer Through My Story😆

Oh Teri! Yeh Maine Socha Hi Nai! I Thought No-One Would Notice!😆 Hmm Most Of The Time I Try To Change Her Surname In My Stories😆 Cuz HANDA...Doesn't CONNECT With Geet🤣 I'm Talking Monkeys!! Bas Ainvey Hi Likh Diya😳
Awwhhh! Okay Size One Chalega? Aur Should I Make It Bigger?
And...Updates Will Be Coming Soon...I Have A Bad History With Updates😆

Sadiie x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: payalpari

interesting add me in u r pm list ...


Thank You😳
Will Doo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Glad It Is😆
And Oh Accepted The Buddy Request You Sent
xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sent You A Buddy Request Do Accept😛
And Yeah Updating Soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiee sadiee
sounds interseting
tilte is nice
add me in
cont soon
luv you🤗

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Originally posted by: meena..

hiee sadiee
sounds interseting
tilte is nice
add me in
cont soon
luv you🤗


Heyy🤗
Thank You Meena😳
😆 Earlier I Was CONFUSED With The Title😆
Challo Will Update Soon..Tujhe Toh Meri Updating Ki History Pata Hai Na😆
Updating This Weekend I Guess😳
Luv You Too!🤗

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