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CHAPTER- 11

recap: entry of robert , robert accussed rey for plucking flowers


new entry:miss maria (rey's nurse)
lovely n love interest of martin




"WHY NOT"...came a voice all looked at the voice direction...

miss maria was standing in front of them with her one hand on hips n second holding a medical kit.

"hey sexy!!" rey said while greeting maria

" hey handsome...!!" martin answered playfully

this was their way to greet each other.

"sweet heart ...sexy ughh!!" martin thought in mind

" hello maria!!" swayam said politely

"hello swayam...!!" maria responded

maria looked at kriya and sharon n at swayam questioning who r they...

"oh they are..." martin chirped

but b4 martin could say anything..

"did i asked u??" maria raised her eyebrows

" no, i was just trying to..." martin said

"what?? trying to act smart??" maria retorted

"no..." martin tried to answered

"no??" maria raised her eyebrows

"no i mean..."

just then sharon chirped in between..

" he means , he was just trying to help u.. hi am..."

"sharon n u r kria right..???" maria asked extending her hand

" but how do u know???" krisha said shaking their hand one by one

" by seeing ur sweet smile n the way u chirped in between...hi am..." maria said to both of them while pointing out

"miss maria..." sharon started

" how do u know...??" kriya completed sharon's sentence

" oh we heard a lot about u from martin,he often talks about u n seems to like u a lot." kriya said

at this maria blushed a little which didnt go unnoticed by kriya and sharon..

all this while reyamar(reyam+martin) were looking at krisha with astonishment as they were talking with miss maria as if they knew her from a long time ago...

" come rey its ur check up time.." maria said to rey

they all headed towards living room to sit...
she checked rey's blood pressure n said its normal.

"maria can u give me sleeping pills ,my pills are over..." rey asked
" rey why cant u stop eating those pills..??" maria asked

" no maria ,without them i cant sleep.."

"but u shouldnt take those pills in large quantity ok??"

"ok i'll take care of n thanks.." rey frowned

maria stood up to go but sharon spoke " ummm ... maria is this BP machine??"

" yup sharon.."
" why dont u check BP of swayam ?? i am 100% sure his BP would be high as he is very khadoos..." sharon suggested

at this time swayam raised his eyebrows and said" BP toh high hoga hi na tumhe jo jhelna padta hai"

" what do u mean ??" sharon cocked her eyebrowes

" i mean u r so irritating n annoyed that whenever i see u , my BP always raises high..." swayam answered cockily

rey in swayam's ears "yeh kyun nahi kehta BP nahi heartbeat rise ho jaati hai"
swayam glared at rey

"how dare u?? u know what tumse jyaada khadoos insaan toh maine duniya mein nahi dekha...maria aap mera BP check kijiye... Is khadoos ke saath rehkar.. i am sure mujhe BP problem ho gayi hogi..." sharon gritted her teeth

" but..." swayam intervened

" shut up both of u..." kriya said annoyed

"ahaan!! "encyclopedia" boli...i was wondering yeh "encyclopedia" abhi tak boli kyu nahi" rey teased
" tum...tumne mujhe abhi kya bulaya...???" kria

"sunayi nahi diya kya?? encyclopedia??? E-N-C-Y-C-L-O-P-E-D-I-A"...humesha sabko knowledge deti rehti ho.." rey taunted

"tum tum toh rehne hi do...kuch kaam toh karte nahi ho bas flirting karwa lo jitni karwani ho..." kria retorted

"tum toh bahut kaam karti ho na ..." rey taunted again

maria was staring all 4 of them who were fighting like small kids,a unknown smile crept on her lips ...she had known reyam from a long time,she knew what they have gone through n whats their problem in life.she had never seen them happier before...although they r fighting now but she can sense a calmness in their eyes...

"swayam - a workalcoholic ,
sharon- a fun loving gal ,
rey- a tension free n carefree guy ,
kria- a statue of calmness n seriousness"

they are perfect for each other .it seems they are fitted in each others life as if two zigzaws which can fill empty spaces, with this thought she uttered "perfect"

which went almost unaudible to all the four...but all this while martin was constantly staring at her n drooling over her. he was not on earth..he was on "maria-land".

while all the four were arguing with each other , martin came towards her n said "will u be my date tonight??"

as soon as he uttered those words...all the 4 stopped in their mid- argument and stared at maria...waiting 4 her answer..

she felt nervous on their their stare n looked in martins eyes and said 'DATE?? I...I DON'T KNOW...I" sensing that she will disagree.. she was cut by kria..

"oh he is just joking maria ..actually we 4 r having meetings today n will not be able to dine with him...he just wanted a company for dinner as he hates having his dinner alone n offcourse we all can see that u r a very good company to dine with him..."

all were amused by kria's talk n looked at her with "awe"...they always knew sharon talks a lot but kria?? no way?? they never thought before that she can give such a good reason n a perfect one to convince maria..no one could say "no" to this reason..

at this maria also agreed n said a "YES"

at this martin fainted and about to fall but reyam caught him in between the fall...

"omg what happened to him??" maria almost shouted

"he is alright dont worry " swayam gave a assuring look...

maria bid a good bye to all n went away...

reyam made martin to lie on the sofa who was still unconcious n tried to wake him up..

sharon came n gave a glass to swayam "here take this"

" oh thank u so much n with that he gulped the whole water..."

all the three looked at him with "WTH" look

"what??"

"u idiot it was 4 martin ..to wake him up..." sharon taunted

"oops sorry" swayam scratched his head

kria went in the kitchen n came back with water "here" . rey took the glass n threw the water on martin 's face in one go...

he stood up "mummy mummy...who the hell threw cold water on me...??"

all three pointed to rey

martin held his collar "u jerk"

"water kria leke aayi thi..." rey answered

martin looked at kria with anger...

"swayam normal pani pi gaya tha na isliye..."

"wo mujhe pyaas lagi thi n sharon ek hi glass leke aayi thi..." martin now looked at sharon

"now what should i say?? no one is left!!" sharon trembled

she suddenly spoke "oh martin come on now, dont u have to get ready 4 ur date??"

"oh yes!! i have to go ..but what should i wear what should i gift her?? what should i do...??" martin panicked

all saw him moving to n fro in nervousness..

"dont worry marts i am coming with u for shopping..." sharon offered

" how could u do that ?? who will come to office..." swayam asked

" oh shutup even u r coming with us as i dont know what martin likes..." sharon said

" ok u trio go to the mall n i'll go to the office.." rey said leaving

all were shocked n looked at him

" aise mujhe kya dekh rahe ho ??waise bhi kissi ne mujhse kaha hai ki mai koi kaam nahi karta.." rey said sternly looking at kriya

all looked at kria

" u girl ..reach office in fifteen minutes... tumhe bahot shauk hai na kaam karne ka..wait n see.." rey said and stomped to his room..

all looked at kria n kria looked at them in shock...

" u dont know rey, sometimes he gets very cranky " swayam said

" dont know what will be the consequenses of his cranky behaviour this time..." martin muttered

" dont worry i know u'll handle him.." sharon assured her patting kriya's shoulder

they all looked at kria n saw their talks were not reassuring her ...

"want to know what u should do know??" martin asked

kria just nodded

" RUN" all said in unison

kria ran to get a cab n reached the office n greeted pinky...

"phew!! pahunch gayi...ab tak toh reyansh bhi nahi pahuncha hoga phir bhi ek baar check kar leti hu"
she knocked at rey's cabin..

"come in" rey said without looking at her...

" good morning sir"

" miss ghai u r 2 seconds late.."

" as if he doesnt know anything.." kriya muttered

this was very unusual of rey he would call her either "miss beautiful " or "kria"

"sorry sir...wo..."
before she could explain he cut her in between

"miss ghai here is the list of all my gf's contact n address ..u have to call them n fix meeting with them at different time n as valentine day is nearing ..just send a beautiful flower at their address...do u get it??" rey said in stern voice

kria just nodded

" now get back to work..."

kria came out of the cabin n muttered "WTH all the way i came running to dis work this??ughh...to call all the dumb gals!!!us reyansh ke bache ko aisa maza chakhaungi ki aage se mujhe koi list hi nahi dega"

when she saw the list she fumed with anger , it contained names n address of 20 girls...

she glared at the list n started calling one by one...some of the gals even abused her saying "dont ever call here agai" n after done all the calling..

she muttered "mr reyansh singhania u'll pay for this..."


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swaron n martin was in a huge mall, selecting shirts n jeans for martin...martin n sharon were headiding while swayam was full with holdings bags of clothes...

"both of u , isnt ur shopping done yet...??" swayam said feeling tired

"swayam just one more min..." sharon said dragging martin

" 1 min more ??oh hello !! its me am the one who is holding these bag n roaming like a fool for last 3 hrs n u both r not yet completed??" swayam glared at them

"swayam just shutup !! just follow what sharon baby says..." martin sided sharon

sharon chuckled while swayam frowned...

martin looked at the watch n screamed "HEY BHAGWAAN" all the people in the mall looked at him...he was embarrassed n just smiled guilty...

" what happened??" sharon asked in concern

" its 6:30 n i have to go 4 a date as i have to reach there by 7pm..."

"dont worry here take this clothes n u go we will shop 4 u..."

" thanks sharon baby..."


"why will we shop wen he will not be here??...we can also go home." swayam reasoned

" do u want to come here other day also??" sharon asked

" no... never..."

" then just shut up n follow me..."

" ok as u say..." swayam frowned

"marts, while going just buy some fresh red flowers with u n give this ring to maria..."

" but when did u bought it ??"

" when u were busy scolding swayam..." sharon giggled

they laughed while looking at swayam...

" thanks sharon baby u r the best..."

" i know.."

" n u swayam , u never helped me in shopping n atleast take care of sharon baby she really worked hard today, take her home carefully...do u get it...??" martin said pointing out to swayam

" "worked hard" my foot here i am who is holding these bags n she is just dragging me anywhere she want n she is the one working hard..urghhh!!" swayam muttered

"bye sharon baby n swayam"

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rey reached the pub where he was to meet his gf's ..he was sitting alone but one girl came to him n said...

g1 : hey rey baby...how r u ?? its long time no we dated..

rey stood up n greeted n hugged her "yeah i missed u too" they broke the hug n about to sit but another girl came n flung her arms on him "hey baby missed u so much"

g1: who the hell r u ??

g2: who r u??

g3: hey rey...

all 20 girls started showing up in no time...
all were staring at eachother as if they would kill each other by looking itself..

g1: rey loves me more..

g2: no way rey is mine..

g3: u all r just time pass..

g4: he send me the most beautiful gift today...

all looked at her..

g5: what??

g4: he sent me a "cactus" with a beautiful flower on it...it lookedso pretty n with a not on it...with the msg that states " u r just ..."

g6: like this...

g7: beautiful flower...

g8: which...

g9: grew...

g10: in

g11: between...

g12: many...

g13: thrones...

g14: just

g15: like...

g16: a ..

g17: dew ...

g18: on ...

g19:a...

g20: leaf ...

" love yours n only yours "rey" " all said in unison

all looked at eachother n looked at rey ...but rey was nowhere to be seen ...he was hiding behind a wall n listening there talks..

he understood it was all kria's deed...he drove back to home...n muttered "kria I'll not leave u"

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"chale..???"

"yeah... after u ..."swayam gestured her to lead

she almost dragged him every where ... not even single shop was left...

at last swayam gave up ...

"sharon plz i cant walk now ..." he panted

sharon took pity on him by seeing his tired face n puppy eyes...
" ok come we'll take lift..."

they entered the lift...the lift came down one floor where it was emptied by the people in it...only swaron were left in it...
as the lift door closed it came to halt n lights too went off...

"crap bas yehi hona baaki tha..." swayam muttered

"dont worry emergency lights will switch on in sometimes.." sharon assured

just then emergency lights were on..

"tumhe baaki ladkiyo ki tarah andhere se dar nahi lagta??" swayam commented

" nahi mai is duniya mein kissi se nahi darti..." sharon boasted

just then she saw a cockroach she jumped over swayam n hugged him...

" KRIA!!!! cockroach!!! " she shouted while hugging him

swayam smiled at her n joined the hug...n while caressing her back

" "sshhh...sharon its just a mere cockroach..."

"no its COCKROACH..."

" ha baba i know... iam here only na...waise abhi abhi mujhe koi keh raha tha ki koi duniya mein kisi se nahi darta " swayam suppressed his smile

" shutup bas mujhe cockroach se dar lagta hai..."

swayam felt his shirt wetting...as she dug her face in his chest n crying ...

"sharon maine kaha na..dekho cockroach bhi chala gaya..." he tensed

sharon lifted her head n was saw in swayam's eyes...she felt comfortable ..while swayam just smiled

"dont worry wo cockroach chala gaya..."

" wo wapis aa gaya toh???" she asked like a small kid

swayam cupped her face n said "nahi ayega , ayega toh main hu na , main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga.."

as soon as he uttered those words
sharon came back to senses ,she looked at swayam n broke the hug..

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rey reached the home...he shouted "KRIA!!! COME OUT U STUPID GIRL, WHAT THE HELL DO U THINK OF YOURSELF"

kria was in her room n just combing her hair after having a hot shower...she was wearing a top n a capri in which she was looking smoking hot...

rey just barged in her room...

kria turned back n was shocked to see rey n she knew he would be angry with her...

she tried to be normal...

" reyansh aap??"

" ha mai...can i know y u did this...?"

"wha.. what maine kya kiya??" she stammerred

" kya kiya main tumhe abhi batata hu...!! "

he tried to grab her but she dodge him n ran out of the room...

she ran through living room..n while running threw cushions on rey... rey chased her, they were running like tom n jerry with throwing whatever came in their way...she ran into kitchen n rey followed ...she threw some tomatoes on rey n offcourse rey too threw some ripped tomatoes on her, there too she dodge him n again ran in the living room...now they started the most epic cushion fight... the cushion tore n all cotton inside came out flying like feathers...

just then martin came he was shocked to see them fighting like kids...he ignored it as it was not new now..their silly fights were not new to him , he thought he will make them clean the mess in morning as he had a wonderful date with maria he didnt want to spoil his mood...n kriyansh were too busy to notice him...

he went to his lovely kitchen to get water n to his utter shock came his signature scream from kitchen "HEY BHAGWAAN" which was enough for kriyansh to bring back to earth...
they came running to kitchen only to see his angery face
seeing his face

"he did it"

"no she did it..." they blamed eachother in unison

" u both are impossible ..." martin gritted his teeth

martin held both of their wrist n dragged to rey's room..

on the way

"martin what r u doing...??" rey asked

" ya martin we r sorry..." kriya apologized while getting dragged by martin

but martin was no mood to listen to them after what they did to his life-his kitchen...

he just dragged them...kriyansh seeing what coming next...

" NO NO MARTIN NOOO" they both yelled in unison , apparently yelling is small word

n with that martin pushed kriyansh into rey's bathroom n said " this is your punishment" n locked the door from outside...


pheww!!

precap:
kriyansh in bathroom n swaron in lift

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Edited by chetna_yogini - 11 years ago
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guys dat was awsam !!!!!!!!!!!
i was rofling all d tym gosh !!!!!!!!!!!
bwahahhahahahaaha!!!!!!!!!!!!
now u betta update asap !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by upasna_mishti - 13 years ago
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This was absoluetly beautiful...I loved SwaRon cockroach scene and Kriyaansh pub scene..Lovely update guys...Thnks fr the Pm and update nxt soon !!

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