CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 13

Singh family was having breakfast at the dining table. Mrs singh,manoj,seema were sitted on the dining table. Piyu looks tired due to lack of sleep.Mrs singh is worried about her and affectionately asks her "piyu if u r not well ,stay home today ". "No granny as annual function is in mid july so we have lots practice to do for the play and u know how much I love school". Mrs singh enquires abt veer. Seema replies that he must have been to the ranch. "Today , its his first day as M.D and he went to ranch without informing anyone" manoj said with dejection. Ananya comes in the room ,she quietly approaches the table and gently wishes "good morning to everyone". Mrs singh welcomes her ,makes her sit. Piyu seems displeased and leaves the table making excuse she has to get ready for school, seema goes after her.Ananya asks timidly. "where is veer?".mrs singh n manoj seems tense.Manoj replies "he left early morning , he had some errands to run".Ananya felt crestfallen as veer left without informing her. Mrs singh "don't be dishearten beta , he wil be back in the evening , u have u r breakfast" she signals the servants to serve her. Manoj excuses himself. Mrs singh hands over glass of milk. Suddenly the butler comes in informing mrs singh that there is call for her, so she tells ananya to eat as she had to go and she leaves. Ananya is all alone at the breakfast table she reluctany drinks the milk n leaves.

At the ranch

Veer is tying the horse in the stable manoj comes in

manoj - wat r doing here early in the morning

Veer - I just needed some time for myself

manoj - but u must have informed someone

Veer - is this the first time I m coming without informing

manoj- no but now u r married u have some responsibilities towards u r wife

Veer - wat does she expects breakfast in bed!

manoj - no but atleast u shud have informed her. She needs u ,if not as a hubby or as a friend or if not friend treat her as business associate or client . So we take care of our business associates with concern n respect and we communicate with them .So pls from now don't be so indifferent towards her.Now get ready its ur first day as M.D OF KHURRANA INDUSTRIES so u r not suppose to b late.

At khuranna bungalow

Stepmom was leaving for the office.shasha intrudes her

Shasha- where r u going mom

S m- to the office. Today is gonna be the board meeting for selecting new m.d

Shasha- but mom certainly veer's gonna b unanimously voted as m.d he is the caretaker of almost 90% of shares

S m- shasha don't u think I know this but I gave so many years to this company I may talk people out to not vote for him. Anyways if this won't happen I m regularly gonna attend the office as u know keep u r friends close and enemies closer (she gave an evil smirk and left)

Here in the office veer was certainly voted out to be M.D by majority of votes.Stepmom didn't react certainly in front of everyone but high anxiety and irritability within her was erupting she tried to keep her feelings down by trying to control herself due to the the environment and the people around her but then she excused herself n stomped into her cabin , bolted it and finally the volcano erupted, the lava of her anger was flowing and the entire cabin was turned upside down. The files which were on the desk moments ago were lying on the floor the desk, broken pieces of vase on the floor etc in short he view of the cabin was not different from the earthquake affected area. Finally draining her anger out she realized was she has done.She calmed herself down and picked her cell and dialed a number, "Hello its me I have job for u now listen carefully'.."

Part-14





Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx...🤗... so m,uch for the ud...❤️

i really waited for this...😳

thanx so much.
ananya hs her breakfast all alone,😭 though nyone didn't wanted to hurt her directly, but though unknowingly she was alone😭,...anu don't feel bad...😃...i hav break fast with u...😉.

anu drink milk, ⭐️even i drink, GOOD HABIT...👏...

well it feels so gr88 to imagine rt while horse riding,...

veer she don't need breakfast on bed, she simply needs ur concern.

s.m shasha, r really gr888...BAAZ NAHI AAYENGI YEH DONO DANAV.😡

again thnx so much for the ud...😊...

love u pranita di...🤗...(correct spelling na di_)


Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 4 updating inspite of being busy dear🤗...

it was nice...i hope veer will try to behave friendly with her atleast😊...

poor anu...feeling bad for her...she is still lonely😭...

i also want to see piyu bonding well with ananya but it seems it will take time...

but now what that SM is planning?😡...oh no...plz no more problems for anu...she has suffered a lot...

eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
everyone left anu alone at breakfast table...poor girl...n piyu...at least try to know her...don't avoid her...😭
n veer manoj is absolutely right atleast u should tell her that where are u going...u should take care of her n her feelings at least as a bussiness associate...
n veer md of khurana industries...😊
n what this step mom is planning...😡...poor anu now how much she has to suffer...😭
update soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part 👏
veer should inform her
poor anu 😭
upadate soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all a big hug from my side for update after so many days
just awesum update,loved it
poor anu,she is still alone,no one loves her,but don't worry swthrt i love u vry much
this s.m and shasha are so wicked,i kill them one day
oh!veer is now md great yr
can't wait for next part,if u r nt busy then plsss update soon,
if ur busy then its ok
i'll wait 4 nxt part
thanks 4 pm
thanks 4 a cute update
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ud...
was waiting for this since long time...
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow !! pranita...it really feels good to read this ff after a while🤗
thnx for the update dear😊...
it was short but you covered almost every character...⭐️
my poor anu...having breakfast all alone😭...i don't mind piyu leaving as she's just a kid and need sometime to accept her new mom...but others too...and the very thing that has upset her the most is veer leaving without informing her
don't worry dear...u'll become the apple of their eyes one day👍🏼...
and now veer and horse riding😍 haila...purani yaaden taaza ho gayi...😊
the evil trio is really incorrigible🤢...
but veer is the MD now😃...
and what's this sm is planning now😕?...umm...she can't harm anu till veer is with her and she knows it well...so whom will she target anu or veer😕??..yeh kya naya cliffhanger de diya😛???
me waiting for sunday😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so much for updating even in ur busy schedule
thanks to sweetsanyo too to getting update
loved this update even its short
feel sad for ananya have to do breakfast all alone!!
i knew piyu will take time to accept her but other can!!
thank god manoj atleast understand this ananya needs veer
veer ananya want love n little caring not breafast in bed!!
hope u will realise this some day!!
wow now veer is MD of khurana industries!!
but wht will stepmom's valcano going to destroy?
m fearing she will target veer as anu she can handle easiliy😲
waiting for next update
give it to ur convenience
but will egar for it n loved to read it😍


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey pranita
😊
i read all the uds at a go⭐️... i loved it...its really like a fairytale...
poor anu feeling very bad for her😭...i m excited to see how veer will fall for anu...egar to no how piyu will consider anu as her mom...
awesome ud...
luv u

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