CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202


so so romantic scene i have already written
now i m writing remaining update
so so romantic scene not something huge so don't get u r heart racing😆


koi baat nhi.

even a small convo b/w them will make ma heart race...

coz i m big fan of ur ff...and specially this veer n ananya.


by the way , i m getting ud today...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago


try try but never cry...
main aapka confiedence badha rahi hoon, taki aap aaj hi ud dedo, HW SELFISH...😎
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo



try try but never cry...
main aapka confiedence badha rahi hoon, taki aap aaj hi ud dedo, HW SELFISH...😎


VEER KI MDGIRI and cupid's entry ka update chalega . but no annaya. if yess will update immediately or else wait for 1 or 2 days
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202


VEER KI MDGIRI and cupid's entry ka update chalega . but no annaya. if yess will update immediately or else wait for 1 or 2 days



chalega, chalega...

daudega...

bt dis is last time di,
varna each ud shud hav ma princess ananya...

abhi tho aap ud dedo...

no probs.

i still love cindy n u too
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 14


The cabin provided was exclusive afterall he was the MD of the company .The Cabin was fabricated using high grade material. It had all the features requisite for a managing director to keep an eye from his location. Transparent and translucent mirrors were used to make the cabin attractive and useful. It certainly matched the range for MD level professionals & was made from the finest quality raw material using wood as well as glass to offer it a very refined and exclusive sophisticated professional look overall.

By pranita1202 at 2012-03-03

By pranita1202 at 2012-03-03


Veer was standing at the window, impassively looking down through the glass

. He was looking really handsome , well groomed with the modern and minimalist formal apparel. The white shirt with slim plackets paired with black waist coats along with narrow tie really complimented him .The decent gelled up hair instead of loose strands really made him look as a typical business tycoon. But he seemed tired; the kind of fatigue that can't be cured by a night's sleep.

Across the desk mr gupta was sitting along with the other men in dark suits and power ties

Mr mehra ,the investment banker along with his collegues& akash veer's financial researcher.On the desk there were stacks of documents and folders, the named "KHURRNA INDUSTRIES" is prominent on many of the folders.

INVESTMENT BANKER (mr mehra) :

Our banks certainly doesn't want to discourage khurranna industries by refusing the loan .but the amount you are asking for the project is quite large .and with a new Md appointed we are not convince in discharging such a surplus amount of capital.

Mr gupta

(losing patience)

There's

no risk for you. No one has ever

lost money backing khurrana industries.

INVESTMENT BANKER 2

Not yet. But construction industry is a new endeavor for you...besides we have to take into account market conditions with the upswing in inflation & recession

akash

(cuts him off)

Come on. You know we're not

Building castles in air .this is a very profitable project

Besides, you're the ones with the

troubled track record, not us!

INVESTMENT BANKER 3

gupta, be reasonable. your project has to be initiated early 200 crores is not a bad deal

Besides, I don't think there's

anywhere else you can go for the

money in the time you have.

Veer

It's unacceptable.

Veer turned from the window. He haven't missed a thing. All

eyes were set on him.

Veer

HDC FIRM has offered me 600 crores. With 300 crore's transaction in straight liquid in a span of a week or two . You have until tomorrow morning to make me a better offer.

The bankers speechlessly stared at him.

Veer

The meeting is over, gentlemen.

He turned away. The bankers looked at one another. They rose.

Silence prevailed as they exit. When the door closed. Mr gupta exploded

with laughter.

gupta

Hah! Did you see the look on

their faces?

Akash

You don't think we pushed too

hard?

gupta

NO way! They'll come back. They

can't afford not to. veer

that bluff was beautiful.

Veer least interested in his words of praise


Manoj was seated in his cabin engrossed in paper work and having phone conversation. There was a knock on the door , since he was busy so he gave the que to come in without looking who is at the door.The person stomped in and sat on the chair. The noise disturbed manoj he gazed up "who the hell is '..".he kept mum after watching who the person was. There was a handsome well dressed man in black seated in front of him

Vikrant Massey



Manoj- Vicky when u arrived from London? Shud have called ,would have send a car to the airport.

Vicky-( in stern manner)first u tell me wat have done with my best friend in my absence. Manoj- calm down n listen 2 me

Vicky- wat calm down bro ?. who the heck veer is been married to? How the hell he agreed to be married in such a short notice. If I haven't called piyu . u all won't even have the courtesy to inform me!

Manoj tried to put off his fuming anger rather than anger it was love n caress for his best friend since school times;he was senior to veer so he was a bit protective towards him.but manoj manage to get him listen the situation and explained it to him.

There prevailed a silence in the room Vicky knew how veer must have felt doing this,

Vicky- so the girl is she any good

Manoj- I told u she is suffering from illness

Vicky- I didn't mean by that. I m saying does she love him

Manoj- how can I say this . everything happened in a hurry. But she is kind hearted girl.she is trying to gel up with us. But piyu is cold towards her n veer u know how he is.

Vicky- he has locked his heart n thrown away the key. '

Cheering up the scenario the spoke "bro now take it EASY main aa gaya hun. So I m gonna fix situation. So wats these file mess saare saal ka kaam aaj hi karma hai(r u planning to finish the annual work in oneday)".manoj replied, "not annual work these are foreclosure details of the mortgage"he continued "first going to clear the debts on ranch & bunglow and beach house at silvasa alongwith the singh mansion as both these properties are very dear to veer". He stood up from his chair, "lets leave , u must be eager to meet everyone. I have to take ananya's sign on these agreement as she is the owner". Vicky said, "com'on bro send someone , lets all 3 (both n veer) of us have lunch together and catch up". Manoj retorted, "these papers r confidential so someone authorized should go" Vicky smirked, "someone authorized' " "then who can be more auhorized then mananging director of the company itself" he suggested sheepishly. Manoj was smart to know wat was going in his mind afterall Vicky was no different then veer to him.Manoj with fake tone of appreciation to his suggestion, "u r absolutely right who can be more authorized than veer. So lets inform our busy md about his duties". They smirked at eachother and proceeded towards veer's cabin


Promo




PLS do hit like if u like the update

do give u r feedback


Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
VEER IS SOOPER intelligent...

wat a streak mind he is...

awesome...sooper condensed natured he is...icy.

loved his attitude...
(similar attitude i show wen i play hockey)

VICKY, i noe u r d man who is gonna bring ananya princess n veer closer...

this was seriously d most awaited entry...

man u made the ud just go through sky.
amazing ...

language ki kya tafeer karen

hum aap par fida hai...
shaan aapki ekdum juda h...
aapko dewane hum sada h...
khatilana aapki jaba h...


(hey yeh shairi , maine just abhi abhi original likhi h, ekdum authentic, just abhi garan garum parosi hai...)i noe itni acchi nhi hai...

beginner ke liye thiik h...

VICKY KA PIC WS AWESOME...

LOVED HIS ENTRY...

love u...


ab ek veenya ud dedena ... 1- 2 days main...plzz...

coz tab tak main tumhari jaan kha jaongi...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear...😊
veer is just 23 and now the new MD😳...
veer gave a good bluff😆...he has the smart brain for business indeed😛...
beauty with brain😆...u already corrected my sleeping beauty comment prani😆...and i guess u'll invent a new term for this too...coz beauty is brain is a girly term also😆...
jab bhi RT ki tarif karne jati hoon aise terms hi mujhe yaad ate hain.....woh hai hi itna delicately handsome...😳
but why is he so tired...his life is going through a rough patch though...
vicky is the new entry😃...vikrant's pic is fab⭐️...
now he'll play the cupid here...😳 i'm sure he will like anu as he asked manoj if she loves veer or not...but was not interested in physical appearance...⭐️
waiting for some positive veer-anu moment...😳
plz update soon dear...😊
Edited by prahelika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


YEH BATAO DI...😆hasne ki kya jarurat h????
aaj maine aapko do teen acche acche joke kya bata diye, aap tho meri deewani hi ho gaye ho...

well kya kare, mera spark hi kuch aisa h😎
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one dear🤗...

veer is just too good😉...

i am happy due to the entry of vicky 'the cupid'😊...so now we will be getting more veer-anu cute scenes😳...

hope he will also help in anu-piyu bonding😊...

well i am missing my princess ananya in this ud😭...but that's ok...eagerly waiting for next part to see cupidgiri of vicky😍...

@sweetsanyo - is the name decided as "VeerAnya"?...i was thinking of "VeeNya" or "AnVeer" or "AnVee"...don't mind buddy🤗...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

nice one dear🤗...

veer is just too good😉...

i am happy due to the entry of vicky 'the cupid'😊...so now we will be getting more veer-anu cute scenes😳...

hope he will also help in anu-piyu bonding😊...

well i am missing my princess ananya in this ud😭...but that's ok...eagerly waiting for next part to see cupidgiri of vicky😍...

@sweetsanyo - is the name decided as "VeerAnya"?...i was thinking of "VeeNya" or "AnVeer" or "AnVee"...don't mind buddy🤗...



veenya is good,

better,...
i like it...

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